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Postby snuffles360uk » Thursday 10 October 2002 8:16:14pm

I've got a new poem :grin: I dont think its quite as good as the others but stil....

The Boy Who Lived

Just an ordinary boy is what he thought,
A proper family, his parents is all he saught.
For with his Uncle and his Aunt, lived this boy,
And living with them brought him no fun and joy.

At the age of one he was left on their doorstep,
And how unlucky could this boy get,
As all in one night, rescued from an accident with a scar on his head,
And sent to live at his Uncle's, his parents dead.

His Aunt and Uncle made his life bad,
But to endure his cousin he also had,
As bullying him was his favourite sport,
And how to run fast he was soon tought.

The cupboard under the stairs is where his things were kept,
But that was because it was the place he slept.
all his clothes belonged to his cousin first,
And for him they're far to big to make it worse.

And then one day this letter came,
Then ten more came that were the same,
And to him they were all addressed,
But his Uncle grabbed the first and all the rest.

And when, in the eggs the letters were sent,
To a hut on a rock in the middle of the sea they went.
While they were in the hut he had to sleep on the floor,
He looked at his cousin's watch, he'd be eleven in a minute more.

Five, the seconds to his birthday he was counting down,
BANG, he wondered what had made that sound,
Three, he heard it again, what was out in the storm,
One, BANG! and the door from it's hinges was torn.

An enormous man stood in the doorway,
The man looked at the dooir,"Sorry 'bout tha'" they heard him say.
He started a fire and some sausages he cooked,
Then at the boy he looked.

"I'm Hagrid, keeper of the keys at Hogwarts,
I'm game keeper, really I do all sorts.
Of course you'll of heard of 'Ogwarts, wont you?"
"No" said the boy not knowing what to do.

"But your a wizard, you have to know all about it!"
"What did you say?" asked the boy his curiosity lit.
"Your a wirard, your famous, everyone knows yer name!"
"But why?" his head was swimming, a wizerd and fame.

"Yer Harry Potter, the boy who lived!"

So what do u think? :grin:
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Postby Scellanis » Thursday 10 October 2002 8:26:05pm

not the best uve done but still excellent :grin:
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Postby snuffles360uk » Thursday 10 October 2002 8:30:17pm

I dont like that one. I chose i difficult way to write it and the words I wanted to use would't rhyme. I'm gonna do i different Harry one later. Hes very difficult to do u know!
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Postby snuffles360uk » Friday 11 October 2002 11:13:15pm

:grin: Got a new Harry poem :grin: I think it's better than the last one. See what u think. :D

Harry

Harry Potter is my name,
The boy who lived, the very same.
With the scar on my forehead, thats really there,
It often makes people stand and stare.

My hair is jet black,
And it will never stay flat.
My eyes are bright green,
And I'm quite lean.

Ron and Hermione are who my best friends are,
Ron and me once flew to school in his dad's car,
And Hermione, any spell she can cast,
And together anything we can get past.

Voldemort is who I hate,
As my parents lives, he did take.
My mum was Lily, my dad, James was his name,
And for their death Voldemort is solely to blame.

I've fought Voldemort three times now,
And each time I escaped somehow.
But one day Voldemort I'll choose to fight,
And on that day, I'll make things right.

So what do u think??? :grin:
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Postby Scellanis » Friday 11 October 2002 11:21:53pm

wow!!

much better than the last one :grin:
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Postby snuffles360uk » Friday 11 October 2002 11:23:14pm

:grin: thanx :grin:
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Postby snuffles360uk » Wednesday 30 October 2002 10:42:35pm

so here's a new poem :grin:

Lucius Malfoy

Lucius Malfoy is who I am,
I try to be as evil as I can.
While I present a respectable face,
This is never the case.

I have pale blond hair,
And an evil stare.
Draco Malfoy is my son,
And make me angry is all he's done.

I am often found in a black hood and mask,
As I am carrying out a Death Eater task.
As Voldemorte is who I support,
And to conjure the Dark Mark I was taught.

Pain on muggles we inflick,
It makes muggle lovers sick.
But we think Mudbloods are scum,
And many more tortures are to come.

Lucius Malfoy is who I am,
And I am a very evil man.
While I present a respectable face,
This is never ever the case.

So what do u think??? Hope u like it!
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Postby Scellanis » Thursday 31 October 2002 10:13:37am

:grin:

brilliant!!!
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Postby Wedge » Thursday 31 October 2002 5:30:13pm

that was cool
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Postby snuffles360uk » Saturday 2 November 2002 11:44:33am

Ok here's another new poem :grin:

Ron Weasley

Ron Weasley is my name,
But being a Weasly can be a pain.
As I have five older brothers,
And everything I own once belonged to the others.

I have the Weasly red hair,
And the freckles are there,
I'm tall and gangly and have a large nose,
All traits of the Weasly family are those.

Scabbers used to be my pet rat,
But now he's gone, Sirius made sure of that,
Now and owl called Pig I own,
He's so annoying it makes me groan.

My two best friends are Hemione and Harry,
To the Lake Hermione takes all the books she can carry,
While Harry is much more layed back and fun,
We just play gobstones in the sun.

Spiders are my biggest fear,
And I wont stay long if one is near.
So that is me and what I'm like,
So please make sure there's no spider in sight.

So what do u think??
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Postby Scellanis » Saturday 2 November 2002 1:18:57pm

brilliant!!!

best one yet :grin:
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Postby Paul » Sunday 3 November 2002 4:21:27am

I like it! Hey, watch out though, Ron...

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Postby Scellanis » Sunday 3 November 2002 10:59:35am

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*falls off her chair and hides down the back of her bed*

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Postby snuffles360uk » Sunday 3 November 2002 2:53:23pm

:grin: lol :grin:
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Postby Scellanis » Sunday 3 November 2002 4:43:46pm

snuffles!!!!

yay!!!!

cant u catch them spiders in a matchbox or summat for me!!!!

please!!!!

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