by Ms. Elsewhere » Saturday 16 May 2009 3:18:28am
[url=http://www.broomsticksandowls.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=174572#p174572]Subject: RPG: The Six Wizards[/url]
[quote="salemboy"]Damien looked out at the mountains. In the last order of events, his heartrate had tripled. Ouki was beautiful. Everything about her, her eyes, her face, her hair. Damien couldn't believe he was so lucky, that a woman this beautiful would fall for him.
He continued looking out at the mountains. He knew the sun would rise soon. They'd have to kill a bit of time before the theater opened. But he didn't want to kill time anywhere near the hideout or a city. Hmmm, then an idea came to him. "Hey, guys. We can't go to the movie just yet. It's too early in the morning, but I know a great place we can kill time. Wanna go?"
[No, it's not a tree.][/quote]
Hang on.. .consistency check!!! We have only just gathered at 830pm, in which time we had to sort out Neko, listen to Inu's speech, and have a fight. Plus, Ouki said this in only a few posts back while she was in her room...
"Ouki walked picked up a woollen sweater (jumper) and pulled it over her head. She walked across her room, opened her bedside drawer and pulled out a package of cigarettes. She took one out and placed it between her lips. She put the package back in the drawer and pulled out a lighter that was the shape of the Eifel Tower. Pocketing the lighter, and checking that her wand was in the other pocket, she lifted the shade on her window and climbed out into the street.
She leaned against the wall, lit up and breathed deeply. She let out the smoke slowly, spiralling it by flicking her tongue. She let the rest of her breath out in a long sigh. The street was oddly quiet for... she checked her watch. Nine o'clock. But then she heard voices coming out of the alley."
Should it be a little later than that? Like maybe midnight? Then they could go to the midnight showing, or a movie marathon where there are 3 movies in a row. They could even fall asleep in the theatre, and return to the hideaway in the early hours of the morning. Ouki could even rest her head on Damien's shoulder. It is important that they all get some sleep. Although I would LOVE to write a story about Vampires sometime too! All in good time.
So.. I suggest we edit my post to say 11:33pm, and Salemboy, you should edit your post to say, "If we hurry, we could make it for the movie marathon. Three movies in a row, and it starts at midnight. "
Also, I think Damien should at least voice to himself how he feels about Ouki flirting with his best friend! lol!
So that's my thoughts.
Oh ya, Fawkes was waiting for me to say something? Where is the post? Last I checked the last post was a thought?
No wait, I've read it again... LOL okay will post for Inu! :) (and here's me pointing out that my post wasn't read properly! I'm one to talk! ha... )
Just wanted to say, LOVE YA WORK GUYS! (That means, I love your work, as in, your literary genius)
xx