Poem

[Scellanis]

wow!! brilliant!!!

need more......what u gonna do next??

[snuffles360uk]

this poem is about my favourite character

Snuffles

A big blak dog is what I seem,
With long black fur, I'm very lean.
Some people say I am a stray, while others think I am the grim,
But I am not a death omen unlike him.

But a dog is not really what I am,
I hide as a dog but really I am a man.
Snuffles, Padfoot and Sirius Black,
Those are my names, I can tell you that.

Padfoot is my friends nickname for me,
And why they call me that I'm sure you can see.
As a dog Snuffles is what I'm called,
But when people hear Sirius Black they are usually appauld

I've been in Azkaban for something that can't be forgiven,
But I escaped and as a dog I've stayed hidden.
But it was never me that commited the crime,
It was my friend, that I've escaped to find.

I had to escaped, as Harry I had to protect,
As the person I seek, in Harrys' dormitry he sleeps as a pet.
I have to find him as he is in the perfect place to act,
To kill Harry for the dark side, the rat.

And as a rat his form can take,
And he is who I truely hate.
I will find him before he can act,
And I will kill him, I'm sure of that.

Please tell me what u think!

[Scellanis]

yay...wonderful!!

sirius is my fav character...brilliant!!

[snuffles360uk]

Please somebody post what they think about my poems!!!!!! I have started one anout Snape but if nobody posts what they think I'm not gonna post the Snape one when I finish it.

[snuffles360uk]

Well I've finished Snape and I've now started one for the weasley twins but I need more post before I will post anymore poems!!!!!! So please post!

[snuffles360uk]

Ok so I couldn't wait for anymore posts... I like this one too much, so please please please post what u think of it!

Professor Snape

I'm Professor Severus Snape,
And potions is the class I take.
Of Slytherin house, I am the head,
I favour them, it has been said.

The Potters are who I deteste,
There's no one that I could like less.
James Potter went to school with me,
And very big headed was he.

Better than the rest of us he thought,
Just beacause a stupid snitch he caught.
And now I have to teach his son,
And this is certinly, for him no fun.

For points I can take from this bratt,
And I will, I'm sure of that.
And his time in potions will be bad,
Get James back for all the times he made me mad.

But in James's debt I am,
I have to repay it if I can.
And so in his first year, Harry's life I saved,
And so the debt was repayed.

Now I can go back to hating James memory in peace,
But my hatered for him will never cease.
Harry acts just like his dad,
A student I hated more, I've never had.

Please, please,please post what u think of it

[Scellanis]

brilliant as always

u should do a sorting hat poem

[snuffles360uk]

Is sonkem the only one who reads my poems???

[Paul]

No, I've read them too and think they're totally great. Very well put together - especially when you think that there are good stories contained in them, plus the added challenge of getting them to rhyme.

[snuffles360uk]

Thanx!

[snuffles360uk]

This is a new poem

Fred, George and The Marauders

We are Fred and George the Weasley twins,
And for us, pranks and trouble always wins.
A bigger pair of trouble makers Hogwarts has never had,
Except maybe James Potter and Sirius Black who were just as bad.

When we were young and more innoscent than now,
We let off a dungbomb that upset Filch somehow.
And so he threatened us with his punishments,
And then up to his office we were sent.

While in Filch's office we sat,
We happened to come across a map,
But an ordinary map, this was not,
As the Marauder's map is what we've got.

The corridors of the school was not all we saw,
As secret passages where there and more.
What we saw just made us stare,
As moving dots with peoples names were there.

Moony, Wormtail, Prongs and Padfoot,
Were the makers of the map we took.
Finding out about the castle and grounds,
Espacially when they were out of bounds.
And thats how they produced the Marauder's map,
For causing mischief and soley that.

To the Marauders so much we owe,
They helped to teach us what we know.
Now we cause trouble with the maps aid,
And for most of it, we've never paid.

We are the best at trouble and pranks,
And to the Marauders we give our thanks,
As they have helped us to discover the way,
To get into Hogsmeade, so what more can we say.

so what do u think??

[Scellanis]

brilliant.....as usual

[snuffles360uk]

thanx!

[Paul]

Yay - me likes too. You're really good at these Snuffles!

[snuffles360uk]

thanx!