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Poem

Postby snuffles360uk » Wednesday 25 September 2002 8:24:38pm

I wrote these poems

Hedwig

I am Hedwig Harry's owl,
Not just any normal fowl.
A more beautiful owl can't be found by man,
As a pure white snowy owl is what I am.

I'm a post owl you'll never better,
Anywhere I'll take your letter,
With no address I take your mail,
In all weathers wind, rain and hail.

In a cage I sleep by day,
But at night I'm out to play.
Through skies at night I soar,
Of this fun I'll never bore.

By day I deliver post,
Never many four at most.
When I get back there's food to eat,
Then I fold my wings and go to sleep.

Thats the first one. :)
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Postby snuffles360uk » Wednesday 25 September 2002 8:33:13pm

This is my other poem

Scabbers

I'm Scabbers an ordinary garden rat,
I have rather large whiskers as I used to be fat.
I have light grey fur, but in places I'm bald,
But it's hardly suprising as I'm 12 years old.

My owner was Percy but now it is Ron,
I really like Ron, he's second to none.
He looks after me well, he tries to protect me,
From this mad cat that's determined to chase me.

I wish I was safe but this will never be,
As a mad man escaped just to kill me.
Ron doesn't know, he just thinks I'm a rat,
But I am a wizard called Peter in fact.

I betrayed my friends, thats what I did,
And now for 12 years as a rat I hid.
I sold Lily and James to Lord Voldemort,
And now he can't protect me as I thought.

His powers went with the curse that failed, so he fled
The dark forest is where he's hiding or so it's said.
My friends hate me, I can never go back,
Voldemort will take me I'm sure of that.
I have to find him, bring him back to full power,
And then, one day I shall have my hour.

So what do u think?
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Postby Scellanis » Wednesday 25 September 2002 9:41:35pm

:eek:

wow!!! those r brilliant!! :grin:
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Postby snuffles360uk » Wednesday 25 September 2002 10:07:21pm

I've got another

Crookshanks

My name is crookshanks I'm a big ginger cat,
I think I'm just right, but some say I'm fat.
I have thick ginger fur and a squashed up nose,
I have rather bowed legs, but I've still got claws on my toes.

A good character I can tell straight away,
If you are not what you seem, you can't keep me at bay.
I can tell if you're trustworthy or it your not,
Well if your up to no good, then you will be busted.

I made friends with a dog when nobody would,
He told me to fetch him a rat as fast as I could.
So I tried to do what he wantedand fetch him the rat,
But this was no ordinary rat I'll tell you that.

This dog and rat were not what you'd think,
The rat was a man who who could no lower sink,
The dog was a man who was after the rat,
And I was the only one who knew that.

I had to help the dog catch the rat,
I thought it'd be easy as I am a cat,
But I couldn't catch it and it went into hiding,
But we kew that it's time it was biding.

And then one night this rat was caught,
But the dog did not kill it as I'd thought.
But Harry said 'no' and they did as he said,
But on the way to the castle the rat fled.

And so it escaped there was nothing to do,
It would run back to it's master You-Know-Who.
So that was my story of the dog, rat and cat,
And nothing could happen stranger than that.

So what do u think of that one??
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Postby Scellanis » Wednesday 25 September 2002 11:53:28pm

brilliant again!!! :grin:
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Postby Shadow » Thursday 26 September 2002 12:27:39am

kewl! :D
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Postby Paul » Thursday 26 September 2002 9:51:09pm

Yay, they're really great snuffles360uk. I like them all, but I particularly like the Hedwig one as she's my favorite animal character in the books. Brilliant to see a poem dedicated to her!
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Postby snuffles360uk » Thursday 26 September 2002 10:04:41pm

Yay glad u like em cause I got another...

Pigwidgeon

I am Pigwidgeon of just Pig for short,
Ron is my owner but by Sirius I was brought.
The best owner in the world that's who Ron is,
And I'm sure that he's glad I am his.

I am the smallest post owl ever,
I'm tiny and I have dark grey feathers.
Very excitable is what I am,
Others think I'm trying to be as annoying as I can.

My first ever letter was from Sirius to Harry,
The letter was far too heavy for me to carry,
The trains slipstrteam was to strong, and I was too small,
But the letter I delivered as Harry caught me like a ball.

I love to deliver anyones mail,
Even if I am likely to fail.
So give me a chance to deliver your letter,
You never know, each time I do better.

Hope u like it :D
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Postby Scellanis » Thursday 26 September 2002 10:10:24pm

lol

wonderful

pig is so cute....wish i owned an owl like pig
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Postby snuffles360uk » Friday 27 September 2002 7:54:01pm

I've got another poem! Not quite so good a sthe others but still......

Mrs Norris

I'm Mrs Norris, I'm hated by most,
Students, teachers and even the ghosts.
Through the corridors with Filch I patrol,
Looking for rule breakers, once even a troll.

My owner is Filch, he's hated by the students too,
We hate the students as make a mess is all they do.
The work that he does, the students have no clue,
He cleans up non-stop, even when he had the flu.

Filch loves to find punishments to enforce,
And I help him to find rule breakers of course.
You dare to break a rule infront of me,
And you're in for trouble you just wait and see.

The students all hate us but we don't relly care,
As we hate them too, so that makes it fair.
As he has me and I have him,
And that is the way it has always bin.
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Postby Scellanis » Friday 27 September 2002 8:00:22pm

BRILLIANT!!!

again again...make another!!!

what about doing a snuffles poem??
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Postby snuffles360uk » Friday 27 September 2002 8:42:11pm

I might do a poem about snuffles later I'm doing one about Fang at the moment :grin:
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Postby snuffles360uk » Friday 27 September 2002 9:13:44pm

Got an other one :grin:

Fang

I'm Fang a big black boarhound,
But I'm not as fierce as I sound.
I've got very big teeth and a very loud growl,
But I'm more likely to turn tail and howl.

I look very vicious like I'm ready to kill,
But if I thought about killing It'd make me feel ill.
When I try to say 'Hello' people don't tend to stay,
Maybe it's my loud bark that makes them run away.

I may be big and I may look brave,
But that's not how I behave.
I'd rather curl up in my bed,
Than meet Hagrids' dog that has three heads.

To Hagrid is who I belong,
He says I'm a coward and he's not wrong.
Some people might be scared of me,
But what you get is not always what you see.

So what do u think of that one??
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Postby Scellanis » Friday 27 September 2002 9:27:30pm

Excellent!!!

need more!!!

again!! again!!!
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Postby snuffles360uk » Friday 27 September 2002 10:20:53pm

heres another one.....

Fluffy

Fluffy the three headed dog is what I am,
Protect things better than me, nobody can.
Try to get past any of my heads,
And you are likely to end up dead.

I am on loan to protect something for Dumbledore,
Snape tried to get past me and the skin from his leg I tore.
There is only one way to calm me,
Just play some music and you will see.

Sitting on a trapdoor is what all day I do,
Protecting the Philosophers' Stone, and well too.
I wish I had I more exciting job,
Than waiting for someone to turn the door knob.

But it's what Hagrid wants and it's him I love,
For him I am as peaceful as a dove.
So for him I will sit on a trapdoor as I am told,
And see if anyone will come, if they could be so bold.

Hope it's ok
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