The Hogwarts Teacher

[Kyle]

ah yes, an attempt by me, Kyle, at a good fanfic. here, I wanna see what you people think of my prologue.

Prologue
An old feeble man carried an owl towards the window of the tower he lived in. On the owl’s leg was attached a piece of parchment. “Fly, fly! Go and deliver the message!” As the owl flew away into the horizon, a knock came upon the huge metal door of the tower.
“Albus Dumbledore! It is time for your execution.” The feeble man named Dumbledore slowly made his way to the metal door and weakly opened it. The door slowly opened, and Dumbledore saw his executioners. A big man with a large moustache and two dementors grabbed Albus Dumbledore and led him down a dark hallway.
Prisoners sat in the dark of the night and watched as Albus Dumbledore, the only man Lord Voldemort was afraid of was led to his death.
“Imagine, Albus Dumbledore dying in Azkaban! What an ending to his life.” Mumbles such as that could be heard as Dumbledore, the big man and the two dementors walked quietly to a door and the end of the hallway.
The group paused for a moment as they reached the door. Albus Dumbledore muttered a few inaudible words and then the group disappeared as they passed the door.
An hour later, the island prison Azkaban was completely silent as all the prisoners and dementors went to sleep.

[jaco]

i'm liking it so far

[Sacred Guardian]

yeah, keep going, i want to know why he is there

[Mistress Siana]

Pleaaase, write on...I HAVE to know what has happened!
Don't DARE leaving it like this! (Sorry for the rude tone, but it would be torture otherwise)

[Meg Boyd]

come on...more...please???????