The Healer of Hearts

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The Healer of Hearts

Postby FawkesthePhoenix » Tuesday 11 March 2008 10:14:49pm

wrote this in the time i had left after finishing my math standardized tests *gag* i know its kind of weird, but please don't laugh!
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She found it in a cedar cage
The healing blanket of hearts
It was midnight blue, it looked brand new
Despite its obvious age

She had troubles, a rough road to walk
Needed a place to unload her fears
This starry night sky that made her soul fly
Was the perfect place to shed all her tears

She buried her face in its folds
It soothed like it had a heart of gold
She gave it her secrets, she gave it her hopes
Not knowing it was really showing her the ropes

And when it knew all about her
A girl came out and left without her
Now she was the cloth, silent as a moth
Quietly lamenting her heart

And now she waits in a cedar cage
The healing blanket of hearts
She's midnight blue, she looks brand new
Despite her now obvious age

And that is the stroy of me
Yes, I am the healer of hearts
Please come talk to me, and I'll help you see
That you'd make a better healer of hearts
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Re: The Healer of Hearts

Postby *Riley* » Sunday 22 June 2008 4:00:56am

I know this is a late response, but that was really good !! :jump:
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Re: The Healer of Hearts

Postby salemboy » Sunday 29 June 2008 2:10:22pm

I know this is an even later response, but that's really good. Me-sa like (If I may speak in Gungan dialect).
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Re: The Healer of Hearts

Postby FawkesthePhoenix » Sunday 29 June 2008 11:41:47pm

thanks, im not to sure what its actually about, but im thinking i might write a fairytale about it.
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Re: The Healer of Hearts

Postby *Riley* » Monday 30 June 2008 11:39:40am

Yay, be sure to let me read it ! :razz:
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