I need help!!!

[Tanuki]

I know this is kind of rough sicne so many of you are doing your own work, but I'd like some help with this.

I'm working on a project for the fans. A story that takes place after Harry Potter that stays true to the coninutiy, with all new Characters

A scientist works in secret for years to develop something monstrous. Using DNA from great and imfamous wizards, he hopes to create a new kind of wizard, one capable of breaching the laws our world is based on. In teh spring of 1990, his experiment succeeds, but it never reaches the light of day and all evidence is lost as the story of Harry Potter enters the forefront.

In the year 2001, his accomplishments finally begin to recieve attention as word of hidden ministry activity are revealed, and one name starts becoming popular.; M.D. or Most Dangerous class wizards are said to exist, and they are a threat to everything people have been working towards sicne the fall of Voldermort. In the fall of that year, four boys enter Hogwarts school. They are all seperated into their specific houses, but a link of friendship has been forged that cannot be broken even by the sorting hat.

One of these young men bears the sad designation of M.D.W. 13a and this is his tale. He will suffer at the hands of those who want to see nothing more than his death. He will battle Dark wizards, and eventually, teh instinct to fight that plagues all of his brothers scattered throughout the globe. This instinct is what will draw them to each other. He will come into contact with those who defeated the Dark Lord Voldermort and in turn will find things out about himself and his friends that very well might just do what they claim he can do

The Cast descirptions. Names and other things will be accepted almost unquestionably.

Professor Bicicle - The only character I have solidly named. He is simply the new Defense against the Dark arts teacher. He loves justice, even if he is a little wierd. He seems fond of professor Snape, even if the feeling of friendship isn't returned

M.D.W XIII-a: (Gryphindor) the thirteenth genetic construct of Doctor Faust. He is something like Harry, but his adopted mother is a witch. However, his interaction with the magical world is limited. He is a handsome youth and he seems nice enough, yet there is something lurking under the surface that seems to rise whenever he is close to being in danger.

Friend 1 : (Slytherin) Rich, cunning, arrogant, and yet still likable enough. His family is rich and he wants to prove his money isn't what makes him great. Be believes MDW XIII-a (Someone name him!) to be both worthy friend and rival. He is especially good at summoning monsters from hundreds of miles away, if not from different planes of existence entirely

Friend 2: (Hufflepuff) Irish, energetic, a wee bit dumb, small statured, and as strong as they come, this young wizard is intensely loyal, and always eager to do just about everything. He isn't as naturally talented as some, but he can compensate for anything with application and drive

Friend 3: (Ravenclaw) Welsh, kindly, calm, a little myopic at times. He seems to like plants and will use them for almost any magical application. Little seems to phase him; though he has a desire to surpass his idol, the legenday Hogwarts student, Hermione Grnger

Girl: (Gryphindor) A second year who crawls into our heroes bed the first night and takes to sleeping there every night from then on. She's stubborn, intelligent, fearless, and adorable. Even though she is older than MDW XIII-a he gets taller than her rather quickly. She is eager for Care of Magical creatures

The Bad guy: M.D.W. XIV-b, the last child created in Faust's lab. He is unknown to many, having managed to dissapear a long time ago. He does not come to the fore until much later. It is believed he has some relationship to Lord Voldermort

M.D.W. I - XII-d. Our heroes "brothers". They havebeen spread throughout the world

- 1 cold emotionally. Has two magical eyes in place of human ones. He is located in south africa as a rich man's son

- 2 Genius intellect, but borderline narcaleptic. He hails from Buenos Aires

-3 The only female. She's good with scrolls and sutra magic. Her home is India

-4 The wisest. the only one to break the batle instinct. He is a pacifist. He is Bulgarian

-5 Ambitious, and loudmouthed. He invented familiar medium magic whereby with the right peace of material, a wand is no longer necessary.. He's American. He joins 14's faction in the hope of learning more about the structure of the universe and its fundamental effect on 14's experiments

-6 Sadistic and bigoted. He family booted him onto the Russian streets when he was just a child at the first sign of trouble. He had many bad experiences wth muggles before being picked up by 14's faction. He is the first to join him

-7 Creepy, yet he always draws women. He had some bad luck when someone hunted him at His school in Ireland and destroyed it. Those that remained were transferred to Hogwarts. He is the first 13 meets and the furst he fights. This somehow brings them together. He is scottish

-8 Large, stupid, powerful; it is not hard to guess there might be giant's blood in there. When he is having problems with school and fitting in at his size, 14 picks him up and recruits him. He is french

-9 a painter. He loves to create, though lately dark premonitions have been making his paintings more violent and disturbing. He hails from Ruwanda.

-10 One who is giften in the workings of transfiguration and the mental arts. He is from Japan and likes to wax poetically while staring at the trees, a little wierd in England

-11 One who loves music. He usually tries to avoid trouble, though his music may occassionally take on a life of its own. He is German

-12 Shallow and a little vain. This beautiful boy joins 14 to be on the winning side acording to him. He's Finnish

Feel free to add more and help me work on names

[Mistress Siana]

Strange idea but intriguing. Kind reminds me of X-Men.
How do they genetically engineer wizards? There must be a good reason for it. How long after the 7th book does it take place? What happened to the 'present' characters. What are they doing? Who is their enemy? Who's their creator? You said the main character is a clone of Sirius Black, whom are the others based on?
It's somewhat hard to come up with ideas for characters if I don't have a detailed plot, at least that's what I think. Have you already thought of where your plot is heading, what will happed to certain characters etc?

[Tanuki]

Strange idea but intriguing. Kind reminds me of X-Men.
How do they genetically engineer wizards? There must be a good reason for it. How long after the 7th book does it take place? What happened to the 'present' characters. What are they doing? Who is their enemy? Who's their creator? You said the main character is a clone of Sirius Black, whom are the others based on?
It's somewhat hard to come up with ideas for characters if I don't have a detailed plot, at least that's what I think. Have you already thought of where your plot is heading, what will happed to certain characters etc?

Sirius, Voldermort, Tonks, the Weasley's and a few others point out that they have powers gained through inheritance. Sort of like Naruto's world's bloodline limits. It is a special capability that is extra to certain families. Added to that is the idea that certain physical characteristics are determined by genetics; magic is too. Therefore, I figured that someone with the will to could magically weed out faults and other physical imperfections in genes and then use magic to create a better wizard. A stronger wizard.

Using abilities he chose to tack onto their genetic structure. He's also been taking samples from very strong wizards, like Voldermort and Dumbledore and adding these to the stews.

He also added in data inscribed into the dna to create extra abilites such as summoning accross a dimensional divide, or enough power to physically deflect Aveda Kadaveda. All this, using magic of course. The kind of wizard it creates is a monster power wise, thus the tital M.D.; it stands for Most Dangerous

This kind of experimentation is higher than alchemy and hated above all dark arts. It is absolutely forbidden. More than an unforgivable curse, they are unmentionable spells, forbidden from ever being read or used. Forget Azkaban, to use these spells mean instant death if you are found out. Faust only continues to live because he can't die for some reason. This also ties to the idea that even dementors are frightened of him.

The storyline is pretty simple, four friends in Hogwarts living in a world only recently freed from the grip of evil. They probably wont see another war like the HP crew has, but there will be pretenders.

Another thing to note is that the M.D. Wizards seem to have this almost insurmountable desire to fight each other. Ifthey are in the presence of one another, they have to test their mettle against the others. The only one to manage to surpress this instinct on his own is a long nosed fellow from Romania. He begins teaching it to the others when he meets them.

As for the H.P. crew, they're locations are a secret right now. The only thing I can say is that D.A. is still around and active. Harry has just become aware of Rohan and the others recently.

The story begins in 1999, from what I get, three years after Harry beats Voldermort

[Mistress Siana]

Well, I like your idea. And I like Faust. But make sure you give a believable reason, as well for his decision to breed M.D. wizards in the first place as for the fact that he can't die.
Sorry, you certainly thought of that. But giving general advise is always kind of superficial, so if you have a specific problem/question, ask me and I'll see if I can help.

[Phaerie]

Its certainly an interesting idea. Although i'm not sure i'd really class it as Harry Potter fanfic. It seems to sort of be crossed with anime.
But igo for it and see what happens

[Tanuki]

Well, I like your idea. And I like Faust. But make sure you give a believable reason, as well for his decision to breed M.D. wizards in the first place as for the fact that he can't die.
Sorry, you certainly thought of that. But giving general advise is always kind of superficial, so if you have a specific problem/question, ask me and I'll see if I can help.

You want Faust's reasoning... because he's crazy. I based him on Faust XIII from Shaman King. He made them just to prove he could, to show up Families like the Malfoys. He is EVIL. Like I said, Dementors steer clear of him

[Mistress Siana]

Well, even Voldemort's behaviour is explained. If you plain evilness is your only reason, that'll certainly be a point for critic. That's a least what my experience with fanfiction reviews tells me.

[Tanuki]

It's not just plain evilness. He wants to explore the limits of wizarding power. He saw a lot of great things when Voldermort was in power and wanted to duplicate this power. He felt that this was the next step for wizarddom. However, he was looking into Voldermort's perspective too long and it warped him. On top of that, he was already a little off center. He wanted nothing more and nothing less than to create a better wizard, simply because he felt this was what the next step for wizardkind was. He created a wizard to weed out the weak in the species; and since such a thign is absolutely unforgivable, he was judged accordingly.

It's like I heard in this film once.... sometimes, things are EXACTLY as they appear to be