harry potter and the dark scar

[inaya]

ok i just thought i might as well do my own story on whats gonna happen in hp 7 ok,

Chapter 1

It has been known the house murdered its owners, as the bodies of two people lay on the floor that evening, no one didn’t know why, or how, but that evening it was said to be the house stood as the only witness to be their at the very time when the Potters died and their son to havevanished at the very moment on the discovery of the bodies.

Some say it was the neighbours fault some say it was their fault that they should have been there to help them, the police had no clue on what had happened that night or how they have died but all they knew is that they died suddenly, nobody knew, all they witnessed is the green flash of light and a scream that awoke them that very night when the Potters died.

That very day the bodies of the Potters where examined and tested but yet nothing came to conclusion how they died, the bodies where placed inside a coffin and they both where buried near a church, where they rested in peace. Their house have been locked and the windows were covered in wood to prevent anyone sneaking in, it remained deserted, as no one knew the story the night when the Potters happen to die, the mystery of the Potter boy remained, the neighbours thought that he may have escaped or may have been kidnapped, he was only one years old. Over the few days the polices where trying to investigate the neighbours about the Potters and if they had any connection to the murder, a man that happened to live a few houses away from the Potters said

‘Oh, they were such good people, always happy, never did I experience such tragedy like this in my life, but my heart goes out for the boy where ever he is I do hope that he is safe’

Other neighbours refused to open their doors to the police because they feared that they will be murdered like them, the police came to an conclusion that they will never find who murdered the Potters the only way was to have the murderer come and confess, it remained to be an unsolved case and happened to be on of the most mysterious cases ever known to the policies.

For sixteen years the house remained as it was when the day the bodies of the Potters was discovered, one late night when the moon shone brightly, a faint pop was heard, a person happened to have appeared out of the clear. The person stood in front of the house and stared up at it, as the moon progressed its light reflected the features of the person, she happened to be a very young women, with her eyes big and grey which that twinkled in the light, she looked to be pale, and with her hood covering her head she looked like a ghost. She opened the gate to the front porch of the house, as she did she heard a light cough behind her, her hand slipped into her cloak, but when she turned around a man stood in front of her with a bowler hat, he said in low tone voice

‘I wouldn’t go there if I were you’

‘Why not?’ she said lightly

‘Because that’s where the Potters happened to die, did you know not’

‘Oh, no I didn’t, do you happen to know what happened here?’ she asked

‘Well it’s a long story and very strange indeed, one night I hear this scream and the next I see two bodies laying there on the floor with blank eyes, very strange’

‘Do you happen to know where the boy is?’

‘No I have no clue, very curious for having the boy disappear, why?’

‘Oh, I was just curious, do you happen know where their buried?’

‘Over there next to the church, near the statue of the angel, do you happen to be a relative of theirs?’

‘Well yes I am’

‘Well nice to meet you Ms’-

‘Ms Jane’ they shook hands and bade farewell to each other, when the man went, Jane turned around and headed towards the church that happened to be a few blocks away.

When Jane arrived at the graveyard she headed towards the distant figure of the angel, as she approached the angel her eyes filled with tears, there lay the graves of James and Lilly Potter with their name and dates of their birth to the their deaths engraved on the headstones, as she came closer, she looked up at the angle that happened to look over them, it shone in the moon light, with its wing widen, she looked down at the graves and said

‘I’m so sorry, I should have told you, I promise you that I’ll find Harry, and if I have to sacrifice myself I’ll kill Voldemort and make him pay for what he did to you, I’m so sorry’ she kissed both of her hands and place both of them on the two headstones of James and Lilly Potter.

As she was about to leave she looked up at the angel and said

‘Look after them for me won’t you’ and the angel gave her a slight wink, and with that she wiped her eyes and disappeared.

Chapter 2
The scene kept on playing in Harry’s mind, Dumbledore being hastened to his death


‘Severus, please...’


‘Avada Kedavra’ a green light directly headed towards Dumbledore’s chest and like a doll he fell through the window, Harry screamed


'NO!!!!!!!'


He took in deep breaths, and was drenched in sweat, like all the previous nights, he had been having the same dream of Dumbledore hit with the killing curse, as Harry got up, he searched for his glasses, and when he found them he quickly put them on, and looked around his room, Hedwig was still in her cage wide awake as Harry knew it was due to the fact he woke up screaming, and his room looked to be in a mess.


The whole of summer Harry stayed in his room, he only went out of his room for breakfast, lunch and to the toilet, he didn’t bother having dinner as to his Aunt serving vegetables, which Harry hated.


His room was in mess, spell books and sweet wrappers being scattered all over the floor, his trunk lay open revealing his cauldron and his Gryffindor uniform, his muggle clothes lay on his chair and his thoughts were the main thing to think about.


Harry knew the scene that he kept on having in his dream was something to think about, but what he thought, surely Snape killed him because he made the vow to Darco's mother to help Draco in his mission and not to lose his face in front of the death eaters, and main of all not to betray Voldemort, but something didn’t add up but he knew one person that could help him figure the scene out, and that was Hermione.


There was another problem as well, Ron and Hermione were going to come along with him and not go back to Hogwarts, and help him look for the Horcruxes, as Harry thought of this he ran his hand through his hair.


There was a lot to think about, first there was Voldemort and Dumbledore, second was Snape and Hogwarts and third was the Horcruxes and Ron and Hermione, there was so much to think about and to all of that a big thought came upon him, his uncle.


His Uncle was the main person to think about, when Harry arrived one month early and was at the doorstep of Number 4, his uncle was shouting and storming at him on why he came back, Harry tried to explain but his uncle just couldn’t understand, as the days went ahead, and when Harry’s thoughts came to level with him, he thought that life was defiantly going to be hard.
He got up and stretched and looked at the time, it was 3:00 in the morning; he wasn’t feeling sleepy at all, he glanced outside, the light outside from the lamppost suddenly turned off, he went over to his bedroom window to see what caused it, all of the streets lamps started to go out, this was very strange to Harry, he turned around and got his wand from under his pillow, what ever had caused the lights to go out, was defiantly not the wind or by the electricians that’s for sure, Harry waited for the lights to come back, but it didn’t, he waited for at least 15minutes before he was sure it was due to magic.


Then Harry heard it, someone on the streets, was calling out, someone was in trouble Harry thought, whoever it was, they were in pain, as Harry tried to think, no one was going to help this person, no one, everybody in Private Drive was fast asleep except him, now Harry wished he was asleep, this defiantly meant that it was him who was going to help this unknown person, but as he was thinking this, he heard the person give another yell of pain.


Harry jumped and went over to his bedroom door and wrenched it open, he knew that if his uncle found out that Harry woke up in the middle of the night and went to help a person that was in pain as well as leave the front door of the house open, meant to Harry that he was not going to see the daylight ever again. This made Harry shiver all around, he walked down the stairs one at a time, pausing at each stair, and hearing if the Dursleys heard him go down the stairs when they didn’t Harry jumped lightly over the rest of the stairs and landed like a feather onto the floor of the entrance hall, he forgot to put on slippers let alone where his trainers, this meant that he had to go on bare foot, to help this person ,there was no way he was going to go back upstairs and put on something the risk was to dangerous.


Harry gently took a two step towards the door, and when he made in one peace he opened the front door to the house gently, he steeped out on to the front porch and closed the door gently, leaving a slight gap between the door and the wall, when Harry turned back, he walked up the rest of the front garden and jumped over the gate, as lightly as he could, and when he was on the pavement, it felt as though to Harry he was on a beach somewhere.


The floor felt smooth, the pavement was warm, now what made Harry think, is where was this person, all he needed was a sign or a yell if that could help, then as though the person had read him, they gave another yell of pain, it came from the end of Private Drive.


This seemed weird to Harry how comes no one is hearing this person yell except him, oh well Harry thought, at least he had his wand, that mattered, even if he had to do magic under age at least there will be reason to it, Harry hoped.


He made his way towards the end of Private Drive, it seemed so wearied to Harry, all these years he lived here, he never came out of the house at this time wearing pajama and on bare foot.
as Harry made his way down towards the end of Private Drive, Harry thought he was being watched, a chill ran down his back, he tried to look around but no one seemed to be looking out of their windows, all of the windows curtains were drawn that’s what Harry thought, the street seemed to be deserted and completely dark without the lights, the only source of light seemed to the moon’s, it showed Harry’s way without needing his wand.


As Harry made it to the end of Private Drive, no one seemed to be there, there was no sign of life anywhere or the yell of pain, but Harry still had his wand out on his right hand, if this was some kind of trick that involved him, he was ready to strike.


As he came to an end of Private Drive he saw someone on the road, he ran across the road towards the person, as he did he said,

'Lumos’ and his wand inginated and there he saw the person who screamed.

[inaya]

i just thought i might post it and see if you guys like it

[Q.Araignee]

Wow- I really like it. The nighmares are a good touch, and Vernon's general hatred of Harry escalating. Are there any more chapters? I'd love to read them if there are...

[inaya]

i just thought of it just out of the blue you know, if you would like to me to post more i would be delighted to

[Q.Araignee]

If it's not too much trouble, I'd love to read more.

[inaya]

Not only did he see the person who screamed but he also saw two other people, they lay on the floor still as a statue with blank eyes, Harry knew who those two people were, he seen them last at Hogwarts, both are brother and sister, Amycus and Alceto, death eaters.
Harry looked across them and looked at the person who screamed, Harry knew it was a women by the long sleek black hair, that lay in a mess, she was lying on her stomach with her wand in her right hand, tightly gripped, and her head bowed down, as Harry got closer, she looked up and saw Harry, for a fraction of a second Harry thought he was going to be attacked, but then the women raised herself from the floor and stood up.
Harry didn’t move, he stood there and watched the women’s progress, she looked at the other two that lay on the floor and said in a dangerous voice
‘I told you can never kill me’
She looked at Harry and moved closer to him, she studied him hard, as she did, with her wand she removed the hair that covered the scar on Harry’s forehead, and looked at it confusingly, then she moved back and said to him lightly
‘So you must be the famous Harry Potter’
‘Er, yes’ said Harry confusingly, he looked back down at the other two that lay on the floor
‘You don’t need to worry about them, their dead’ said the women looking at Harry, he looked at her, Harry couldn’t see much of her due to the light but he could see fragments of her, as he was about to say something, she said
‘Unusual that scar, isn’t it?’ she asked awkwardly
‘Er, yeah’ said Harry, he had no clue why she was saying this, but one thing that was troubling Harry was that why where there death eaters here in Private Drive, when he looked at the women, she was still staring at the scar on his forehead.
‘But why out of all people you, certainly there should be a reason, or is it because prophecy was made for you get that scar’ she said, Harry didn’t say anything, he thought to himself, how could she know about the prophecy, surely Dumbledore said that he and Harry himself knew about it and no one else, Harry knew that Hermione and Ron wouldn’t say another soul about this, he trusted them, if this person knew anything about the prophecy, Harry knew he landed himself in danger, as the thoughts zoomed through Harry, the women said to herself
‘Sometimes I really wish he kept his mouth shut, but unfortunately I had to listen what he said, and read what he wrote, is no wonder why the stupid elf was hated by him’
‘I’m sorry what did you say?’ asked Harry
‘No worries, come on we need to get out of here, before the rest of them pack in’ she said
‘What rest of them?’ Harry asked
‘The rest of the death eaters, there here, right now, we need to get out of here before were caught’ she said looking behind her
‘But who are you? Why are you helping me?’ Harry asked, he had so many questions running through him, first he hears this scream, second there are death eaters and now he has to run away, he was confused, he looked at the women expecting an answer, but he didn’t get one, she grabbed his wrist and pulled him up ahead Private Drive, Harry tried to fight it off, but he couldn’t, she gripped him hard on his wrist, he was being dragged along his own street, as Harry tried to remove his hand away from hers, she stopped and said dangerously
‘You have a choice either you run away and fight another day or die trying to fight, I’ll introduce myself later, not now, we need to get out of here, all you need to know is that my name is Jane and have trust in me’ she let go of Harry’s hand.
Harry rubbed his wrist, whoever this person was, he had no choice to trust her, if indeed there were death eaters here, Harry had to go, he knew even if he had Jane he couldn’t face them, he said to her
‘Why are you helping me?’ Harry asked suddenly, he was feeling angry he didn’t need any help, he could face the death eaters by himself, Harry was now deeply regretting that he shouldn’t have woken up and came out of the house, he should have stayed where he was and waited fro the death eaters come to him, as he thought this Jane said
‘Take it as though I owe a favor to your parents’

Chapter 3
Jane turned around and headed up Private Drive, Harry stood behind, he didn’t move, she knew about his parents, she owed a them a favor, this seemed confusing for Harry, ass he stood there still Jane called out
‘Are going to come or do I have to force you’ Harry followed ahead of Jane, he thought to himself again, if this person knew his parents, what favor did his parents do for her to return it, Harry started to rub his wrist again, with the blackout, he couldn’t see anything, but he knew that Jane was ahead.
As they kept on walking up ahead of Private Drive Harry suddenly knew that they passed door number four, he stood there and thought to himself, if only he could get upstairs and quickly send a letter to Ron and tell him what’s going on let alone get something to wear as it was getting a bit cold, as he saw Jane going up ahead, he called
‘I’m going to get something to wear’
Jane stoped half-way without turning around she said
‘Hurry up, we have no time, the death eaters will be here soon enough’ Harry heard only fragments of what she said, he already started to head up the front porch, as he did, he quickly opened the front door, the Dursleys were still asleep, and so was Private drive.
As Harry got into the entrance hall, he looked around, nothing has changed, and he took the first three steps of the stairs, Harry stood still and listened carefully, he took the rest of stairs one by one, stopping at each one to see if he woken the Dursleys, when he reached the upstairs corridor, he headed to his room, carefully taking each step.
Harry got into his room safe and without any sound, he headed to his trunk and got out his, jacket and his trainers quickly put them on and headed to his desk, he grabbed his quill and a tiny parchment that was left on the desk and quickly wrote


Dear Ron

Something strange is happening here, I have no time to explain, all I know is that there are death eaters here, and this women called Jane is with me, I don’t know much about her, she says she owes my mum and dad a favor, don’t worry about me, just find out who she is, and make sure that you reply as soon as you can and don’t come and pick me up I won’t be here.
From Harry


Harry quickly re- read the scribbled words, he knew it wasn’t enough information, at least Ron would know that he wouldn’t able to pick him up, as Harry opened the cage of Hedwig, she looked at him confusingly, Harry wanted to explain but there wasn’t enough time, as though Hedwig knew what he thought, she got out of her cage and put out one of her legs, Harry attached the small parchment,
‘Give this to Ron as soon as you get there’ Hedwig clicked her beak, and Harry opened his window, she flew out of his room ,as Harry saw her progress, he looked down, and saw Jane looking up at him, furious.

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