Harry Potter and the Hand of Gryffindor by Alice I

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Postby Alice I » Thursday 29 April 2004 9:13:12pm

Amon Rê wrote:I can't think of anything to say, but in the last two paragraphs you have Ginny getting dressed twice :-D Just thought I'd let ya know...


Opps :oops:
Oy, like I said this one has gone through two complete re-writes.
I'll get that fixed right away.
Thanks hun.
I hope your studies are comming along well for you.
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Postby Alice I » Sunday 16 May 2004 6:42:21pm

Hello folks,
I have been busy writing more of this book and earlier you may remember reading in the chapter called "The Journey Back" that there was a scene not yet written and that it would be added later.
Well it has been written and added and since these pages are so long if you click here it will take you right to that chapter.

This extra scene was added at 1:30 PM on Sunday May 16th. It is about Abigail Tosh meeting Luna Lovegood while she and Neville are talking in the Great Hall.

Chapter Sixteen "On the Run" is undergoing proofing and should be up sometime this week.

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Postby Alice I » Friday 21 May 2004 1:37:14pm

Chapter Sixteen - Part 1
On The Run


The Knight Bus arrived at Charing Cross Road outside the entrance of the Leaky Cauldron at almost ten minutes after six in the morning. Harry looked cautiously up and down the street before getting off the bus. He didn't want any early rising muggles to spot Dobby who was still only wearing a Hogwarts tea towel with the crest removed. Dobby took Harry's bag and broom and whispered to Harry to meet him in front of the apothecary and with a snap Dobby and Harry's belongings vanished. Harry stepped off the bus and thanked the conductor before entering the Leaky Cauldron quietly.

The bar was dimly lit and a bleary eyed Tom was bustling around setting the tables for breakfast. Harry backed into the shadows and pulled his invisibility cloak out and threw it over himself. He carefully made his way to the back door and the entrance to Diagon Alley. Dobby was waiting for him right in front of the apothecary which was the first door to the right of the entrance to Diagon Alley from the Cauldron. Dobby fell in beside Harry and they headed off down the winding street of shops together. Once they past Florean Fortescue's ice cream parlor Harry saw the entrance to Knockturn Alley off to his left. Dobby led him down the dark and dank Alley to a T in the road where they turned left and headed to the end. The Brigand's Burrow was a seedy place at the end of the Alley. Harry drew his hood up over his head and followed Dobby in the front door under the placard that looked ready to fall from its rusty hinges.

Dobby set Harry's bag down on the floor near the door and turned to him. He said in a very low voice "I will need ten Galleons and you should take a seat over in the corner by the fireplace. I will arrange for a room and some breakfast Master." Harry dug into his pockets and pulled out the gold then headed for the corner keeping his hood drawn up over his face. The bar area was dimly lit by a fire in the fireplace and three torches hanging from wall sconces on the other three walls. There was a man in tatty robes in the corner nearest a rickety flight of stairs leading up to the inn's rooms. Opposite the fireplace, where Harry took a seat, was the bar where Dobby went to pay for a room.

A nearly toothless man sat behind the bar leaning against the taps with his mouth hanging open apparently sleeping for he was snoring rather loudly. Dobby reached up his small hand and dropped two of the gold pieces that Harry had given him on to the bar. "My master will require a room and breakfast." The man behind the bar stopped snoring but showed no other sign that he had heard the elf. Dobby waited for a moment then he dropped one more piece of gold onto the bar. The man opened his eyes and sat up slowly. "That'll get a room." He said eyeing the gold. Dobby then dropped one more Galleon on the bar and the man said "An a spot o' breakfast."

He turned and opened a dusty cupboard pulling out a key with cobwebs all over it and the number 7 engraved on it. He threw the key onto the bar and said "Come get yer Master's breakfast in ten minutes elf." then he sat back down and began to snore again before Dobby had even gotten Harry's bag and broom. Harry said nothing but got up and followed Dobby up the rickety stairs to room number seven. Once they had gained the privacy of their room Harry took down his hood and removed his cloak. He looked around the room, it was filthy, the bed looked as though it was being held together by magic, the curtains were torn and dirty, the floor looked as though it hadn't been swept in a couple of years and the fireplace in the corner was literally crumbling all around it's mantel. "Dobby, you can't tell me that Lucius Malfoy or Draco stayed here before. This place is disgusting. They would never lower them selves to taking a night's sleep here."

Dobby was removing the dirty sheets from the bed and said "No sir, they would never stay here but this place is where you stay when you don't want to be found. Dobby grabbed the sheets by their corners and took them over to the window. He opened it and held them out of the window and began to shake them vigorously. When he brought them back in they were clean and white. He carefully replaced them on the bed as Harry watched stunned.

There was a small table with one broken chair next to the three drawer dresser. Both the dresser and the table looked as though they were quite literally 'on their last legs'. Dobby picked up the table and brought it over to the bed and set it down. "Master I will go and fetch your breakfast please sit down" he said indicating that Harry should sit on the bed in front of the table. Harry obeyed and with a crack like a whip Dobby was gone. After only a minute or two there was another crack and Dobby reappeared with a tray. He put a bowl of porridge on the small table along with a small jug of coffee, and a plate of toast. The plate and silverware were clean and Harry suspected that Dobby had made sure of that. Harry didn't even want to think what the flatware looked like before Dobby got hold of it.

Harry did not feel like eating at all, but still choked down nearly all of the porridge and one piece of toast. He had a cup of coffee but he wasn't worried about it keeping him awake as the non-stop rollercoaster that his life had turned into was finally catching up with him. The last twenty four hours had been a blur that went from bad to worse except for Ginny. Harry still couldn't believe that she was alive. The memory of her falling from her broom flashed in front of his eyes and he felt his stomach lurched uncomfortably. 'She is fine, now stop it!' he told himself firmly. Harry pushed the table away from him and spent a few minutes clearing his mind of thought. The exercise worked well for he did not really want to think about anything just then. Before Harry realized what was happening Dobby had removed his shoes and was lying him down on the bed and he was asleep before his head hit the pillow. Harry fell almost immediately into a deep and fitful sleep while Dobby sat next to Harry's bed watching him closely.

He slept until nearly three o'clock in the afternoon when he woke with a start. Dobby was still sitting in the now repaired chair watching him. The room was clean, the floor swept, the curtains repaired and a fresh smell replaced the rather rancid odor that had previously permeated the room. Harry looked down at his watch and sat up abruptly. "Dobby, I’ve been asleep all day?" Dobby nodded wearily, "You had a fitful sleep master but no real nightmares so I saw no need to wake you." Harry saw how droopy and tired Dobby looked and felt guilty. "Dobby have you been sitting there all day watching me sleep?" Dobby just nodded and Harry got up and said "Lie down and get some sleep.” then added almost as an afterthought “I insist as your master."

Dobby jumped up and said "I will sleep after you have had something to eat." He snapped his fingers and disappeared with a loud crack. Harry got up and went to the window. The view that he had was of the back alley behind the pub and a solid wall ten feet further on that was obviously the back wall of some muggle building in London. Harry closed the window wondering what was happening back at Hogwarts. He was sitting on the bed thinking about Ginny when Dobby reappeared with a loud crack holding a try of food. He set it down on the table and dished out stew from a small tureen along with biscuits and a jug of pumpkin juice. "You must eat Master." Harry sat down at the small table and realized that he was indeed very hungry. "Dobby what about you?" Dobby sat down on the bed and said "Dobby will sleep for a while first Harry Potter." and with that he laid down and fell fast asleep.

The day moved by very slowly for Harry. He was restless to keep moving but realized that there was nothing he could do until he went to Gringotts then did some shopping for himself and Dobby. The thought that plagued him throughout the day was whether or not he had done the right thing by leaving Hogwarts. No matter how many arguments he came up with for going back they did not hold weight against the fact that being around him was dangerous and that Ginny had nearly died because of that.

The next morning it took Dobby a few minutes to wake Harry, but he did rouse rather grudgingly feeling as though he hadn't slept more than a few minutes. Dobby poured a strong cup of coffee for Harry while he sat up rubbing his face. "Gringotts will be open now Master." The realization of what was going on and where he was cleared the cobwebs from his mind and brought him fully awake. "Thanks Dobby." Harry said as he picked up his cup of coffee. Dobby looked closely at him then said "You must try to remember that I am your servant in the magical world, and that you are a dark wizard. You would never thank me for doing my duty." Harry really didn't like this dark wizard business but he nodded and decided that he had better start getting used to it.

Gringotts was very close to the entrance to Knockturn Alley so Harry was fairly certain that no one saw him who might recognize him. His biggest fear was running into the Weasley twins so he kept the hood of his traveling cloak pulled up tightly around his face and crossed the road to the gleaming white building and up the white stone steps. The Goblin at the door bowed low as Harry stepped in. Even though there was no one in the bank that Harry recognized he kept his hood up when he approached the counter. He took out enough gold to exchange for 900 pounds in muggle money as well as three hundred galleons of wizard gold.

With his pockets bulging Harry left Gringotts and made his way back to the Leaky Cauldron. He kept his hood up while he passed through the pub with the morning guests all gathered for breakfast and walked to the front door and out into muggle London. Harry had never been shopping in London before but knew that Aunt Petunia spoke well of T.M. Lewin. He needed clothes for Dobby and heavy jackets for both of them so he headed off toward Piccadilly Circus where he knew there was a T.M. Lewin nearby.

Harry was glad that he could take his hood off now that he was in the muggle world as no one should recognize him here. He was careful to keep his bangs brushed down over his forehead anyway just in case there was someone from the wizarding world around. He walked northwest up Northumberland to Charles Statue in Nelson's Column. There was an information kiosk near the statue and Harry looked for any shopping brochures he could find. He found what he was looking for right away. T.M. Lewin had a Flagship store only a few blocks away on Jermyn St. and it took him only fifteen minutes to reach the Department store. It was just after ten in the morning but the store was already doing a healthy trade.

Harry made immediately for winter coats. He purchased a heavy parka for himself and a medium sized child’s parka for Dobby. It took Harry some time to find one that had a deep funnel like hood so that they could cover the elf’s large ears and long nose. He headed for men’s ware and picked up large heavy socks for Dobby and made sure to get two pair that were completely different from each other as Dobby likes to wear odd socks, and an oversized pair of galoshes for him as well as large knit mittens to hide his hands.

In the children’s department he got some pants and a long-sleeved shirt that looked the right size for the elf then he turned his attention to concealing his broom and found the sporting and leisure department. The only thing that looked like it would work was a ski bag so he purchased one that for the shorter down hill skis and also a backpack that fit comfortably. He was not concerned about the pack being a little small as he had been reading carefully the chapter in the book Hermione had given him about how to enlarge the inside of the pack to easily fit all of his belongings. As he was leaving the department he noticed a coin cloth for keeping collectable coins in good condition. There was one on display and Harry stopped to look at it. It was a length of soft leather about thirty inches wide and twelve inches high. It had deep three quarter circle slit pouches that securely held coins and there were at least 150 of these coin slits in the leather as well as a slot on the reverse side for holding papers of authenticity. There were soft leather thongs on the ends so that the coins could be rolled up and the entire thing tied closed. Harry was smiling to himself and examining the coin case when a car backfired out on the street.

Harry jumped and dropped the coin case as he reached into his cloak for his wand. He was staring around looking for the cause of the sound; his heart pounding in his ears and it took him a moment to relax and realize that it was not a ministry wizard come to take him either back to Hogwarts or worse into custody for running away. Harry withdrew his hand from his cloak and picked up the coin case he had dropped. “Are you all right there young man?” said a voice from behind the counter. Harry looked up quickly and saw that the clerk had been watching him. “Er, yes ma’am I was just startled by the car outside.” The clerk eyed him suspiciously “Shouldn’t you be in school today?” Harry looked startled by the question but recovered quickly “I’m interested in purchasing one of these coin rolls. May I have one please?” he said as he set the display model back on the counter. The question had the effect Harry was hoping for. Seeing a commission forthcoming, for the coin rolls were quite expensive, the clerk forgot about Harry’s age for a moment and went under the counter for a box with a new roll in it.

The clerk was not the only one who noticed Harry. Max Barnstodt was in the store and caught sight of Harry when he came in. Max, being a bounty hunter, noticed everything around him and the fact that Harry was obviously fifteen or sixteen years old and the fact that he was wearing a cloak made him stand out to Max. When Harry reacted to the car backfiring Max knew that he was a wizard. Max noticed the items that Harry was buying and wondered why he wasn’t in school and what a wizard could possibly want with a ski bag, backpack, and parkas unless he was planning on a trip into the mountains. This kid was nervous and reacting to what he thought was another wizard apparating to his location, he was purchasing heavy clothes for a child as well as himself. Then when Harry bought the coin case Max frowned, because the items that this young wizard was buying didn’t seem to add up.

The coin roll could be used to carry wizard gold but why not just put his money in his pockets or a small pouch? He was sure that the ski bag was to conceal a broom and a backpack would make carrying things easier if he were planning on flying anywhere or even hiking. Max felt sure that this kid was on the run and planning on traveling through the country possibly using muggle transportation. Max took one more good look at Harry before shrugging and turning in the opposite direction, after all Harry was not his concern.

Max had been looking for Seth Baggot; the man whom he had chased all the way to Great Brittan from America; without success. He was not used to having a mark so thoroughly elude him but then again Baggot was no ordinary mark and Max was in a bit of a foul temper because of it. Baggot had definitely killed the three muggles in August and then literally vanished, but Max was fairly certain that he had not left the country. He had run out of leads and had decided to do a bit of shopping for his aunt to take his mind off Bagot for awhile. Three other members of the Hunters guild had arrived in England and were searching all through Great Brittan for him also having little success. This was becoming a real embarrassment for the guild as they almost never failed to apprehend a mark and the stress was beginning to show in all of them. Max paid for the cribbage set he had picked out for his aunt and headed back to her flat.

Harry arrived back at the Leaky Cauldron by eleven thirty and headed straight back to the Brigand’s Burrow. When he entered the room that he and Dobby were sharing Dobby was pacing anxiously waiting for him. “Master! Dobby has been so worried, it took you so long to return, I thought you had been discovered.” Harry tossed the packages on the bed and said “I had to go shopping for us Dobby. We will be taking the train and you needed a disguise.” Harry opened the bags and took out the clothes he had purchased for Dobby. Dobby looked on intrigued until Harry indicated that he should put them on. Dobby was clearly unsure how to go about putting all of the odd clothing on but with Harry’s help they managed to get the shirt, pants, socks and galoshes on. Then came the parka and mittens and as soon as Harry got the hood pulled up and extended out over Dobby’s face he stood back to inspect him.

Dobby stood there looking utterly ridiculous but you could not tell from first glance that he was anything other than an oddly dressed youngster with extremely big feet. The funnel like hood which had thick fur lining effectively hid his long nose but he had a little difficulty walking in the boots. Dobby had to walk around the room for several minutes before he could pace the length of the room without falling down, but he did finally manage to get the hang of it.

Harry unpacked his school bag and took out The Traveling Wizard’s Guide to Spells, Curses and Antidotes and turned to the chapter about enlarging his traveling case. After carefully re-reading this chapter and the enlargement charm again Harry took out his wand and pointed it at the backpack and concentrating he muttered “Cretumtrintus”. The backpack looked completely unchanged from the outside but the internal dimensions had tripled in size. He was pleased to see that the charm worked the first time and he had no difficulty putting everything comfortably into the pack. Then he unrolled the coin case and put half of his wizard money in the coin slots and the remainder of his pound notes in the paper slot on the other side while Dobby looked on curiously. The other one hundred and fifty galleons along with a few pieces of muggle change he had went into the bottom of his backpack in a hidden zippered section. Then Harry took off his shirt and wrapped the coin case around his waist and tied the thongs behind his back. The coins were facing the outside while the paper money slot was against his skin. He tried bending over to see if the coins were in any danger of falling out but found the three quarter circle slits secured the coins quite well. It was only slightly uncomfortable due to the weight of the gold and the fact that it covered nearly half his midriff but he was sure that after a short time he would not even notice it. He was quite pleased with himself for having thought of this and put his shirt back on over the coin belt. Harry put his own parka on over his clothes and pulled up the hood. His face was also very well covered and he seemed pleased overall by the purchases he had made.

His broom fit in the ski bag with room to spare as the bag was actually longer than the broom and it showed as the end of the ski bag flopped over the broom handle. Harry took the book back out and scanned it for an appropriate charm to shorten the ski bag to match his broom’s length. It took him a few minutes to find the right charm then he pointed his wand at the ski bag and said “Curtoimuto” and the ski bag began to shorten and when it reached the length that Harry wanted he said “Cesso” Harry smiled at his spell work as he stowed his broom in the now properly sized ski bag. He was very glad that the extra lessons with Professor McGonagall had paid off so well and that his transfiguration and related charm work had dramatically improved since he began tutoring with her to get caught up after his absence in September. Everything was now packed and ready to go and he looked at Dobby and said “We need to get to King’s Cross and see about catching a train headed north. I’ll need to take a look at a map to see what will get us close to Duncansby Head.” Harry threw his heavy cloak over his parka and turned to Dobby and said “Can you meet me just on the other side of the Leaky Cauldron out on Charing Cross Road?”

Dobby’s squeaky voice sounded muffled coming from under the funnel hood of his parka “Master would it not be better for me to meet you at King’s Cross Station?” Harry just looked at Dobby for a moment then said “You’re right that would be easier than trying to have you walk through the streets of London. There is a ticket stand near the entrance to the station with several benches. Wait for me there but make sure you don’t talk to anyone. I’ll get us tickets for what ever train we will need to catch. It is going to take me at least twenty to thirty minutes to walk to the station so go on ahead and I’ll see you there in half an hour ok?” Dobby nodded and with a loud crack he was gone.

Harry picked up his backpack and ski bag and made his way down to the bar. The old toothless barkeep called out to Harry as he made his way to the front door “Oy, you there, you need to clear your tab.” Harry turned toward the bar and looked at the man through narrowed eyes. He knew that Dobby had taken care of paying for the room and the four meager meals that he had had so he was not inclined to pay this man anything else. Harry slowly approached the bar but stopped sort of the man’s arm reach. “You have your gold what more do you want?” Harry said in as gruff a voice as he could muster. The old man looked Harry over and nodded at his cloak. That is a school cloak boy and you are no more than a runaway. Your elf paid for the room and the food but you must now pay for my silence.”

A cold chill crept down Harry’s neck at these words. This bar keep would rat him out to the first person asking questions about him whether he paid him or not. Harry suddenly realized that he had to act like a dark wizard would and shut this man up. He thought quickly and slowly put his hand into his robes. He took hold of his wand and as he drew it out he also took a gold coin from the belt beneath his shirt. As he drew his hand from beneath his robes the barkeep saw the wand and froze then Harry holding the wand tightly gripped in his fist and the gold coin between his index and thumb tossed the coin up into the air. The barkeep’s gaze left the wand and followed the coin which it exactly what Harry was waiting for. He pointed his wand at the barkeep and said “Silencio” as the barkeep reached out for the coin he gave a strangled cry when the spell hit him. He had grabbed the coin but was now looking at Harry terrified as he tried in vain to say something.

Harry moved closer to the bar and peered at the old man. With the hood of both the parka and his cloak pulled up over his head the man could not see Harry’s face and was now regretting his rash move to try and blackmail more gold from this stranger. Harry took on a very low and gruff tone and said “You may keep the gold, and your silence will keep for a few weeks. Be glad I do not have the time to silence you properly old man. I'll have someone check in on you to ensure that you keep your tongue… or not”. With that; the barkeep’s face drained of all color and he sat back heavily on the stool behind him. Harry turned on his heel and headed out the door and down Knockturn Alley very glad to be out in the cold air and away from the scene inside the bar. He had reached the Leaky Cauldron before he stopped shaking and even though the temperature had dropped dramatically he was sweating profusely under the parka and cloak.

Once Harry had gained the streets of muggle London he quickly took off his cloak and stuffed it into his backpack and put that on. Then he swung the ski bag over the back of his shoulder next to the pack and started for Kings Cross. He was still wrestling with his feelings about what he had done to the old barkeep at the Brigand’s Burrow when he entered the front doors of King’s Cross. He had never maliciously hexed someone before and then to follow it up with a threat of further harm had his insides churning. His scar began to prickle and he absentmindedly began to rub his forehead as he looked over the map on the wall near the ticket counter for the right train for them to take north.

The closest the train would get them to Duncansby Head was Wick some twenty five miles south of their destination and it was a fifteen hour trip. The next train that was leaving for Wick was not until three o’clock in the afternoon but there was no other choice so Harry stepped up to the ticket window to purchase two tickets for the three o’clock train headed north. The tickets cost four hundred and fifty pounds and Harry was glad that he had decided to take out so much money. He knew that train fare was expensive but when he saw the price of the tickets to Wick he started to get a little worried. He had spent nearly two hundred pounds at T.M. Lewin this morning and after buying the train tickets that left him with only 250 pounds in muggle currency which was not enough to get back to London by rail. He shook his head and told himself that it didn’t matter. The only thing that mattered now was getting to Azkaban and getting the information he needed to track down Voldemort. The uneasy feeling that had been slowly growing in the pit of his stomach was becoming more pronounced and he was feeling less and less certain about what he was doing.

Once Harry had the tickets he turned to scan the benches and spotted Dobby quickly. He was sitting on the bench closest to the wall behind a large pillar. He was so still that he looked asleep and Harry approached him casually and sat down next to him. “We have some time before the train comes.” Dobby just nodded and Harry glanced down at the elf. He was completely covered and it was rather warm inside the station. “Are you alright under there?” Dobby’s head turned toward him though Harry could not see any part of his face and a small squeaky voice came from out of the funnel like hood “Dobby is fine, quite warm actually.” Harry leaned closer and said “That’s what I’m worried about. Are you too warm?” Dobby’s head shook back and forth once to indicate that he was not too warm then he turned back to the pillar and sat quietly. There was nothing else for Harry to do and Dobby seemed resigned to simply sit and wait so Harry took the time to try and clear his mind. His scar had been prickling ever since the scene in the Brigand’s Burrow and he was a little nervous about Voldemort making a connection to him while he was away from the castle and vulnerable.

Max walked back to his aunt’s flat to find a brown barn owl sipping water from a small dish on the kitchen table. “Auntie Rae?” he called to the back room. An older woman in her mid sixties poked her head around the corner and smiled. “Hello dear, you have mail.” she said indicating the owl who had stopped drinking and was now holding its leg out for Max to remove the note attached. Max unrolled the parchment and smiled. “It’s from Bill Weasley, something’s up.” he said as he rolled the parchment back up. Rae Barnstodt, Max’s paternal aunt stepped out into the kitchen from the back room and asked “Why is there something up dear?” Max stepped over to his aunt and gave her a kiss on the cheek and handed her the T.M. Lewin bag. “He asked me to go see him at Hogwarts, says he needs my help.” Rae’s eyes lit up as she looked inside the bag. “Presents! You are my favorite for a reason you know.” she said with a mischievous grin, then her grin faded as she remembered to tell Max about the note that arrived moments after he left.

She reached into the top drawer of an antique secretaries table and pulled out a rolled parchment for him. The roll top of the desk which was almost always open was currently half closed indicating an alert status to the daily posts. Max insisted on techniques like this so that he could deal with most given situations at a glance. Coming from the muggle world Max still dealt regularly with muggles because he was the first wizard in his family for generations and small clues like that can tell Max a lot of things without arousing the suspicion of the neighbors and visiting muggle friends.

The Barnstodt family went back over a thousand years and who’s early core resided firmly in Europe and consisted of numerous and powerful wizards. This European family tree is known by the entire family but not discussed. When Max’s great great grandfather left Great Brittan for the new world the branch of the family tree that was Max’s direct ancestry was effectively cut off from the older European family; the one with wizards in it. No magical offspring had ever been born until Max; and his magic took a while to show itself.

Max’s birth may have been considered magical in retrospect for he should never have lived. He was premature by nearly two and a half months and most premature babies from that age had a life expectancy of six months to a year. Max was different; he had a stubborn resistance to his fate and simply would not give in. He fought every single day for the first two years of his existence just to stay alive. He was so small at his birth that his heart had not fully formed resulting in a series of heart surgeries necessary to keep him alive during his first year. In his toddler and early childhood years he was so calm and composed when he had to have a long stay in the hospital that he was voted poster boy for attitude by all of the other patients and staff at Mt. Sinai Children’s Hospital in New York. But Max was just a boy and he hid his real pain very well; … even from himself. He never admitted to the tears that fell in the dead of night when even God had turned out the light.

When Max’s magical abilities started to show up the family was stunned beyond belief and Max’s magic was a new beginning for him. His heart and body seemed to heal themselves and he quickly became strong and could run and jump and play with the other children. The doctors were completely stumped by the complete reversal in Max’s physical condition and wanted to do all sorts of tests on him for their medical journals which was not allowed by Max’s family because no one wanted Max’s magical abilities to be found out by the muggle doctors. Max had to learn quickly to control his magic and to keep the secret.

Max’s father Jonathan, Rae’s oldest brother, was recognized as head of the family being the oldest son of the matriarch. Jonathon felt that they must rejoin the main family tree. Rae had already moved back to Great Brittan; the first in over two hundred years; and had contacted the European Barnstodts. She and her brother had always been fascinated by the fact that they came from a long line of pure blood and powerful wizards until Jacob Barnstodt was born.

Jacob, the son of Archibald Barnstodt, a powerful pureblood wizard, turned out to be a squib and an embarrassment to Archibald. The rift between father and son caused Jacob to sail for America and start his own family tree. All of their lives, Rae and Jonathon had been trying to find a way to get the family in America to embrace their older European ties but this did not sit well with many of the family as they felt that they were no longer a branch of the European tree anymore, but a separate American family that was no longer bound to the traditions of the past.

The stubbornness of Jonathan than and the separation of country caused a rift in the family that still has yet to heal. Every member of Max’s extended family, and that consisted of almost two hundred and fifty people, loved the boy and the fact that he was a wizard was forcing the argument into sharp relief. Max was sick about the strife his being a wizard was causing in his family but he was not sorry to have discovered magic. He was able to run, and jump and act like a normal kid, and now, he could make stuff happen! Max felt a great empathy for Jacob Barnstodt. What must it have been like for him to be the first person in countless generations to have no magical ability? Was it very much the same as being the first person in generations to have magical abilities?

When Max was accepted at Damascus Magical Academy in New York he made the decision for his family and sent out letters to all of his relations telling them that what ever they decided to do was just fine with him, however he was a wizard and he must live the life that was given to him. He would treat every member of his family with the same respect that he has through out his life and that being a wizard would not change that.

No one could believe that Max had the maturity at the age of twelve to stand up to the entire family and calmly state that he was going to live his own life so there was no point in arguing the matter over anymore. Max has always gone his own way but remained in contact with all the members of his family. He respects the wishes of those who are uncomfortable with magic and shows off for those who enjoy it. No one could deny Max; for they all still saw him as the brave little boy who fought the good fight.

Max read the parchment quickly then pocketed it. “Everyone has come up empty!” Max paced to the window and stared out into the afternoon sky. It was getting cloudy again and the temperature was continuing to drop. He turned abruptly and said “We need a new approach. I am going to go and see Bill tonight. I’ll help him with what ever he needs but in return I’ll ask him for a meeting with The Order of the Phoenix.” Rae’s eyes shot open. She had lived in England for a few years now and had contact with the wizarding world enough to know that The Order of the Phoenix was headed by none other than Albus Dumbledore who was considered by most of wizard kind to be the most powerful wizard of the age and the best defense against the renewed threat from Lord Voldemort. There had been a lot of talk lately in the wizard world and on Diagon Alley about the Ministry of Magic and Cornelius Fudge. He has not fared well in this and people are starting to talk about getting Dumbledore to take over during this time of war.

Rae spent a fair amount of time in Diagon Alley and listened to the gossip closely. Max and his friends were not the only wizard contacts for Rae, she had also made several other wizarding friends especially in the Leaky Cauldron and the apothecary on Diagon Alley. She got subscriptions to The Daily Prophet, The Quibbler, and Witch Weekly. She knew all about Lord Voldemort and Harry Potter and the fact that Dumbledore had been labeled a senile old fool by the Prophet and the Potter boy was referred to as an attention seeking liar.

Rae found it difficult to believe that a wizard who had been held in such high esteem for so long was suddenly senile and when the Quibbler came out with Harry Potter’s story last year everything seemed to fall into place and make sense. Rae was one of those who instantly believed the story that Potter told and sent him a note by owl saying so. She was so disgusted with the Daily Prophet that she nearly canceled her subscription but ultimately she didn’t. Rae truly loved getting her magical newspapers and keeping up with the happenings in the wizarding world. She only wished she could be more a part of the world that fascinated her so much.
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Postby Alice I » Friday 21 May 2004 2:02:25pm

Chapter Sixteen - Part 2
On The Run


Harry and Dobby got on the train and headed for the rear compartments, and they found one that was empty so they entered and closed the door, then bolted it from the inside because Harry didn’t want anyone accidentally opening the compartment door to find a house elf sitting there. Once inside Harry and Dobby stripped off the parkas. Dobby looked no worse for wear but Harry had sweat so much in his heavy clothes that his hair was even more unruly than usual and his shirt was soaked from perspiration and said “Well we will be glad for the warm cloths when we get to Wick.” Dobby looked up at Harry and asked why in a small voice. Harry could see that Dobby was afraid that they would have to fly and sighed. “I’m sorry Dobby but flying is probably the only way to get from Wick to Duncansby Head and it isn’t really that far only about 20 or 30 miles. I’m not sure that I have enough muggle money to take a cab and I’ve no idea if they even have a bus that runs from Wick to Duncansby Head.” Dobby’s bat like ears quivered slightly but he said “Dobby will fly with Harry Potter sir.” but he looked miserable saying it.

Harry sat down heavily and opened his backpack. He pulled out the bladder of pumpkin juice and some of the dried fruit. He handed the juice and some fruit to Dobby who seemed genuinely hungry. They sat in silence eating and thinking their own thoughts for awhile when Dobby looked up at Harry and said “Harry Potter sir? What will you do when you get to Azkaban?” Harry looked over at Dobby and thought about his question for a moment. What was he planning on doing? He did not have any real plan in mind and that was not a good idea going into a situation like this. He had his invisibility cloak and the veritaserum, so he knew he could interrogate someone if he needed to but who would he interrogate? Lucius Malfoy was no longer there and he doubted the reliability of anything that Crabbe’s father might say. Would Avery, McNair or Rookwood have the information he needed as they were the only other Death Eaters that Harry could identify at a glance. How would he administer the veritaserum without setting off an alarm? How would he get into the prison? Now that the dementors had gone who was guarding the prison? The fear in the pit of his stomach lurched sharply and a chilled crawled up his spine. Harry shook his head and said “I don’t really know Dobby. I don’t know anything about Azkaban. I don’t know where the prisoners are or who is guarding them now that the dementors have gone back to Voldemort. Dobby what can you tell me about the prison?”

Dobby thought about it for a moment. “I have not been to Azkaban in many years but I remember it well. The prisoner’s cells are in the west and east towers of the fortress. The warden’s office is in the center building between the towers and the lower levels are the kitchens, storage areas, laundry, and cistern."
“Maybe I could use the cloak to get into the prison and look around. I would have to try and use the veritaserum on someone but I don’t know how I would get three drops into someone without them giving off an alarm. Dobby this is starting to look impossible, I don’t even know how to get inside. You said that there is a ferry maybe I could stow away on it covered by the cloak.”

Dobby’s ears perked up a little “Harry Potter sir, once you get inside of the prison there are sure to be guards everywhere. You would have to put the veritaserum in a water goblet at meal time and the prisoners eat in their cells so you would have to get to the kitchen first. The house elves at the prison will not let you go near the food for the prisoners and they will know if you try.” Dobby paused and hung his head. After a moment he continued “I must do it for you. There are many elves at Azkaban and I can get into the kitchen unnoticed.”

Harry looked into his backpack again and pulled out the small pouch of ingredients that Dobby had acquired from Professor Snape. He recognized the veritaserum and had to ask Dobby about the other things. He pulled out a small vile with a slightly blue tinged liquid in it and held it up to Dobby with a quizzical look. “That is Slowfax solution Harry Potter. If you mix it with Alihotsy leaves it will make the drinker sleep for at least twenty minutes.” Harry checked his potion ingredients to see if he had Alihotsy leaves and he did, actually all of his potion supplies were fully stocked which he was quite glad for. He had no idea where he would get more ingredients in northern Scotland.

Harry looked thoughtfully at Dobby “Dobby are you sure that you are ok about doing this?” Dobby got up and crossed the coach to sit next to Harry. He took a deep breath and said “Dobby did not want Harry Potter to leave Hogwarts but you left… Dobby does not think you should go to Azkaban but you are.” Dobby’s bat like ears were quivering now and he looked up at Harry with his big saucer like eyes. “Dobby must help Harry Potter to finish this because Harry Potter can not fail… Harry Potter must not die.” Harry sat stunned by these words and a deep tingling began in the pit of his stomach. When Dobby said “Harry Potter must not die” Harry felt a horrible foreboding sensation wash down the back of his neck and spine as though saying the words had made it possible. It was the first time that Harry really understood how everyone felt when the name Voldemort was mentioned. “I’m not going to die Dobby. I promised Ginny that I would come back.” Harry tried to sound confident for Dobby’s sake but he felt less sure of that affirmation with each passing hour.

By five o’clock Max was sitting in his aunt’s parlor surveying the three members of the guild that he had selected to come to Great Brittan. The American Wizards Confederation had called on the guild to apprehend Baggot once again after it was discovered that he had been in contact with the sasquai representing Lord Voldemort. A portly wizard with graying temples sat closest to Max. Devon had been with him from the beginning of the guild as they had formed it together. Max had met Devon when he was twenty two and just finished with his Auror training. Max who had always been an unconventional student had no qualms in pairing up with a bounty hunter in order to catch a bad guy. The wizard that Max and four other aurors were assigned to find was such a heinous criminal that the AWC also put a forty thousand galleon bounty on his head. Max met Devon in the back hills of Kentucky tracking this wizard. Devon and Max hit it off immediately and decided to team up and catch him together. The AWC agreed to pay Devon half the amount of the bounty if Max were to work with him but when they brought the rogue in, Devon was only paid four thousand galleons. The AWC felt that Max had done most of the work and had been the one to actually bring him in because Devon was recovering in the hospital at the time the prisoner was handed over. Max was outraged by this behavior and quit in protest. The AWC did finally pay Devon the other sixteen thousand galleons with which Devon and Max started the Hunters Guild.

Max turned his gaze to Jason Westgate but everyone who knew him called him Hound. This unusual nick name came from a rather unique skill that he possessed. Hound who was thirty three years old had a very unique, and as far as anyone could tell, unprecedented ability. Once any witch or wizard performed magic in Hound’s presence he could then sense or detect that magic even over very great distances. Hound had learned very early on that everyone’s magic is as different and as unique as their fingerprints. All he had to do to find someone was to concentrate on that person’s magic and he would know where they were and how to find them. He did have to be actively thinking about a person in order to find them or else he would surely go mad with so many magical imprints weighing on his conscious mind. His ability to sense and find someone’s magic gave him an incredible advantage as an auror, however Hound barely passed Auror training. He had very little talent with his own wizarding abilities and was not very powerful. His transfiguration work was extremely poor and his charm work was just pitiful so he ended up hooking up with the Guild because they made use of his rather unique gift more effectively than the AWC’s Auror Bureau. The Guild could also offer him much better protection. Hound may be able to find any wizard that he has met and used magic with but if he were to apprehend one of these wizards on his own he would be hard pressed to defend himself adequately, so his relationship with the Guild became symbiotic, and he is one of the reasons for the Guild’s remarkable success rate.

The third member that Max had sent for sat quietly in the corner. Ferrus was an extremely slender man with a narrow face and sharp black eyes. He usually wears a hooded cloak and could easily blend into the background. He and Devon still felt friction between each other because Devon simply did not want to believe that Ferrus had out-witted him. Devon and Max knew Ferrus first as a fugitive wanted by the AWC for the murder of a prominent Confederation wizard’s daughter. The person actually responsible for the brutal murder was a dark wizard named Dominic Kalidas who had framed Ferrus before fleeing. Ferrus knew that the AWC would not bother to investigate his claim of innocence so he set out to clear his name, managing to stay one step ahead of both Max and Devon long enough to find the evidence he needed to prove his innocence. Ferrus was one of the most difficult marks that Max had ever pursued and he had developed a grudging respect for him.

Max and Devon thought that they finally had him trapped and when they burst through the door of his hiding place they found Ferrus sitting their quite composed waiting for them. He had a small leather pouch and a stack of parchment on his lap and said “I was wondering if you were ever going to get here.” Max and Devon looked astonished and lowered their wands slightly but still kept this fugitive covered. Ferrus set the stack of parchment down along with the leather pouch and slid them across the floor to Max. “I will go with you quietly if you promise to look at those documents and the evidence in the pouch. It is proof that Dominic Kalidas killed that girl and that I am innocent. Once I am released I must inform you I will be going after Kalidas myself.” Max and Devon took him in to custody. After going through all the evidence Max was convinced of Ferrus’ innocence but Devon seemed to still mistrust him. Max worked with Ferrus to go after Kalidas and found Ferrus to be an excellent spy as well as an expert at not being seen but after almost two years Devon and Ferrus still have never stopped sparing with each other.

After a moment Max looked at Hound and said “Well Hound; has he left the country?”
“I can follow his trail from Heathrow to Coventry, then Plymouth and last Manchester, but after that he disappeared. He is being hidden by magic Max. You know that I can’t ‘find’ through certain charms but I can tell you that he hasn’t left the country.”
Ferrus lowered his hood and turned his face to Hound “And how can you know that? Could he have apparated back to the states? You can’t ‘find’ past the Atlantic ocean can you?” Hound regarded Ferrus and said “No; if he was in the states I would not be able to ‘find’ him from here but unless I am very much mistaken Baggot does not have the power or skill to apparate that distance.”

Hound turned to Max for confirmation on this assumption and Max nodded. “I agree, Baggot is not powerful enough to attempt an international apparation.” Ferrus gave a quick nod as if committing some fact to memory. Max turned to a Devon and asked “Your note said you found something Dev?” Devon spoke in slow metered tones as though thinking while he spoke. “Yes…, well Bagot left a message for you.” Max looked up abruptly at this news. “What message?” Devon handed a small envelope to Max and said “Bagot left this with one of the neighbors of the old man in Manchester. Bagot put a memory charm on her so that she would remember the note only after the muggle police investigation was done with. The old lady was pretty shook up when I spoke with her then all of the sudden she went white as a ghost and ran back inside her house. I thought that she had lost it then she came back out with this. She was all flustered that she didn’t remember it until just then. She said that a man had given her this note and told her to give it to the first American investigator she met. She seemed completely confused and embarrassed that she had not remembered this when all of the ‘Proper Police’ were around.”

Max looked down at the envelope and sighed before opening it. There was a single piece of parchment in it with one sentence scrawled across it in large letters.

NOT THEN MAX, NOT NOW, NOT EVER

The note burst into flames at that moment and the room was filled with a horrible sounding laughter and a voice that echoed so loudly that it could be heard out on the street.
“You will only find me in death old friend!”

Max looked around at his colleagues and said “I am afraid we are going to be drawn into the fight against Voldemort whether we want to or not. I am sure that Bagot is being hidden by the other Death Eaters and maybe even by Voldemort himself. I am going to go see Bill Weasley tonight and set up a meeting with The Order of the Phoenix.”

Devon spoke up “Max, I know that we need to help in this war but what will we tell the AWC? Will they approve of us getting involved in foreign affairs without their knowledge?” Max looked at Devon for a moment before answering. “Dev, when have you ever known me ask permission from the AWC to do anything?” Devon grinned and said “Just checking, but we could use their help on this that is the point I was trying to make.” Max grinned back “Actually I have kept them informed of our progress or should I say our lack thereof. That’s who paid for your first class tickets over here. You know the AWC does not want to see Voldemort take control in Europe because of the repercussions it will have back home, especially after Bagot showed up and contacted the sasquai. Look you guys lay low here for a couple of days and I’ll go see Bill. He needs me to help him with something so I might not be back right away. I will send word when I can get something set up with the Order.”

Ferrus stood up and said “What did Bagot mean by old friend Max?” Ferrus was fairly new to the guild and had never met or even seen Bagot. That is one of the reasons that Max wanted him to come to England, because he could get close to Baggot and the rest of the Death Eaters without being recognized. “I went after Bagot fifteen years ago, and when I found him we fought. I gave him a nasty scar on his face and he gave me this.” Max pulled up his shirt to reveal a large jagged scar that crossed his chest. Max put his shirt down and continued. “After I captured him we were headed back to Damascus when we were both caught in the big quake in California in ‘81. I couldn’t just apparate out because Bagot was bound and I had to stay with him. The long and the short of it is he got loose and disappeared and I was injured and couldn’t follow.” Ferrus looked straight at Max and said “I see, so he is baiting you because of your past history. That could be useful at some point.” Devon got to his feet and walked over to Ferrus looking down at him. “I am not entirely sure I like you.” Ferrus looked up at the Devon and shrugged “Well do let me know when you figure it out.”

“Enough!” Max interrupted “We are not here to argue with each other. Dev; Ferrus had a right to ask what my relationship with Baggot is. He has made this personal and in a fight like this one everyone has a right to know what they are walking into. I’m going to Scotland so in the meantime relax for a while. I have a feeling that once this begins there will be no relaxation for any of us for a very long time.”

By the time Max arrived at Hogsmead it was getting dark. He went to the Three Broomsticks and asked to see Madam Rosmerta whom Bill had contacted. Max used her fireplace to go to Bill’s office in the castle but when he stepped from the fireplace Bill was just closing the door. “Yo Bill!” Max hollered out and Bill came back into his office smiling broadly. “Max! I was hoping you would get my message soon.” Bill crossed the room and they shook hands. “I have to teach a class right now but I really need to talk to you about finding a student who has run away from the school.” Max said “Teach!? I wouldn’t miss you teaching for the world! Mind if I tag along?” Bill opened the door and headed out into the corridor saying “Well it might be a little boring as I am teaching first and second years how disarm an opponent, and to block rudimentary curses.” Max smiled and said “Oh I am sure it won’t be boring” and he followed along chuckling under his breath.

Max found himself actually assisting Bill with the students walking around the room and helping to correct improper wand motion or helping them to aim properly. He found that this was somewhat necessary when a set of books flew off a shelf and nearly knocked him out when a Slytherin first year tried to aim at her Gryffindor opponent. Many of them found Max as fascinating as Professor Weasley who was the most unusual teacher they had ever seen. Max looked quite surprised to hear several of the students refer to Bill as General and after the class had ended and while Bill was straightening up the room Max asked about it.

“General?” he said with a frown and a grin, but before Bill could answer a voice from the doorway said “That’s right, this is a war and Bill is one of our leaders.” Ginny, Hermione and Ron were all standing in the doorway. “Is this the man you wrote to? Will he find Harry for us?” Ginny continued. Bill turned to Max and said “Max this is my sister Ginny, my brother Ron and Hermione Granger.” Max was eyeing Ginny carefully. “Who is Harry and what are you talking about young lady?” Ginny stepped into the room and walked right up to Max. “This class that Bill teaches was started last year by Harry Potter and we called ourselves Dumbledore’s Army. We were not allowed to practice proper Defense Against the Dark Arts last year so we decided to do it ourselves. Bill is a General in a very real sense because he is teaching us how to fight and how to defend ourselves.” Max was staring wide eyed at this rather small girl looking up at him with a fire blazing in her eyes. As she continued her eyes changed from fiery to glassy as though tears might erupt soon. “Harry has left Hogwarts to try and protect us…” she looked down for a moment then she continued “…to protect me. He has gone to find Voldemort but he isn’t ready yet and we must find him before… before…” She couldn’t continue and Max was stunned by what this girl was saying.

“You think Harry has gone to find and fight Voldemort?” Ginny looked up at Max again and had that fire blazing in her eyes again “Yes and if he finds him Harry will die!” and though Ginny’s voice was strong and forceful without the slightest hint of a shake tears did finally spill down her cheeks. Bill stepped over to his sister and placed his hands on her shoulders. “Ginny don’t worry, we will find him. I do promise you that.” Max suddenly remembered the boy he saw at T.M. Lewin that morning. “Does Harry have dark hair and round glasses?” Bill looked up at Max sharply “Yes he does.” Max slapped his thigh and said “Well I saw him this morning.”
“What?”
“Where was this?”
“Was he alright?”

Everyone one was speaking at once and Max held up his hands. “Hold on a moment. I was in London this morning and I noticed a boy about fifteen or sixteen years old acting nervous and skittish. When a car backfired out in the street he ducked and reached into his pocket so I knew that he was a wizard. He was buying things for a trip and I took a good look at him.” Ginny reached into her robe pocket and pulled out a photograph that she had Colin take of the two of them together a week ago and handed it to Max.

Max could see that these two young people were very much in love from the photo and looked kindly at Ginny. “This is the boy that I saw.” Ginny looked very hopeful when Max said “Do you mind if I keep this young lady?” Ginny wiped her face and said “Of course you can keep it if it helps you to find Harry, and you can call me Ginny.” Bill said “We must go and see Professor Dumbledore and fill Max in on all of the details. Why don’t you three head back to the tower for now.” Ginny said “Not a chance.” and Ron echoed “No Way!” Hermione stepped forward and said “Bill, we really would like to be involved in this. We would like to go with you to see Professor Dumbledore.” Bill understood how they felt. If he had his druthers he would be out looking for Harry himself but, as it was, he needed to stay and continue with the DA classes. Moody had started at the Ministry instead of going straight to Azkaban because Dumbledore had discovered that Harry and Dobby had gone to London on the Knight Bus rather than directly to Azkaban and Lupin had joined the search at the Order’s headquarters and that left Bill feeling somewhat useless. Tonks, who also needed to stay at the school, mentioned leaving to join in the search but Bill had to stay her enthusiasm by pointing out how important their roles were in the big picture.

Once they had entered Professor Dumbledore’s office, everyone sat down except Max as introductions were made. Max was quite interested in meeting with the one touted as the greatest wizard of the age, but asked to be brought up to speed with the Potter situation first. Once he had been given all of the details of the last couple of days he paced the room thinking. “You mean to tell me that that skinny kid I saw today was able to throw off a possession by Voldemort without succumbing to his will?” Professor Dumbledore smiled slightly and said “That skinny kid you saw today has more to him than meets the eye.” Max looked up at Dumbledore and said “Obviously. Well considering what he was buying I think we have something to go on, not to mention the notes he left.” Hermione spoke up at this point “Mr. Barnstodt, what did Harry buy?” Max was a little surprised by her question but he answered “He is not traveling alone. He has a small person with him because he purchased two heavy parkas and one of them was child sized.”

“That would be for Dobby!” Hermione said. Max frowned “Who is Dobby?” Dumbledore answered “Dobby is a rather unusual house elf that left the castle with Harry.” Max still looked puzzled by this and said “Umm… ok whatever. He also purchased heavy clothing for the smaller umm house elf, a backpack, a ski bag and a coin roll.” Hermione got up and crossed to the window. “He is planning on using muggle transportation, probably a train!” Ron stepped over to her and asked “Why do you say that Hermione.” She turned to him and the others and said “Well, think about it. If they are planning on flying at all, which is probably the only way Harry can get onto the island, then they would need heavy parkas because of the weather in Northern Scotland this time of year. If he bought clothes for Dobby he must need to hide or disguise him. So it figures that they would be traveling, at least part of the time through the muggle world which makes sense if he is nervous about ministry wizards finding him. Considering the way he acted when a car backfired that is most likely the case and muggle transportation would be the best way for him to get to northern Scotland undetected. If he bought a ski bag it is must be to hide his broom. The coin roll would be a very good way to carry lots of wizard gold without it making noise because he could just roll it all up and the backpack would work a lot better for flying than his school bag would.”

Max was staring openmouthed at Hermione and said “Would you like to come work for me when you finish school? That is outstanding reasoning young lady and actually exactly what I was thinking.” Hermione blushed scarlet but didn’t answer.
Bill looked up at Max and said “So will you help us to find Harry?” This is just what Max had been waiting for and turned to Professor Dumbledore. “I will find your Mr. Potter but I would also like to set up a meeting with the Hunters and the Order of the Phoenix. Could that be arranged?”

Professor Dumbledore was very pleased to hear this for he had his own ideas about a joint venture with the Hunters was pleased to hear this and said “The Order would be delighted to meet with your Guild sir but we must first recover Mr. Potter. He is the key to everything and must be brought back safely.”

After everyone had left Professor Dumbledore’s office Max and Bill were walking back to Bill’s office when Max turned to Bill and asked “I understand that Harry Potter was the only person that Voldemort was unable to kill but why is he the key to everything?” Bill considered Max’s question for a few minutes while they entered his office and closed the door. If Max was to find Harry and bring him back he should be made to understand why it was so important that Harry come back unharmed. So once he and Max had taken seats Bill proceeded to tell Max everything about the prophecy and the connection between Harry and Voldemort. Max was stunned to find out that the boy was somehow mentally connected to this evil dark wizard. He was beginning to develop a true empathy for this boy. Max looked at Bill and asked “Do you believe in this prophecy Bill?” Bill knew that Max was trying to wrap his brain around all of the astonishing information that he had learned in the past few minutes and looked Max straight in the eye and said with conviction “Yes Max, I do believe the prophecy.” Bill’s reaction more than anything else he had heard had convinced him of the prophecy’s validity. The next morning Max would take the photo of Harry and Ginny start at the train station. The young witch, Hermione, seemed to have a very good head and he felt that as a close friend of the Potter boy perhaps she was right in thinking that he had taken the train to northern Scotland.

Harry had brought back dinner for himself and Dobby from the galley car but he hardly touched his food. Harry kept going over the situation in his mind. A part of him wanted to go back to Hogwarts but every time he started thinking that this was a mistake the vision of Ginny on the quidditch pitch pushed that thought right out of his head. He was feeling very queasy and had no appetite at all. Dobby noticed that he had not eaten and asked “Is the food not good Harry Potter sir?” Harry who had been staring out the darkened window into the inky black canopy of night did not even hear Dobby at first. “Harry Potter sir, are you alright?” Dobby asked a little louder. Harry looked over at him and took a moment to answer. “Dobby she almost died. I can’t loose her, not again, I can’t lose anyone again. Too many people have died or been hurt because of their connection with me. It has to stop Dobby and I am the only one who can stop it. No matter how many times I go over it in my head it’s always the same, I have no choice, I had to leave. I had to.” Harry sighed and turned back to the window. “Is Harry Potter trying to convince Dobby or himself?” Harry turned back to Dobby and seemed to see the elf for the first time. “I don’t know Dobby, I wish I did. It’s getting pretty late why don’t you get some sleep. It will be a little after six in the morning when we arrive in Wick so you’d better get some rest.”

“You must eat Harry Potter you need to keep up your strength.” Harry looked at the food on his plate and his stomach turned flip flops. “I can’t eat right now Dobby, I doubt that it would stay down if I did and before you say it I couldn’t sleep if I wanted to. You get some rest and I’ll wake you before I go to sleep.” Dobby was indeed tired but he was unsure that Harry would try to wake him so he decided to sleep for three hours then he would insist that Harry sleep. Dobby climbed into the sleeping birth and was sound asleep within a couple of minutes. Harry pushed the tray of food aside and continued to stare out the window thinking about his friends and Hogwarts, wondering if he would ever see them again. He dosed off after a couple of hours and when Dobby woke up three hours later he levitated Harry to the sleeping birth and took a seat to watch over him as he slept. Harry woke on his own as the train hit its breaks just outside of the Wick Station. Luckily Harry had repacked everything and they only needed to don their parkas as the train pulled up to the station.

Once they disembarked Harry looked up at the deep grey cloudy sky and frowned. It was very cold but the low cloud cover and the fact that it was still quite dark would work to their advantage for flying the rest of the way to Duncansby Head. Harry could clearly see the coast and Wick Bay and decided that following the coast line was their best bet for navigating the unfamiliar territory.

They got off the train and headed up Station street to River street which led to Harbour Quay and the bay. At the end of Harbour Quay a peninsula of land jutted out into the bay and the end of it was obscured in the early morning foggy mist that was common to these coastal regions in early autumn which worked very well for Harry’s purposes. Once He and Dobby had reached a section of the land pier that obscured them from shore Harry took his broom out of the ski bag and stuffed the bag into his backpack. He then pulled out the book Hermione had given him and turned to the chapter about staying warm and dry on your broomstick. After reading the charm over three times Harry pointed his wand at himself and said “Tutamenaer” and he felt a slow warm sensation envelope him. “Dobby you will be a lot more comfortable if you let me perform this protection charm on you.” Dobby was looking terribly frightened but he nodded. The charm actually calmed Dobby down a bit. Harry looked back toward shore and still could not see the row of buildings there so he threw his leg over his broom and indicated that Dobby should do the same but in front of him. Once Dobby was seated Harry kicked off hard from the ground and soared straight up into the clouds. Dobby was utterly petrified and had somehow managed to flip around so that he was facing Harry and clung on to him with such strength that Harry had to ask him to relax a little because he couldn’t breath. Dobby loosened his grip around Harry’s mid-rift but he buried his head into the front of Harry’s parka and squeaked in a petrified voice the whole way.
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Postby Ferrus » Monday 24 May 2004 7:47:43pm

Well as it seems that no one is commenting, I´ll have to do some! :lol:

Firstly. Great chapter Alice! I liked it when Harry all of a sudden dealt with the barman in the inn!

Just one thing to comment: I´ve noticed that you call the Daily Profet the Daily Profit. Is this intentional?
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Postby Alice I » Tuesday 25 May 2004 3:00:46pm

Ferrus wrote:Just one thing to comment: I´ve noticed that you call the Daily Profet the Daily Profit. Is this intentional? :???:


Nope, That's one of the reasons that I really appreciate comments from you guys.
I will have to go through and change that in all the chapters.

I have looked at these pages so much that little niggly things like that slip under my radar so please everyone reading this (and there are a few) comment when you see a mistake.
Most times it is actually an oversight on my part.

How'd you like Ferrus, Ferrus? :lol:
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Postby Ferrus » Tuesday 25 May 2004 8:54:24pm

Not at all bad :grin: , I suppose we´ll be seeing more of the Hunters Guild in the next chapter. Can you venture to give a date for chapter 17? :-)
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Postby Alice I » Tuesday 25 May 2004 9:09:54pm

well that may take a bit.
I am still blocking it out. I would have to guess at least two weeks. I want it to look good and read well so I don't really want to rush it.
Oh BTW I am changing the info leading up to that faitful quidditch match so that it is a suprise to all.
I have just altered the conversation between Voldie and Lucius so that the actual plan is not revieled, but that something sinister will be happening. That is back on page four in Voldemort's Plan Part 2. (In case anyone is interested.)
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Postby Alice I » Thursday 27 May 2004 2:22:51pm

It will be a while, if at all, that this story continues.
The whole thing is really rather pointless.
I don't know how much I will be around anymore.
I am sorry if this is a disappointment to anyone reading this piece, I just have no heart for it right now.
I am sorry
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Postby Ferrus » Thursday 27 May 2004 7:46:57pm

Awwww... :cry: :cry: :cry:
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Postby Alice I » Thursday 3 June 2004 2:29:18pm

I must apologize for my absence and my last post. I have been dealing with some things at home that made me feel the way I did when I wrote that post.
I am a member of a couple of other forums now because of this story (for research purposes). One of them is a travel forum and one of the members of that forum wrote a very nice comment on my homepage.
When I wrote a response to him it galvanized my feelings and made them clear to me. I will finish this story Ferrus and this is why:

Hello Travelgourmet,
Thanks for your comment of my homepage:

Alice, you are truly gifted. I read you writings. Don't fiddle with Harry, no
need to plagiarize or fan write. Bring on your own family of characters and let
us, the reader, open your gift of storytelling. " I speak for now, I write,
forever." Go, girl.


I am amazed that you were able to read all of those chapters so quickly. There must be close to 200 pages of text there.

I do have plans to write something of my own when I finish this.
The reason I feel I must finish the Fan Fiction is complicated. I have never
written anything before and so the way this thing has grabbed me is a new
experience for me. I have been advised by my father to stop writing this thing for the same reasons that you have stated but for some inexplicable reason I don't seem to be able to walk away from this piece until it is completed. The damn thing keeps drawing me back, I have even dreamed about it.
Does this happen to people who write?
I don't know how to explain it but somehow if I don't finish what I started I
don't think I will be able to move on.
Does that make sense?
I must say there have been times over the last year (That's how long I have been working on this thing) that I have truly hated writing this story but like I said
IT
keeps drawing me back. It's like some sort of voodoo curse or something.
I know: my next piece could be about the "Story That Ate the Writer" LOL yes folks a tale worthy of Stephan King (he he he)
you know that is actually not such a bad idea. hmmmm

Well anyway thank you sincerely for your kind words.
Alice :)


I thank everyone who has read and made comment on this story. The next chapter is as yet unwritten but it is fully layed out on paper so all I have to do now it write it.
Once again thank you for your support
(God that last line sounded like a wine cooler commercial :lol: )
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Postby Ferrus » Thursday 3 June 2004 8:07:46pm

Good to hear that you´re feeling better Alice! As for your reasons for continuing the story, I can understand them very well, so, keep writing! :D
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Postby Alice I » Tuesday 22 June 2004 10:12:32pm

This is the first part of Chapter 17.
There is a character in this section that is supposed to speak with a heavy Scottish accent so any Scotts out there who would like to set me straight on his lines please feel free to.
I am still writing the rest of this chapter but it will go up as soon as I can get to it.
My daughter is taking an enormous amout of my time right now with her being so totally dependant.

Chapter Seventeen - Part 1
Azkaban


Even with the protection charm in place Harry and Dobby were cold and buffeted by the strong winds that routinely pound the coastline. This rugged terrain showed no signs of habitation and Harry flew only a few dozen meters above the rocky cliffs so that he could see to follow the coast line in the hazy, grey, early morning light. He found himself fighting to stay on course against the strong winds and could barely hear himself think over the howling wind and the screechy calls of the thousands of sea birds nesting in the cliff face.

Dobby had Harry in a vice grip around his waist like a terrified chimpanzee clinging to its mother. After forty-five long minutes two jagged pinnacles of rock reaching some two hundred feet above the boiling waves came into view. These triangular spires of layer upon layer of rock jabbing skyward were an impressive and terrifying spectacle to see close up. A strong gust of wind threatened to smash them into one of the towers of rock and Harry had to veer off toward the cliff face of the mainland to avoid a collision with the giant sea stack. He was getting very tired fighting the gale force winds in this rugged land and was relieved to see the lighthouse come into view and landed quickly, fearful that some muggle might see him in the predawn light.

Once they had landed Dobby let go of Harry and dropped to the ground shaking. "Are you alright Dobby?" Harry asked him concerned. Dobby who seemed to relax a little looked up and Harry could just make out the end of his pointy nose under his hood said in a squeaky voice "Dobby is happy to be on the ground Harry Potter sir." then he got up and beckoned Harry forward. "The gate is out in front of the light house sir."

Harry who wanted nothing more than to rest a while almost objected but held his tongue. He would rest later; now he must stay focused on the task at hand, so he followed Dobby to a large rock a hundred meters from the lighthouse. "Dobby, won't someone from that light house see us?" Harry asked looking back anxiously over his shoulder. "No Harry Potter sir, no muggles stay in the lighthouse. It needs no care taker." Harry looked back and said "You mean it's automated?" Dobby stopped and stared at Harry for a moment and replied from under his hood "It needs no caretaker sir, Dobby does not know automated."

Dobby stepped up to the large rock and touched its surface. "The gate is here sir, you must touch the stone and say 'Adaperio' but only a witch or wizard can open the gate." Harry looked down at Dobby and frowned "You can't open the gate Dobby?" Dobby shook his head and said "House elves would either go with their masters or just go directly to the prison." Harry placed his hands on the stone and said "Adaperio" and as he said this his hands sank into the surface of the stone like sinking through liquid glass. He turned instinctively and took Dobby's hand and pulled him through the stone with him.

When they emerged from the other side they were looking out at the sea and the wind had died down quite a bit. It wasn't still but it no longer whipped at them. When Harry turned around to look at the lighthouse he could no longer get a clear view of it. He could tell that a building lay in the distance but it seemed veiled somehow as if only a ghost or a vision unclear to the waking eye. Harry turned back to the view out over the cliff face and saw a railing leading to a winding and rather rickety looking staircase clinging to the cliff face. Far below at the bottom of the stairs was a dock with a ferry moored to it in remarkably calm water compared to the churning seas plainly in view from the top of the cliff. The climb down the stairs looked long and treacherous and Harry was sure that the person running the ferry would see them approaching if they started down now.

He was exhausted and Dobby looked terrified of the decent so he turned to the little elf and said "Let's find a place to stay, and come back after the ferry leaves. I don't want to be seen climbing down." Dobby did not argue and as they passed back through the barrier Harry stowed his broom and shouldered his backpack "Which way Dobby?"

Dobby led them past the lighthouse to a long and winding road that headed off to the west and away from the cliff out into the moorland. Before they had gotten very far Harry looked to his right and saw a sight that was both terrifying and remarkably beautiful at the same time. A huge cleft bitten deeply into the cliffs, where hundreds of thousands of sea birds nested, opened before them; the earth simply dropping away abruptly. Harry veered off the path to get a closer look at this marvelous natural sight. He felt slightly uneasy looking down into the chasm cut into the cliff face hundreds of meters down. He had the sudden sickening thought of someone wandering to close to this at night and falling into the gorge; someone who was unfamiliar with the area, someone like himself. Harry backed away from the Geo and resumed walking along the well trodden path with Dobby who had not approached the cleft in the earth.

Dobby led them to the small town of John O' Groats about a mile and a half from the lighthouse. The sleepy little community had not risen yet and the streets were deserted and quiet. Dobby led them to a place called ‘The Last House and Museum’. Harry was confused by this, as the establishment was clearly a muggle tourist attraction. There was a large car park to the front and side of the building and a well trodden foot path behind the structure running along the cliff face looking out over the sea. The front doors were clearly locked and the building looked dark.

"Dobby where are you taking us?" he asked. Dobby did not answer him but led him around the building to the rear where there was a small storage room attached to the main structure. Then Dobby did something that made Harry gasp; he began to take his clothes off. "Dobby what are you doing!" Harry exclaimed more loudly than he had intended. "Shh… Master, Dobby must enter the inn as your servant." Harry looked around mystified "What are you talking about Dobby! What Inn?" Dobby had removed his parka, boots and pants. As he took off the heavy sweater and handed it to Harry he shivered visibly. "Dobby you are going to freeze!" Harry said as he stuffed the clothes into his backpack. Dobby then took Harry's pack and broom and touched the wall of the storage room. It shimmered slightly and suddenly a door was revealed. Dobby opened the door and Harry followed the little elf dumbstruck. Inside was a very roomy single story Inn.

There was a good sized fire place in the far left corner near a small bar in front of the kitchen. Over to the right was a dark hallway that Harry assumed led away to the Inn's rooms. The large common room had several tables scattered around and there were actually a few patrons already seated here and there. Dobby marched right over to a table near the right side of the room and set Harry's belongings down indicating that he should have a seat. Having already gone through this once with Dobby, Harry automatically reached under his shirt and took several coins from his money belt and handed them over to the elf.

As Dobby approached the bar a harried middle aged wizard came rushing out of the kitchen behind the bar carrying a large tray laden with plates of food. Dobby quickly stepped aside as the wizard paid no notice of him and nearly stepped on the elf. After the wizard had handed the plates of food to his customers he headed back to the kitchen but stopped abruptly at the sight of the house elf. He looked around quickly and noticed Harry sitting in the corner. The wizard turned back to Dobby and said "Two galleons a night for a room, one galleon a day for all your meals. Payment must be made at the beginning of each day."

Dobby nodded and handed six galleons to the wizard and said "I will bring my Master's breakfast to him in his room." The wizard took the gold and stepped behind the bar. He took a copper key from a drawer and handed it to the elf. He eyed Harry suspiciously, for out here it was uncommon to have a servant make arrangements for a stay, and to pay in advance for the next day. The inn keeper couldn't get a good look at him for he had chosen to sit in the far corner away from the illumination of the torches scattered around the room or the fireplace which in itself was also suspicious. The inn keeper could only tell that this stranger was quite young with dark hair and glasses but that was about all he could make out. With the breakout from the island over the summer and all of the traffic lately that had passed through his doors he made note of the young wizard in case any aurors had questions, but did not approach him personally.

Dobby led Harry down the dark hallway to the room at the end of the hall. There were only five rooms total and this struck Harry as somewhat odd. Once they had entered the room Harry turned to Dobby and said "Dobby, there are only five rooms here but there were at least eight people in that common room. How is it that we were given a room?" Dobby said "Harry Potter sir, there were nine people in the common room and they were mostly aurors and guards that work at Azkaban."

Harry paled at these words. He couldn't believe that he had been sitting in a room full of the people who might be the ones looking for him. Dobby saw Harry blanch and said "Master the best place to hide is in plain sight. They work at the prison and would not be looking for you sir." Harry brightened up a bit then "That's right Dobby, and even if they were looking for me, no one knows that you are with me. They would be looking for one person not two." Dobby's ears quivered slightly and he said "I will go now and get you some breakfast Master. The ferry will leave in about an hour. We will have just over two hours before it returns with the guards leaving the island."

Harry took out his cauldron and set it aside then he took the wash basin off the dresser and placed it on the floor. He started a small fire in the basin then placed his cauldron on top of it using a hover charm to keep the cauldron from smothering the fire. He then added some water and dropped in three Alihotsy leaves. The water turned dark green for a moment but as it heated the color slowly faded. Dobby arrived with a plate of eggs and sausage, a side of wheat toast and orange juice for Harry and a small bowl of porridge for himself. Harry ignored the food for a moment as he was watching the water in the cauldron. Once the fluid looked like clear water again he scooped out the sodden leaves and dropped them in the waste bin. He removed the cauldron from the fire and placed it on the floor to cool. After he put the wash basin back on the dresser he sat down to eat. The fact that he was ravenous surprised him, for usually when he was rack with nerves his appetite abandoned him. He remembered the times he had gone off food before the first two tasks of the Triwizard Tournament and what he was about to do; (break into Azkaban Prison and use veritaserum illegally on one of the prisoners as well as using a knockout drug on other prisoners and probably a guard as well); would defiantly qualify as nerve wracking. He was astonished that he was even able to look at his breakfast let alone finish it.

When the Alihotsy water had cooled to room temperature, Harry asked Dobby how much to add to the Slowfax solution. "You need five drops to the full vial of the Slowfax Harry Potter sir." Harry took out the vial of blue liquid and opened the stopper and put five drops in. The slightly blue color turned a sickly yellow for a moment then faded to clear. Harry stoppered the vial and placed it carefully in his pocket along with the Veritaserum, then stepped over to the door and opened it slightly. He could still hear voices coming from the common room and checked his watch. They would want to leave in about an hour; that should give the guards time to descend the stairs and leave on the ferry. Harry turned back to Dobby and said "Wake me in an hour and we will go to the gate.” Dobby nodded and Harry lay down on the bed and was asleep within moments.

Max started looking for Harry in Diagon Alley because Professor Dumbledore had found out that the Knight Bus had taken Harry to the Leaky Cauldron; however Tom told Max that he had seen no sign of Harry at all. Max lowered his voice and asked Tom where one might go when trying to hide and Tom directed him with a grimace to The Brigands Burrow. "I hate to think of the lad in such a woe begotten hole! He shoulda' known he could trust me! He shoulda' come to me first!" Max shook his head "Would you have hidden him from the people looking for him who care about him?" Tom hung his head realizing that Harry would not have stayed at the Leaky Cauldron when he was running away. "I just worry fer the lad that's all." Max told Tom that he would find Harry and bring him home safely then thanked him for his help before heading off for the Brigands Burrow.

The proprietor of the Brigand's Burrow seemed extremely nervous when Max asked him about a young wizard traveling with a house elf. "I don't know what yer talkin' about. An even if I did, I don't talk abou' me customers ter strangers." It took Max nearly two hours to finally get this toothless old wizard to admit that Harry had indeed stayed there. The old man had pay a dubious healer ten Galleons to have a silencing charm lifted from him and he was terrified that Max was going to use a severing charm to remove his tongue because he had talked.

Max left the Brigands Burrow just a little mystified by this young boy who seemed to be acting completely out of character from what he had been told about him. Could this sixteen year old be clever enough to pass himself off as a dark wizard? He certainly seemed to have convinced the proprietor of the Brigand's Burrow, a seedy place that is frequented by dark wizards. This boy had managed to frighten the old proprietor into keeping quite about his stay there, he had planned on using muggle transportation to make it more difficult to track his movements, he was using the house elf to pay for his room and meals to avoid direct contact with other wizards and Max found himself beginning to develop some respect for young Mr. Potter.

Max had taken the photo that Ginny gave him and bewitched it to look as any muggle photo would and proceeded to Kings Cross rail station. He had seen Harry at around ten thirty yesterday morning in London and he had left the Brigands Burrow at twelve thirty so he would have not gotten to the station until around one in the afternoon. Max pulled out a badge that he had acquired for use with muggles when investigating the where-abouts of the wizards he was tracking. He stepped into the public restroom first and took a suit and tie out of a knapsack he carried and changed his clothes, then made sure his ponytail was tucked neatly inside his suit jacket. He put a small microphone in his left ear that had a white coiled wire leading down inside the lapel to complete the look. Upon inspection of himself in the mirror he noticed that the suit was a bit wrinkled so checking first to see that he was alone in the bathroom he took out his wand and pointed it at himself and gave it a sharp flick. The suite straightened itself out and now looked as though it had been freshly pressed. With a satisfied smile Max replaced his wand in his jacket and left the restroom. After stowing his knapsack in a locker he proceeded to the ticket window. The young lady behind the glass was quite impressed with Max and his FBI badge all the way from America. When Max asked her to escort him to the station manager's office she was only too happy to escort this tall handsome agent from the states.

The station manager was a middle aged balding man with a very pleasant disposition named Mr. Waxmeyer. He looked over Max's FBI badge carefully though before indicating that he should take a seat. "How may British Rail be of service to the United States Federal Bureau of Investigation today?" he asked rather primly. Max pulled out the photograph of Harry and Ginny and handed it over to the man. "This boy has gone missing. He is the son of a United State's Senator who is here on vacation. We have good reason to believe that he may have taken a train from here yesterday afternoon to northern Scotland. I would very much like to take a look at your surveillance tapes to see if he was here and purchased train tickets."

Mr. Waxmeyer was still looking at the picture of Harry and Ginny frowning slightly when he looked up at Max. "You said tickets; do you believe this boy to be traveling with someone else?" Max raised an eyebrow and looked at this man appraisingly. He was surprised that he had picked up on that little slip. He would have to be very careful with this fellow. "There is a slight possibility that this boy may be traveling with a companion. We are unsure if this is the case so I would greatly appreciate your digression in this matter sir." Max leaned closer to Mr. Waxmeyer in a conspiratorial fashion and lowered his voice "There is a possibility that he is being coerced in some manner… but we are not considering this a kidnapping… yet." Mr. Waxmeyer sat back with wide eyes and said "Of course Agent Howe, I will not speak of this to anyone. If you will just wait here for a moment I will pull the tapes from yesterday." He turned back to Max and asked "Is there a time frame that you wish to view?" Max smiled inwardly but in a rather business like tone said I would be interested in seeing everything from 12:30 onward to start with sir." The station manager nodded and left the room.

It took Max only about half an hour of viewing the surveillance tapes to spot Harry. He knew what Harry’s parka looked like so that was actually quite helpful. As he and Mr. Waxmeyer sat in front of a bank of televisions playing the tapes from the seven different cameras Max spotted him coming into the station at just past one o'clock. "There he is." said Max indicating Harry's entrance seen on one of the screens. He proceeded to the large map of the train routes throughout England and Scotland. After a few moments they watched him walk over to the ticket counter. "Can you stop the tape there?" Max asked and Mr. Waxmeyer froze the image. "The time stamp on the tape is 13:34. I would like to speak with the ticket agent that worked that booth yesterday."

Mr. Waxmeyer said "That would be Sheila, the young lady who brought you up to my office; I'll go get her for you." Max took the tape off hold and watch as Harry purchased his tickets. He followed him out of frame and looked to see him from one of the other camera angles. Unfortunately for Max, Harry and Dobby had chosen to sit in the only spot in the entire terminal waiting area that was just out of sight of the cameras. Max wondered if this was just dumb luck on Harry's part or if he was looking for a very clever runaway. Indeed Max's opinion of Harry was increasing with the chase.

Sheila looked at the picture of Harry and Ginny and smiled brightly up at Max. "I remember him agent Howe. He was kinda' cute but he seemed pretty nervous to me. I remember wondering why he wasn't in school." Max asked her "Do you remember what ticket he purchased?" She smiled again and looked dreamily at Max "Oh yes sir, he bought two tickets for the number 854 from London to Wick. It left at 3:00 yesterday afternoon and should have gotten them to Wick by 6:00 o’clock this morning." Max frowned and looked at his watch; it was already past noon. He looked at Sheila and asked "Did you see his traveling companion?" She frowned now and thought about it "I'm sorry sir; he left the ticket window and disappeared into the crowd. It was fairly busy at that time and I didn't see where he went. I'm sorry" Max smiled warmly at her "That is quite alright Sheila, you have been most helpful." Shelia got up to leave and looked back at Mr. Waxmeyer and Max "He will be alright won't he? I mean he seemed like such a nice young man." Mr. Waxmeyer patted Sheila on the shoulder and said "I am sure that he will be just fine. Agent Howe will find him very soon and bring him home."

Once Sheila had left the office Mr. Waxmeyer turned to Max and said "I can contact the train staff and see if anyone remembers him or the person traveling with him." Max got up and headed for the door, "That won't be necessary; I will have our agent in Thurso pick him up now that we know where he has gone to." Mr. Waxmeyer was not so easily dissuaded though. "But if this is indeed a kidnapping wouldn't you need to know what the kidnapper looked like to catch them?" Mr. Waxmeyer was now looking suspiciously at Max. "As I said we are not calling this a kidnapping yet sir. As you saw yourself on the screen the boy purchased his tickets without anyone standing over him. Indeed he seemed to enter the station alone. There are aspects of this case that you know nothing about, but suffice it to say that we are fairly certain we know with whom he is traveling. The Senator would appreciate your digression in this matter and thanks you for your assistance." Mr. Waxmeyer nodded curtly but realized that if the American FBI were involved then he should mind his own business. He showed Max out to the main terminal and wished him luck in finding the Senator's son yet followed him with his eyes all the way out of the station.

Max left Kings Cross and wanted to head straight for Wick but he wanted to retrieve his knapsack first. He stole around a corner into a deserted and dark alley, and then with a loud pop he was gone. Max appeared at his aunt's flat the next moment to find Ferrus having a game of cribbage with Rae. "Hello Max, back already?" Max handed a key to Ferrus and told him where Kings Cross was. "Please go get my bag from this locker. I am afraid the station manager might find it somewhat suspicious for agent Howe to be taking a knapsack out of a locker at his terminal after the conversation we just had." Max then used his aunt's telephone to make a long distance call to a friend of his in the FBI. After a heated conversation Max came back into the living room to find that Ferrus had already returned with the bag. "You making trouble for Barney again?" Max looked at Ferrus and said "He owes me a favor, and in a couple of months he'll owe me another. That's the way the game is played Ferrus, you of all people should know that!" Ferrus raised his hands and shook his head smirking "I know Max, I just love giving you a hard time." Max took the bag and left the room. After only a few minutes he came back, dressed in jeans, a heavy sweater over a turtleneck and a heavy parka. Ferrus just looked at him "Did this mark run off to the artic?" Max smiled slightly and said "Northern Scotland in November can be pretty darn cold or so I'm told." He bent down and gave Rae a kiss and said "I'll only be a day or two." and with a loud pop he was gone.

It seemed to Harry that he had just closed his eyes when Dobby shook him awake. It took him a moment to gather his thoughts and shake the sleep from his mind but in a few moments he was up and stowing his invisibility cloak in his robe pocket. "Dobby I can't apparate but I can fly to the lighthouse. You must put the parka and boots on at least. If you want to just meet me in front of the light house that should be fine. At this distance it will take me about five minutes to fly it.” Dobby nodded and put the boots and parka on and with a snap of his fingers he was gone. Harry took the ski bag and slung it over his shoulder. He made sure to pull the hood up around his face before he entered the common room that was now deserted except for the inn keeper behind the bar, who followed Harry all the way to the door with his eyes.

When Harry stepped out into the cold morning air he looked around cautiously. It was still hazy and he could see no one around. He stepped behind the building facing the walking path and the cliff edge then looked left and right before taking his Firebolt from the ski bag. He stuffed the now empty bag in his cloak pocket and looked around once again for signs of movement. He mounted and kicked off hard shooting straight up into the foggy sky. The sun had come up and while the day was still obscured by grey clouds and some left over early morning fog he would still be much more visible, so he took off northeast at top speed for the lighthouse. The wind was still quite strong but not as much as the trip along the eastern shore line and he saw the lighthouse come into view after only four minutes of flying. He dropped down so quickly and suddenly that Dobby squealed in fear.

"Harry Potter sir! Dobby thought you had lost control, Dobby thought you were going to crash! Harry Potter sir you must be more careful. Dobby knows you are a very good flyer sir but this part of the country has terrible winds and seas. You could be blown into the cliffs or out to sea where you would surly die!" Dobby was wringing his hands and his large bat like ears were quivering madly. "Dobby relax, I flew so fast because I wanted to get here and on the ground before any one saw me." Harry opened the gate and they went through.

The climb looked as difficult and dangerous as it had previously but there was nothing for it except to begin their decent. Much to Harry's surprise the stairs leading down the cliff face may have looked rickety but they were far from it. They had a very solid feel to them and the decent was no where near as bad as it looked to be. About halfway down the cliff face Harry noticed a small cave some ten meters from the stairs. There was a narrow ledge just on the other side of the railing that went right to the cave. On an impulse Harry hopped the railing and started along the ledge toward the cave. "Harry Potter sir, where are you going!?" Dobby asked in a frightened voice. Harry said "I want to see that cave."

Once he reached the entrance to the cave he only had to duck a little to get in. Ten feet back from the entrance was a small rock tunnel leading into the cliff. Harry got down on his hands and knees and crawled through. The tunnel was only two meters long and when he reached the end he pulled out his wand and said "Lumos". The tunnel opened up into a large cavern that went back several meters. Harry smiled to himself and looked around. Suddenly a small high pitched voice cried "What is it? Why have you come here Harry Potter?" Harry looked around at Dobby and said "Plan B" Dobby looked at Harry as though he had lost his mind "Plan B sir? Dobby does not understand." Harry smiled and looked over at Dobby "If we have trouble, if someone tries to catch us, we have another place to hide. We can also watch the ferry from here as well as who is coming and going! This is actually great Dobby. Maybe we should…" Harry looked around again and noticed how cold it was in the cave and realized that they had very little of the dried travel food left. "Never mind Dobby, we had better get back to the stairs. I want to be down at the dock hiding before the ferry gets back."

Once they made their way down to the dock the wind had picked up a little. Harry and Dobby sat down behind a stack of barrels on the dock to wait for the ferry to return. "Dobby when the ferry leaves I want you to go directly to the island. I don't think we will both be able to hide very well under my cloak especially with my broom." Dobby looked at Harry and said "Why didn't Harry Potter hide his broom in the cave?" He turned to Dobby and said "I'm taking it with me Dobby; I need to be able to get off that island quickly if we get caught." Dobby nodded and said "Dobby should take Harry Potter's broom to the island for him. I will take it to the back of the island by the waste pipe that comes from the cistern room." This had not occurred to Harry. It would be much easier to sneak onto the ferry and off again at the island if he wasn't trying to carry his broom as well. Harry was once again struck by how glad he was to have Dobby with him.

After nearly an hour of shivering behind the stack of barrels the ferry returned to the dock. It was run by a tall imposing looking man with grizzled hair and beard. He spoke with a heavy Scottish accent and seemed easily irritated by the guards getting off his boat. "Hey you there, watch it laddie!" he growled at a young wizard as he was leaving the ferry for he had knocked over a barrel of white powder. Harry was not please about this either, for the invisibility cloak wouldn't hide his footprints. "Ye ern't goin' no wheres till yea clean tha' up" The young wizard looked very tired and whipped out his wand and casually waved it at the spill. The powder swept itself off into the water and the Ferryman approached the wizard menacingly. "Ye'll no make a mess o' me firth boy!" The young wizard looked up into the sea worn face of the Ferryman and with a hard swallow he pointed his wand at the water now frothing whitish grey with the powder and with a complicated wave and an incantation that Harry couldn't make out the churning water became clean with no sign of the contamination.

The wizard looked up at the Ferryman and said in a not so steady voice "Your Firth? Since when does a squib lay claim to these waters?" If the Ferryman had looked imposing before it was nothing to the way he looked then. He towered over the wizard and said "When ye kin navigate the savage seas o' the Gates o' heck with a bunch o' snot nosed mainlanders to the island an back without crashin' into the stacks or cliffs; then ye kin call her yer Firth too." The Ferryman did not raise his voice but it held such a tone of fury that the young wizard backed up and tripped over the barrel he had tipped over. He got swiftly to his feet as the Ferryman stared hard at him. Once the young wizard and the other passengers from the island had started up the stair, the Ferryman snorted derisively at their departing backs and turned the barrel upright, then went into the wheelhouse of the boat.

Harry waited for a few minutes before turning to Dobby "Take the Firebolt and go now. I will hide on the ferry and make my way to you when it comes to the island." Harry, covered in the invisibility cloak, snuck onto the ferry and hid behind two large barrels to the side of the wheelhouse. After fifteen minutes or so a small group of wizards stepped onto the ferry from the dock. They were speaking in hushed tones too far from Harry to hear. Harry was about to come out from behind the barrels to get closer when the Ferryman stepped out of the wheelhouse. He walked over to the group and held out a huge crusted hand and each in turn dropped two gold coins into it. He raised an eyebrow at them and turned to look out at the water. "The tides er thunderin' through the Firth just now, low tide'll be in an hour."

A portly wizard with graying hair stepped forward and addressed the Ferryman "I am given to understand that you are the only captain that can navigate the Firth at high tide. We wish to go to the island now as we have a matter of great importance to discuss with the warden." He dropped three more gold coins into the Ferryman's hand and smiled politely up at the large Scott. The Ferryman eyed this wizard for a moment then pocketed the gold and said "I'll be roping me barrels down before we set out. The Firth at high tide is no place for un-stowed gear." The wizard took out his wand and conjured tight ropes around all of the barrels and boxes on the ferry and looked up to the Ferryman "We are in a bit of a hurry sir." The Ferryman stomped into the wheelhouse and after a moment called out "Ye better come in here if ye' don' want to be swept overboard!" Harry felt panicky and tried to come out from behind the barrels but they had been tied to the side rail pinning them down and he couldn't budge them. The wizards disappeared into the wheelhouse and shut the door. As the ferry started out into the Firth, Harry tried to use his concentration exercises to calm his fear but it proved useless as the ferry left the cove where it was docked and entered the open water.

The Pentland Firth is the stretch of sea that runs between The Scottish mainland and the Orkney Islands connecting the Atlantic Ocean and the North Sea. Four times a day at high tide the currents from the Atlantic and the North Sea rip through this narrow channel transforming the water into a tumultuous torrent of wind and crashing waves that would make the heartiest sea captain shudder. There are only one or two captains that can pilot a vessel across the savage waters of the Firth at high tide but it is nothing short of suicide to venture the crossing at high tide in a storm. None alive could do this except the Ferryman and he had only accomplished this untold feat but once many long years ago. It wasn't storming when they ventured out into the Firth but a storm was brewing and that churned up the waters providing for a rollercoaster ride for the occupants inside the wheelhouse not to mention the ferry’s hidden occupant trapped behind the barrels out on deck.

The ferry was tossed about like a toy in the crashing waves as the wind, whipping through the straight at nearly 30 miles per hours, set itself against the tide of the Atlantic pouring with thunderous abandon into the North Sea. Harry found himself clinging for dear life to the ropes that bound his makeshift prison as huge frothing waves drenched him when they broke over the sides of the boat. Half way through the journey he felt sure that he would drown before they arrived at the island and found himself gasping for breath after every torrential swell engulfed him.

The cloak became caught in the ropes as he clutched them or he would surely have lost it as the boat rocked precariously draining the water over the side and threatening to take him with it. By the time they had left the thrashing waters behind them Harry was weak and limp holding the ropes binding the barrels to the rail. He coughed salt water from his lungs and his hands were painfully numb from the freezing water.

Once the Ferry entered the relatively calm water, (in comparison to the open waters of the Pentland Firth), of the cove at the island he fumbled in his robes with fingers that didn't work, but finally found his wand. He pointed it at the ropes croaked "Diffindo!" between coughs and the rope split and broke. Harry pushed the barrels aside, and keeping the cloak wrapped around him, made for the back of the ferry. As soon as they came close enough, he jumped to the rocks below as the ferry continued on to the dock. Drenched, freezing and coughing uncontrollably Harry got up and made his way as quickly as he could to the back of the island away from the ferry and the front gates of the fortress that towered above him.

Even though he could not see him Dobby heard Harry coming because he was still coughing the salt water from his lungs. "Harry Potter sir! Over here!" he shouted in the direction of the sounds. Harry spied Dobby but took the cloak off only when he came so close to the prison wall that no one looking out a window would see him. He was drenched and freezing and his lips were blue and his hands and feet were numb with cold. "Hhhow ddddoo wwee ggget iiin?" he asked through violently chattering teeth. Dobby looked very worried for him and said "Harry Potter sir, you are freezing, you will get sick. Come, there is a pipe we must crawl through to get in." Dobby led him to a pipe coming from the side of the fortress. Harry looked at it dubiously for it was obviously a drainage pipe that was fairly narrow. Dobby would fit but it would be a tight squeeze for him. "The pipe is not too long; if we hurry we can get inside before it is used again."

Harry just looked at Dobby shivering violently as the implications of that last statement sunk in. What would happen to them if the pipe was in use while they were inside of it? Harry didn't want to think about it and started to crawl up inside. The climb was slippery and risky and he couldn't feel anything with his hands but pushed his arms against the sides for leverage anyway. After what seemed forever in the narrow smelly pipe Harry saw a dim light just ahead of him and scrambled frantically for it. He grasped the edges of the pipe with unfeeling fingers and hauled himself up and out dropping in a crumpled heap on the floor of the waste water basin of the cistern room in the bowels of the fortress.

Harry looked around the cistern room and saw that there was a three foot high chain link fence surrounding a large piston type pump that supplied the fresh water. At the end of a small corridor in the room was a gray cabinet on the left and some shelves straight ahead filled with cleaning supplies. The residents on the island were allowed 250 gallons of potable water per day. The cisterns were sounded daily and a record kept insuring that the fresh water supply wouldn't run out. There were two cisterns, each holding 25,000 gallons each with all waste water draining out of the pipe that Harry and Dobby had just climbed through.

Harry lay shivering on the floor and Dobby came over to him. "Harry Potter sir, we must get you warmed up and dry. Please come with me sir." he squeaked. Dobby led Harry out of the cistern room and down a dark narrow corridor to the left down to a large room filled with wash basins and a large sunken water pit. This was the prison laundry and Dobby started to take Harry's soaking clothes off of him then brought over a large terry towel to wrap around Harry while he cleaned and dried Harry's clothes. Harry leaned back against the wall wrapped in the towel as a fresh wave of coughing wracked his exhausted body. Dobby kept casting surreptitious looks at Harry as though he were going to keel over any moment. Harry realized that he was in a very compromising situation and that his plan for gathering information was now seriously jeopardized. 'How could I have gotten myself into such a bad situation? What am I doing here?' he thought to himself as he drifted off in a semi sleep while Dobby bustled around the laundry room.

He was flying around the quidditch pitch with Ginny playing cat and mouse. The sun was setting and its golden rays were reflecting off her fiery red hair making her face glow. A thestral suddenly shot up from the forest, and for a moment Ginny and the beast were silhouetted together. Harry heard a high pitched laugh that chilled him to his bone and he turned quickly to see Voldemort floating in mid air pointing his wand at Ginny. "You can not save her Potter, you can not save yourself!" Then he pointed his wand at Ginny and shouted "Avada Kedavra!" and a green light shot from his wand. A horrible rushing sound shot past Harry toward Ginny and Harry tried to fly to her first…

"Wake up Harry Potter sir, wake up!" Dobby was shaking Harry and slapping him in the face. Harry's eyes shot open and it took him a moment to focus. "Ginny!" Dobby gave him another shake and said "You were dreaming Harry Potter!" Harry looked around and finally seemed to clear his mind and realize where he was. Dobby handed him his clean and dry clothes which felt wonderfully warm to him. He had stopped shivering and his lips were no longer blue. He could feel his hands and feet, and once he had gotten dressed again Harry felt ready to move on. He looked down at his wrist watch but it was no good. It had become so water logged on the ferry ride that it had stopped working. "What time is it Dobby?" Dobby, who had been checking the corridor for signs of movement, turned back to Harry and said "It is just after eleven thirty Harry Potter."
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Postby Reverie Revenge » Monday 28 June 2004 3:22:01pm

Alice, I've finally read it :grin: ... you'll get my detailed review by PM. For now just: what remains for JKR??? :???: :lol:
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Postby Alice I » Wednesday 14 July 2004 8:25:16pm

Chapter Seventeen - Part 2
Azkaban


Harry was astounded that it was not yet mid-day for it felt like ages had past since they got off the train at the station in Wick. "Dobby, I want to try and get into the warden’s office. There should be a list of prisoners there. I don't think we have time to just wander around looking for someone likely. I want to see who is here and where they are." Dobby nodded and led Harry down the empty corridor to the door of the west tower. There was a short corridor leading to another door that opened up to a spiraling staircase at the center of the tower. All of the doors leading to the prisoners’ cell blocks were above the main floor or the central corridor of the prison that ran between the towers and opened directly off the stairwell. The doors that led to the laundry and cistern rooms in the basement of the central building, as well as the kitchens, which were above the laundry, and the main corridor that housed the guards quarters, the front door of the prison and the warden's office opened to a short corridor leading to a second door that in turn opened to the main central building. Once the tower stairwell had passed above the level of the central building connecting the two towers there were no short corridors behind the doors from the stairwell but the different levels of cells. Each cell block held fourteen cells positioned around the outside wall of the tower.

Before they made it up to the door to the main corridor Harry started coughing again because of the water he has aspirated during the ferry ride. Once the coughing spell had subsided he pulled out his wand and pointed it at his throat and said "Quietus" Dobby looked on curiously until Harry started coughing again only this time the sound was so quiet Dobby would not have heard him if he hadn't been standing right next to him. Covered by the invisibility cloak Harry and Dobby opened the door to the main corridor only wide enough to slip through. There were two guards stationed by the front doors of the prison.

The rest of the hallway was quite and deserted. Dobby moved forward slowly and silently with Harry following closely. He found that he had grown just enough over the last year to need to stoop slightly to keep himself as well as Dobby covered by the cloak. About halfway down the corridor on the left were the front doors and the only guards Harry had seen thus far. The two guards were standing stock still looking straight ahead like the guards at Buckingham Palace. A few meters further down on the right was the door to the warden's office. There were several voices speaking in loud angry voices coming from within the office, but the door muffled them enough that Harry couldn't make out what was being said. "How do we get in?" Harry tried to ask Dobby but found that he had no voice from the charm he had placed on himself. Dobby turned to him and said "Wait here." then before Harry could stop him he snapped his fingers and was gone. Harry had no idea what Dobby had in mind so he decided to sit down and wait for his return.

The flush of fever was starting to make him sleepy and Harry almost nodded off when noise to his left startled him and made his jaw drop. Dobby was walking down the hall in plain sight with a tray laden with a pot of tea, several cups, cream and biscuits as well as a variety of jams. Harry got to his feet quickly and looked back at the guards at the front doors. They took no notice, at all, of the small elf passing in front of them with the leaden tray. Once Dobby reached the office door he held the tray for a moment with only one hand and snapped his fingers with the other. The door to the warden's office opened and Dobby proceeded inside. Harry quickly followed him and once clear of the door he immediately slipped off to the side and backed up to the wall so as to not run into anyone. He leaned up against the wall for a moment feeling slightly dizzy and very warm under the cloak.

The group of wizards that had taken the ferry at high tide as well as the Ferryman were in the room. The Ferryman looked angry and was standing over the warden with his hands on his hips glaring down at him. "I'll be taking me wages now an with the storm commin’ I'll no be crossin' the Firth till tomorrow. Ye ken take a portkey back if needs be. And you!" he said rounding on the portly wizard with graying hair. "Yer lucky me barrels didno fall overboard! That rope ye tied em' down with didno hold! Low tide after the storms' the next time I'll be crossin' an no before!" With that he turned on his heel and stalked out of the room slamming the door behind him.

Dobby had been setting tea out for the wizards in the warden's office none of whom paid any notice of him at all. Harry edged closer to the desk and looked over the papers on it. There didn't seem to be anything useful out on the top. He swayed slightly looking around wondering where to look next when the portly wizard's next words sent a chill down his spine.

"With Alastor Moody coming I don't think you need to worry about young Malfoy escaping Edgar. Lucius would not be foolish enough to risk recapture even for his own son." The warden shook his head and said "I understand that it would be risky Artimus but I am still concerned. Has word leaked out of young Malfoy's imprisonment yet, and how long before we can expect to see Moody?" Harry was feeling panicky. Moody could see through his cloak, and walls for that matter. He swayed again backing into a cabinet but the sound was masked by the movement of one of the other wizards who stepped forward. "The Minister is keeping this quiet for the moment but that won't keep. Narcissa Malfoy is still abroad but she is due to return within a week’s time. Fudge wants to use Draco as bait to capture his father but it is strictly against Ministry guidelines. The Wizengamot will never approve such measures, even to capture Lucius Malfoy also you should expect Moody sometime this afternoon by portkey."

Harry couldn't believe his ears. Draco Malfoy was here in Azkaban. He knew who his target would be, now all he had to do was find the right cell. Dobby finished putting the tea out and started for the door. Harry moved quickly and cautiously around the room to get there before the elf left the room. As soon as Dobby opened the door they both slipped out and Harry followed Dobby past the guards at the front door to the west tower. As soon as they were safe in the stairwell Harry removed the cloak panting slightly then started coughing so hard he sat down and leaned his back against the cool stone wall of the stairwell. Dobby looked very concerned but instead of saying anything, handed Harry a parchment with a list of names and numbers on it.

Harry took a moment to focus on what he was holding. Sweat was running down the back of his neck and from his forehead into his eyes. He wiped his face with the back of his hand and looked carefully at the parchment when his eyes opened wide with surprise. "Dobby, how did you get this?" Harry asked the elf looking astonished at him. Dobby's large ears quivered for he had not been able to hear Harry’s entire question as there was a loud banging coming from below them and his voice was barely audible with the charm he had used earlier.

Harry pulled out his wand and pointed it at his throat and said "Sonorus" then he looked around and said "Err" as if testing to make sure his voice wasn't going to boom through the stairwell giving them away. Dobby looked up at Harry and said "Look down the list of names to the bottom Harry Potter sir." Harry did as he was told and at the bottom of the list was the name Draco Malfoy WT-8-12. "Dobby how?"

Dobby said "Wizards never notice house elves when they are working. A mark of a good house elf is to never been seen and Dobby is a good house elf Harry Potter sir." Harry looked at him and said "You are a very good house elf Dobby…
…and a very good friend. This means West Tower, er… 8th floor cell number 12?" Harry asked and Dobby just smiled then started to lead Harry up the stairs. When they got to the eighth floor it was easy to find Malfoy. His cell was to the right of the stairwell. Directly in front of the stairwell door was a desk with a chair and a filing cabinet next to the desk as well as a smaller table that held a few cups and dishes and a pot of what smelled like very strong coffee. When Harry and Dobby slipped through the door luckily the guard was walking around the tower checking on all of the occupants in his charge. The cells were situated around the outside wall of the tower with a long narrow window in each as well as a wall separating one cell from the next resembling the spokes of a wheel.

The stairwell ran like a central pillar up the tower and there was a narrow aisle separating the central stairwell and the cell doors. As the guard came around the corner on his way back to his desk where Harry and Dobby stood under the cloak they plastered themselves up against the wall of the central staircase so that he wouldn’t bump into them. The guard had pulled out a cup and was pouring himself some coffee when Harry and Dobby slowly inched their way around the corridor until they reached Malfoy’s cell. It was two doors down from the guard desk and just out of sight. When Harry approached Malfoy's cell he could see him sitting in the far corner looking out the window with an unreadable expression on his face. The cells just to the right and left of Malfoy's cell housed prisoners who looked as though they could have been in Azkaban for a very long time indeed. The prisoner to the left looked to be at least 100 years old, was gaunt and had long stringy hair covering his face. When Harry moved past his cell, this prisoner turned his face toward him and the insanity evident in his eyes sent a chill down Harry's spine that was even more pronounced than the chills he was feeling as his temperature rose with fever. The prisoner to the right of Malfoy's cell was impossible to see as he was lying down on his cot turned over on his side facing away from the door and snoring loudly.

Harry thought wildly for a moment that right now would be the perfect time to give the veritaserum to Malfoy while the man on the right slept and the man to the left was clearly insane and would not repeat anything, the guard was out of sight around the corner drinking coffee but there was no way to give the drug to Malfoy and have him willingly take it. Harry was feeling rushed for time for he did not know when Moody was going to show up, only that he was coming and he had to be out of the prison by the time he arrived. Dobby pulled Harry's arm to get him to lower his head and whispered in his ear "Give me the vials Harry Potter sir. I will go to the kitchen and place the drugs in the prisoner's water goblets. It is time for the midday meal to be brought to the inmates."

Harry carefully reached into his robes and pulled out the Veritaserum and the Slowfax then handed them over to Dobby who vanished with a snap. Malfoy was looking out the window and turned at the sound staring out at the empty corridor. The guard at the desk had just set his coffee cup down on his saucer and did not appear to have heard the sound. The old man in the cell to the left of Malfoy was looking directly at Harry and started to cackle madly and actually pointed directly at Harry. This old man made him exceedingly nervous and he edged further away so that he was no longer in the man's direct line of vision.

Harry sat down quietly waiting for Dobby to return closing his jaw tightly to keep his teeth from chattering as he was now feeling quite chilled. After fifteen minutes the door to the stairwell did open and Dobby and two other house elves emerged from the stairwell carrying trays. Dobby placed a tray of food on the Guard’s table first then the guard stood up and turned to get the pitcher of coffee to refill his cup. When his back was turned Dobby dropped two drops of the Slowfax solution into his coffee cup before picking up another tray for the old man. He slid this through the slot at the bottom of the cell door and did the same for Malfoy’s cell. Even though Malfoy had grown up with Dobby, he paid no attention to him at all and did not realize that the elf serving him his lunch was the same elf who Harry had freed from his family's service four years ago.

The sleeping man was given a try by another elf and Harry wondered if Dobby had been able to drug this man's water as well. It seemed it didn't matter as the sleeping man grunted loudly in his sleep but did not roll over. After a moment or two he continued to snore loudly as he slept on. The old man eyed his food suspiciously then came directly up to his cell door and put his sunken head almost through the bars looking around. When his gaze came across Harry's position he seemed to hesitate and stare intently at him for a moment then he stood back from the bars and slid his tray back through the slot at the bottom of his cell door.

Harry blanched at this for it was obvious to him that the old man could not only see him through his cloak but somehow knew that the food was drugged. Harry stood irresolute for a moment not knowing whether he should abandon this effort or not when Malfoy got up from his cot and bent down to pick up his tray of food. He set it down on the cot and took the goblet. Harry held his breath while he watched Malfoy drain the entire thing before wiping his mouth on his sleeve. It took less than ten seconds for Malfoy to drop to the floor with a glazed unfocused look on his now slack face. The guard had not drunk his coffee yet but was busy eating his lunch and was out of visual range. Harry threw caution to the wind as this would be his only chance to conduct the interrogation and moved closer to Malfoy's cell. The other prisoners were eating their lunch and there was enough ambient noise that Harry thought he might have a chance to do this with out attracting too much attention. The old man sat in his cell near the door and peered at Harry with those insane eyes while Dobby had stepped over to Harry and slipped under the cloak after the other elves had left.
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