Slytherin's Vengeance: Part 1

[Alicia Spinnet]

okay this is just my first fanfiction so don't hurt me if its bad.

Chapter 1
"Wormtail, Voldemort was nothing. Work for me now. Come on. I have powers Riddle never had..."
This strange voice chilled Wormtail greatly, but he had brains enough to know this was an oppurtunity to become one of the great evil wizards. "Ah yes, great Salazar Slytherin. I will help you then."
There was silence for a moment. "Bring me...to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry then."
Wormtail silently nodded in obedience.

Miles away at Number 4 Privet Drive, Harry Potter sat at his desk, dreaming of his return to Hogwarts. It was quite early in the morning, the sun had not risen yet. A heavy fog veiled most of the little town Harry Potter lived in, making it difficult to see any movement at all.
At the moment, Harry was at peace. He slept, not worrying what horrible mistreatment the Dursleys might do to him later in the day.
It was a chilly day, especially for summer. It had been like this for a while now.
Silently, a snowy owl glided through the air and landed upon the slightly open window sill in Harry's room. It rapped its foot softly on the glass. Harry stirred.
He moaned quite loudly and put on his glasses. The snowy owl named Hedwig stood upon his windowsill, a shining red scar upon its cheek.
"What happened, Hedwig?" Harry whispered, as he tiptoed to the sill. Hedwig hooted a disturbed hoot.
Hedwig enjoyed going out during the night to hunt down rats, but never had he returned hurt. "I know." Harry told himself.
He opened up his spellbook, but then hesitated. "I can't perform magic during the summer, can't I?" He said it more to Hedwig than himself.
Harry glanced at another sleeping owl on his dresser. This was a very small, pig-like owl. "Wake up, Pig." Harry told the owl. It made a grumpy hoot, but flew onto Harry's shoulder anyway.
"Time to go back to Ron's. Now, I need you to deliver an owl also."
Harry picked up a half inked quill and started writing upon the back of a piece of parchment he was using to list wizard items he wanted.

Dear Ron,
Hedwig returned from hunting today. Not much to say except that Hedwig returned with a scar on his cheek. It's the first time it's happened. D'you think your dad has any tips? Reply back, asap.
Harry

With that, Harry rolled up the piece of parchment and tied it to Pigwidgeon's tiny leg. He opened up the window all the way and let Pig fly through. Harry watched the tiny owl fly away and disappear upon the horizon.


What ya think? please reply back with your thoughts good or bad

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[Alicia Spinnet]

Two figures walked slowly across the damp grass, going northwards, towards..."Hogwarts!" one of them said. Large pillars of rock stood all around them. The grass they walked on slowly changed to a shallow swamp.
Crickets chirped and hopped away as they approached. Both wore black cloaks. A light wind blew off the hood of one of them. It revealed not a human face, but a cross between a human's face and that of a snake's.
Salazar Slytherin stared calmly across the swamp and thought back of the recent revival of himself...

Wormtail clumsily carried a cauldron in front of him. Inside it was a snake, an orange bubbling potion, a wand, and a robe.
"Have you brought them all?" a cold voice asked impatiently. "Yes," Wormtail said. He would've said more, like how he almost dropped the cauldron, but the ice cold voice somehow didn't let him speak as much he would've liked.
Suddenly red snake-like eyes appeared in the darkness of the abandoned building. The eyes peered into the cauldron and moved up and down to signal a nod of approval.
"Now get to work." Snapped the voice. Wormtail picked up his own wand that lay lifelessly upon the floor.
He whispered a few enchanments and the snake melted into nothing more but a green powder.
There was a sudden sniffing noise. "Ahh...powder of Salazar..."
Wormtail poured the powder into the potion. It turned a deep crimson red. He then stirred it with the other wand. When it was well-stirred, Wormtail forced the wand until it was wholly inside the bottle of potion. He quickly put a cork on top. "The potion's ready, m-master."
"Good, now get the living soil in which I need..." the voice said, apparently satisfied.
Wormtail scooped up some dirt and set it down upon the floor. He uncorked the potion and poured it into the cauldron. He hastily threw the robe into the cauldron and then...poured the dirt into the cauldron.
A loud explosion shocked Wormtail; he thought something had gone wrong...but then a tall, green figure emerged from the cauldron.
"At last...life once more. The world shall feel my vengeance!" Salazar Slytherin cried.
Wormtail whimpered before him. Slytherin turned his head toward him. "Ah yes, Peter. As a reward for helping me return to the living, you get...(and now Salazar stared at where Wormtail's other hand should've been) your hand back."
Slytherin waved his wand and Wormtail at last had a second hand again.

hmm? what do you think?

[Paul]

Brilliantly written Alicia. I'm wondering how Voldemort will react to Wormtail becoming Salazar's servant. And what happened to hurt Hedwig?

[Alicia Spinnet]

about hedwig, I'll get to later its gonna be kindof like the two towers if youve read it. I'll switch between Harry and Salazar until the two of em meet. get it?

[Paul]

I haven't read The Two Towers but I've seen the movie and thought it was one of the best movies ever! I know the type of thing you mean though, and I like the way that type of fiction works.

[Sacred Guardian]

that was really good, your a good writer

[IRideAFirebolt]

It was good but it sounded very much like the revival of voldemort.

[han lin]

really good. well done keepo it up amigo