Summer Vacation
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Summer Vacation
by harry_loves_ginny » Monday 18 July 2005 2:09:34am
this is my first fan fic piece of work so please be honest in my skills
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Summer Vacation
by harry_loves_ginny » Monday 18 July 2005 2:29:07am
As The Hogwarts Express makes it's way to London, Harry looks out the window wondering whether he'd ever see Hogwarts again.
"Harry, what's wrong?" Ginny asked.
"Nothing" He said
"Come off it" Ron said "What's really wrong?"
"I was just thinking this may be the last time we see dumbledore..." Harry found it difficult to admit that dumbledore actually died.
"Harry, whats that?" Hermione said pointing to his cloak.
"My cloak?" harry said gingerly
"No, Harry, there's a letter in your cloak"
Harry picked up his cloak and saw a letter fall out. In slanted writing it said Harry Potter. This was dumbledore's writing. He opened it up and it read ...
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Dear Harry,
If you get this letter than sadly, i have past away. Although you know that you do have to visit your aunt and uncle for at least one day, i have 4 tickets to a beach about 50 miles from hogsmeade. I want you to bring whoever you want. There is a few enchantments at the place you will be visiting... you can only get in the place if you wear one of four stones i have included in this letter
I hope that you have a wonderful summer and all i ask of you is to take Fawkes with you. He always loved the beach. There is also a small whistle included to call upon him.
Best wishes,
Albus Dumbledore
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Harry showed the letter to Ginny then to Ron and Hermione.
"Do you think the 3 of you can go?" Harry asked
"Harry, what's wrong?" Ginny asked.
"Nothing" He said
"Come off it" Ron said "What's really wrong?"
"I was just thinking this may be the last time we see dumbledore..." Harry found it difficult to admit that dumbledore actually died.
"Harry, whats that?" Hermione said pointing to his cloak.
"My cloak?" harry said gingerly
"No, Harry, there's a letter in your cloak"
Harry picked up his cloak and saw a letter fall out. In slanted writing it said Harry Potter. This was dumbledore's writing. He opened it up and it read ...
..................................................
Dear Harry,
If you get this letter than sadly, i have past away. Although you know that you do have to visit your aunt and uncle for at least one day, i have 4 tickets to a beach about 50 miles from hogsmeade. I want you to bring whoever you want. There is a few enchantments at the place you will be visiting... you can only get in the place if you wear one of four stones i have included in this letter
I hope that you have a wonderful summer and all i ask of you is to take Fawkes with you. He always loved the beach. There is also a small whistle included to call upon him.
Best wishes,
Albus Dumbledore
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Harry showed the letter to Ginny then to Ron and Hermione.
"Do you think the 3 of you can go?" Harry asked
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continued
by harry_loves_ginny » Monday 18 July 2005 2:30:28am
i will continue later... k? tell me what you thought of it
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by Bergdorfblonde » Monday 18 July 2005 10:55:57am
looks really nice... I m waiting for the continuation 
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by xXxFawkesSong » Monday 18 July 2005 9:43:34pm
Sweet deal. I liked it 
Hurry up writing the next part 
Hurry up writing the next part -
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by Scarlet Lioness » Wednesday 20 July 2005 2:00:30am
Awesome keep going...
Looking forward to the rest!!!~~~
Looking forward to the rest!!!~~~
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by Scarlet Lioness » Wednesday 20 July 2005 2:01:05am
Awesome keep going...
Looking forward to the rest!!!~~~
Looking forward to the rest!!!~~~
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by crystallised_pineapple » Sunday 24 July 2005 1:59:15pm
yeah i like the way this is going... keep going i'm enjoying it
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continued soon
by harry_loves_ginny » Wednesday 27 July 2005 8:28:08pm
i will continue this later... i am going to right the next segmint in microsoft works then paste it here
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by child of darkness » Saturday 30 July 2005 6:37:33pm
good start but look out for tense mistakes such as passed instead of past. Sorry to be commenting on the small things it's just the way i am. A good story and i look forward to the next art keep it up
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continuation (finally!!!)
by harry_loves_ginny » Thursday 8 September 2005 9:44:41pm
Ginny: Well, if mum lets us
Hermione: Absulutly!!!
Harry: Ok, it's settled
Hermione: Hey Ron! Look at that outside the compartment!
Ron: What? Oh ya, (goes red) you guys... um... stay here.
They walk out
Harry: Ok... Whats up with them?
Ginny: I dunno
Ginny starts snogging harry
They here hermione and ron come 5 mins later
Harry: So, umm... (goes red) what was all that about?
Ron: Fred and George had a...
Harry: Fred and George arn't here
Hermione: What Ron MEANT (glaring at Ron) is that Luna had a (mumbles)
Ginny: What?
Ron: a (mumbles)
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They arrive at the cottage (next time)
Hermione: Absulutly!!!
Harry: Ok, it's settled
Hermione: Hey Ron! Look at that outside the compartment!
Ron: What? Oh ya, (goes red) you guys... um... stay here.
They walk out
Harry: Ok... Whats up with them?
Ginny: I dunno
Ginny starts snogging harry
They here hermione and ron come 5 mins later
Harry: So, umm... (goes red) what was all that about?
Ron: Fred and George had a...
Harry: Fred and George arn't here
Hermione: What Ron MEANT (glaring at Ron) is that Luna had a (mumbles)
Ginny: What?
Ron: a (mumbles)
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They arrive at the cottage (next time)
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