Potter Family

[*Riley*]

I'm writing about James' time at Hogwarts, and when Albus gets old enough to go I will write about him also, same goes with Lily.


CHAPTER ONE : Diagon Alley

It was morning and the sun was just setting over the pale blue sky , when a beautiful women with flaming red hair stepped out into the front lawn of their cosy cottage. Just as the woman reached the wonderfully green grass, the back door burst open , and a young boy with jet black hair came running across the lawn,
"I DIDN'T DO IT MUM ! I SWEAR IT WAS ALL ALBUS!" he said rather hysterically, for at that exact moment the door opened once again and a second figure with the exact features of his father ran towards his mum, his green eyes were shining with tears,
"Mum , James tried to feed me nosebleed nougats again!!"
"Both of you inside, your father will be back soon" the woman was actually quite amused but she couldn't show her kids this, she went back inside to see another child sitting at the table , but this time it was Lily , Ginny's youngest child, ginny always thought Lily looked extraordinary like herself.
"Mum, can i come into Diagon Alley?"she asked curiously,
"Yes but we are shopping for James, not you," she replied sternly
Lily ran upstairs and disappeared behind her bedroom door.
"James, are you ready to go,and Albus get down here and clean your mess up!" she shouted,
He slid down the banister and ran outside and jumped in the old Ford Angela.
"Hurry up Lily , Were leaving, Albus dad will be here soon so your going to be alone for awhile but just play with Arnold or something"
She walked out into the gravel covered driveway and got into the car, Lily came zooming out the front door and quickly jumped in the back.
Ten minutes passed and they parked outside a small dingy pub , that was invisible to muggles but not too wizards.
"Morning Mrs.Potter, Good day" Said a hunchback man she noticed was named Tom. She walked to the back of the back where a solid brick wall stood, she rapped the bricks and an arch appeared.
She walked through the archway, with her 2 children following behind her,
"Is that potters wife, you know the famous harry potter ?" people were pointing and staring but Ginny was used to this kind of attention and her children were looking proud as ever. The day passed slowly and even James was getting bored,
"We need to go to the apothecary and we have done" Ginny exclaimed checking James' equipment list.
When they got home, Harry was there and he was playing wizard chess with Albus. They soon all got tired and wandered off to bed, James tossed and turned because tomorrow was his first day at Hogwarts.......

That is the first chapter, if anyone thinks I should keep writing I will but anyone who wishes I stop because I might be tainting there image of Harry Potter please tell me, either way, I can take constructive criticism.

[DucksRMagical]

Good job! I like it.

[*Riley*]

Thanks Duckie, I am going to need some help on my rpg's so feel free to send me stuff that could do with improvements, and i would also like to disuss my plot with you. So drop me a message when you can.

CHAPTER 2 : Why The Rush ?

James awoke the next morning feeling drowsy and excited, for today was time to go to his new school , Hogwarts.

He flung the blankets off himself and ran down the stairs to see his mother and father already at the table, they weren't looking happy, now that James actually looked they looked anxious and serious.

"James get dressed we are going to Aunt Hermiones and Unce Ron's before we head off" his mother said.

James had enough sence not to argue, for his mother could be very forbidding, since the incident when James tried to make Albus do the unbreakable vowl, it was almost like his mother didn't trust him anymore.

He fumbled trying to get dressed he was pondering why he would be going to his aunt and uncles, when a pounding on the door startled him,

"James hurry up, we are leaving"

It was his father and he sounded shaken even a bit scared, and JAmes heard him say the same thing to Albus and Lily.

He ran down the stairs and saw his mother step tinto the fireplace and whoosh off into a startling colour of lime green flames,

"Why aren't we driving , dad ?"

"Tell you later" he replied checking his watch.

When Albus and LIly had vanished James stepped into the fire picked uo some floo powder and yelled,
"Yorkshire , London!"
He swirled and twisted in the tickling flames that licked up his sides,
the spinning stopped and he found himself in a beautiful cottage on the outskirts of a wizarding village.

"James ! Give your Aunt a hug !" Hermione screamed pulling James into a rib cracking hug,

"G'day mate" Ron said shaking James' hand but unlike his wife Ron looked happy.

From behind he could hear his mother and father whispering frantically,

"He is not old enough!" said his mother

"He has to know!"

"Fine , but you can tell him!"

His father called him over, and told him to sit down.

By now James was getting very worried, he had never seen his father like this before.

James had a sneaking suspicion that it was to do with Voldemort and the 2nd battle but he didnt say this because he thought his father knew that he was thinking it.

" James, when you head off for Hogwarts, there will be alot of mean pureblood kids, but don't get me wrong, some purebloods are kind just like other people, like your uncle ron, he is pureblood and you couldn't say a bad word against him."

" Now, there is one person in particular to watch out for , his name is Scor-

"Harry we have to go otherwise we will miss the train"

His father didn't need a second telling he said goodbye to Ron and Hermione and all of them , Lily, Albus, James, his mother and father, were squeezed in the fireplace and James' dad threw the powder and said something, but all james heard was a muffled sound, and they were zooming off once again.

His feet hit something hard and he saw that he was at a old train station where a big fireplace on show was standing , luckily no one notcied this strange scene, so they were able to race ovr to platform 9 1/2 , all James saw was people with cloaks with owls and trunks , he had nothing, then he remembered that hhis father had taken the time to take it all up to Hogwarts personally because he needed to speak to the headmaster anyway.

He saw a rough looking man with a mousy looking wife with a brown haied girl with bright green eyes, the girl and he rparents were now running which ws a solid barrier, James, yelled "STOP! , he thought they would crash , but they just went through the barrier like it was jelly.

James sudden outburst had caught many peoples attention and now he was even being pointed at and he felt his father shift rather uncomfortably.

He started to run at the barrier with his family at his side and he was at full speed, and he glided through the barrier....

[*Riley*]

I am going to stop writing this story , unless I get 4 peoples signatures,
because this is no point writing this sotry if no one reads it..

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Much appreciated , Riley.

[Phoenix15]

You should keep writing it. If you like it, then you should write it. You should not constrict your creative mind just b/c know one wants to read it b/c you never know. So go ahead and keep writing.

[*Riley*]

Well thank you ! I maybe could keep writing after all i do have an awesome plot !! mwahahaha lol

[DucksRMagical]

Keep writing it! I like it. And a lot of people read fan fic without posting after reading.

[*Riley*]

Yes, I am still active just writing more chapters and will be posting them soon. just in case you were wondering. which i think you were..

[Ms. Elsewhere]

Whoa Riley you're making heaps of posts now! And I agree.. keep writing!!

[*Riley*]

Finally I have finished the next chapter lol it took me ages because of school and personal life !! sorry for the wait...

Chapter 3 ; Through The Barrier .

He was standing on a platform which he didn't recognize, since he got his invitation to Hogwarts he had been awaiting this day..

Nothing he had ever seen was a magnificent as this, a huge scarlet steam train which was crowded with children of all ages and parents farewelling them or either getting kissed all over .

James turned his head and saw his father shaking hands with a man he knew as Lucius Malfoy, his father never liked the man but they turned good after the final battle.

"Psst James over here..."

James heard a whisper from behind a luggage rack, he strode over behind th luggage and he saw his younger brother Albus.

"What do you want Al the train's about to leave!"

"I just wanted to give you this.." Whispered Albus holding out a shaggy piece of parchment.

"Is that-"

Albus nodded his head,

"I solemnly swear I am up to no good" as soon as these words were voiced writing was creeping out from all corners.

"Dad gave it to me for Christmas and Lily got given the Cloak, I know you would use it more than me so make sure you let me use it when i get to Hogwarts " he said hurriedly.

James smiled, he had never actually felt so much of a connection between Albus and himself, but he would never say this out loud of fear of him actually hearing.

"Thank you so much Al, we will share it but this year I think Hogwarts will be waiting for my tricks, after all we are Dad's sons..."

"ALL ABOARD !"

"uick Al I gotta go," and with that he hugged Albus and ran off to say farewell to his parents.

"Be careful, don't hand your homework in late, stay away from trouble and don't mix in with the wrong crowd."

He hugged them and boarded the train, choosing where to sit was the worst bit, all of the compartments were full and everyone was following him asking about Harry.

He finally found a compartment where a mousy looking girl and a black haired boy was sitting.

"Mind if I sit here?"

"Err, umm, are you Harry Potters son?" the girl managed to stutter.

Edited to fix spelling/grammar.

[*Riley*]

Sorry about the last sentence I wasn't paying much attention then and my spelling is herrendous , SORRY If a mod could edit it, that would be much thanked !!

[DucksRMagical]

Great chapter! Do you want me to edit all the spelling or just the last sentence? And what is the last sentence supposed to say? It kind of looks like the last word got cut off or something.

[Ms. Elsewhere]

Heya Riley, great Fan Fiction! I love the whole family twist to it. Just a few things but I know u can't edit it, only the moderators can. (but I hope u're saving this on your computer because I wrote a fan fiction and was part of a wicked role play in another forum and then it crashed! I can't recover anything! But anyway, it's platform 9 3/4 and u wrote 9 1/2. otherwise, this fan fiction is going in a fun direction!

[*Riley*]

Just edit all the mistakes and completely cut of the last sentence if you please Duckie..

And thanks Distortia, i guess i wasn't thinking much when i wrote it, i was sooo tired . Excuses....

Thanks Guys !!

[*Riley*]

Hello, my chapters are not going to be long so be prepared for dissapointment.

Chapter 4: Off To Hogwarts

"Yes, I'm James Potter, son of the great Harry Potter... nephew of the equally awesome Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger" he said proudly

The snigger behind him told him everything he needed to know, only the irst ten minutes on te train and he had made an enemy.

"Hello Pothead nice to be in your lucious company" he jeered

"Nice to meet you to"

"The names Scorpious...Scorpious Malfoy"

A sudden jolt struck James' heart, Malfoy? Wasn't that who his father had ben mentioning before?

"How's dad, kept out of Azkaban ?" spat James immediatley becoming aggitated.

Scorpious made a suden movement towards his robe pocket, and before James' knew it he hand a wand stuck between his eyes.

"Scorpious, leave...now!" a shrill voie said from behind James

"Protecting your boyfriend, are you Longbottom?" he snarled

He felt another wave of shock pass him, Longbottom, Nevilles daugher!

James whipped his hand towards Scorpious' wand and snapped it clean in half.

"Potter!!" he screamed

"No use know Malfoy, now what were you saying about boyfriends?"

He turned and sprinted away and to the Slytherin compartment and immediately started showing the broken remains of his 'wand' they were staring in awe and James knew at once, he was to be in Gryffindor.