The Sister

[Meg Boyd]

This is a totally new fan fiction called: The Sister

A small girl opened a heavy oak door. The room behind it was dark, and full of interesting shapes, the shapes you only see at night. The girl entered the dark room and crossed to the other end where there was a large window hidden by a pink curtain. The figure thrust opened the curtains to bring sunlight into the room, revealing a fairy land of a bedroom, frosted in fluffy pink comforters and valanaces which looked more like spun sugar than fabric. In the middle of the bed, slept another little girl, who's straw colored hair reflected the late summer sunshine.

The girl stood by the window, on its very tip-toes trying to see over the high sill. There was a whoosh of a mail truck squealing it's brakes, and the figure leaned her carrot-topped head out the window to see what surprises the mail carrier would bring today. "Perhaps a package from Uncle Marcus!" thought the red-haired girl , as she stretched out her toes even further to see what the postman was bringing that morning.

"Blast, I wish I was just a bit taller!" muttered the girl, as she grasped a pink wicker chair from the fluffy vanity. The girl stood upon it, to see out the window properly. The chair was just for show, and creaked even underneath the girl's meager weight.

Creak...

"Oh, the postman is bringing a magazine! I bet you it is for mother!" whispered the girl

Creak...

"Oooh! And a nice big flat package! I bet you that one is for father!"

Creak...

"And, look it that! The postman has a nice fat letter. I wonder who that is for!"

Creak, Crash, Boom...The girl had broken the chair and collapsed to the ground, making a a huge noise. The girl was so startled by the crash, she didn't even notice the blonde girl's rude awaking...

"LILY! GET OUT OF MY ROOM THIS INSTANT! CAN'T I EVER HAVE ANY PRIVACY!"


ho hum...do you people like it?

[AccioNiffler]

Oooh, how interesting. Whe you first said "red-haired girl" I though Ginny, not Lily. And I like that you are writing a fan fiction (as it seems so far) about Lily's life, because I see so many that about only the kids. I also really liked how you compared the valances to spun sugar, nice work *thumbs up*
Oh, but I have to say, wicker? Ick, I hate wicker, lol, never in a million years would I have it in my house! But I suppose that is more of a personal thing that does not pertain to your story, lol. I can't wait to hear how the story develops, whats in the package and such.

[pinky p]

oh, sassy!

yes, i can picture petunia's room like that... she deffinately seems the type:)

i wonder what lily's room would look like?

[Liquid Ice]

Cool, Im not into fanfiction that much but I liked that.

[Meg Boyd]

here is some more last rate story...

"Sorry, Petunia...I...I..." stammered Lily, rubbing her head where it had collided with the ground

"Just Get Out!" cut in Petunia, as she hopped out of bed, slipping on her bunny slippers.

"But I can't see out my own window..." whined Lily

"Well grow up a little, you midget!" snarled Petunia

Lily was rather hurt by these words. Petunia hadn't always been this way. Lily thought back to a time when she and Petunia got along famously, being as sisters always were meant to be. They giggled together, playing dolls together, read together, and were just there for each other when times got rough. Then it all vanished...

Lily remembered that day. It had began very similar to this one, except she had recieved the letter...

[pinky p]

hmm

interesting, keep it going!