that's great Quicksilver thanks!
Hermione was doubled over in giggles as she watched the game.
"no offense Harry but even i could beat you." she said.
"Shut up Hermione."he said as his face started to turn bright red.
"Hey Kim, d'you wanna play me" Harry asked me.
"Maybe later, I don't have any candy. Not that I'll need it.." I said as Fred and George lit a Fillibuster Firework behind me. Crookshanks went crazy and was darting around the room trying to take cover. Hermione was frantic and was yelling at Fred.
"Hey Harry!" I yelled, "We've got Quidditch practice!"
"We're late!Fred, George c'mon!" Harry yelled dashing upsatirs to get his Quidditch things. I ran and got my scarlet Quidditch robes. i was chaser for Gryffindor team.
We made our way down to the field only to find an angry Dean Thomas, the new Gryffindor team captain.
"You're 15 minutes late!" he exlaimed. "Hurry up, we need to practice for the game tomorrow."
We practiced longer than usual because Ravenclaw was a good team and it would be dificult to beat them. Fred and George weren't screwing around, amazingly. I practiced fairly well. I made 17 goals. I was ready for my first game of the season.
What do you think? Should I keep wriiting?