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Sunshine

Postby KuraiYume » Tuesday 11 March 2003 1:16:24am

Sunshine
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter. J.K. Rowling does.

“She died so young”

“She has such a pretty smile”

“She was so pretty.”

“She had a good chance to be Head Girl.”

“She was a terrific Quidditch captain!”

Those were all the comments I heard. Positive comments about the girl that was killed by Voldermort. She was killed brutally. Not with the killing curse but she was tortured, r*pe and that killed with a sword. I was in love with her all through my 5th year. I wanted to be with her and live happily ever after with her. Yet she died. My fantasy comes to a stop right there because it could never happen. Magic can’t bring the dead back to the earth. And that’s how I have to live now. She was headstrong, beautiful, courageous and intelligent. She was my ideal lover. The girl whom I am talking about is the one and only…

Cho Chang.

Why it had to be her, I don’t know. But it was one of the death eaters that killed her under Voldermort’s request. She was in their so-called way to kill all muggle-lovers and mudbloods. Even though she was a pureblood and never showed true affection towards mudbloods or muggle lovers, she would stand up for them. So they killed her. Anybody who was probably watching her death must have been traumatized. But it was only death eaters and they just kill for fun. It’s their hobby. Its what they like to do for fun and for their amusement. She had many admirers, yet she made time for all of them. I was one of them. She saw right through me, she was one of the few people who did. And it made me happy to be with her. She was intelligent and beautiful. And what I liked most about her was that she wasn’t a follower. She was a leader. Her boldness could have put her in Gryffindor, her patience and kindness could have put her in Hufflepuff, her temper and rough game of Quidditch could have put her in Slytherin, yet her intelligence and her eagerness to learn something everyday put her in Ravenclaw, where she belonged. She even knew how to deal with Crabbe and Goyle when I was about to give up on them. But there was one obstacle that always stood in my way to getting closer than friends to Cho. It was…

Harry Potter.

Ever since our 3rd year Potter liked Cho according to Pansy, Miss Gossip Queen. And I reckon she is right. He was always staring at her in awe. Like he was the only one for her. Like she was a goddess. I’ll have to agree with him on the last one. But fortunately at that time Cho was with Cedric Diggory, who died a year earlier. He was nice fellow, very shy and smart and a lot of the girls liked him. But he fell in love with Cho. And I reckon if that he was still alive and she was still alive they would still be together and get married and maybe have a few kids but unfortunately that won’t happen unless you can get married and have kids in your afterlife or in heaven.

Can I still love her? I guess I can though, it won’t do any good being in love with a dead girl. Father wouldn’t be ashamed of me if I ever dated her when she was still alive. Since she’s a pureblood and she’s not in Gryffindor or Hufflepuff. That’s all father cares about. And Cho’s family is rich. And father likes good status. That’s probably the reason why he married mother. She came from a rich family, she was in Slytherin and she was a pureblood, need I say more. Father never fell in love. It’s wrong for a Death Eater to fall in love. Voldermort had many women he played with them and etc but not once did he fall in love with any of the people he slept with. Don’t ask me about the Lestranges. They are a little odd. Anyway Father never showed any affection to my mum or I. So you’re probably thinking that I don’t know how to love. But I do. Mother loves me. She cares for me and shows me true mother-son affection. And that’s why I love her back. She cares for me. She sends me things to make me happy, she looks after me when I’m sick and when I’m sad she’s always there to make me happy.

The person I want to fall in love with that is if I ever fall in love again, has to be intelligent, beautiful, charismatic, able to stand up to me, and can take my cr*p. Oh terrific that’s Granger.

A/N: That’s the end of chapter 1.
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Postby Krum » Tuesday 11 March 2003 5:32:25pm

Good.Will there be a 2nd chapter?
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Postby KuraiYume » Tuesday 11 March 2003 10:59:11pm

Yes, I think so. If I can think of something...writer's block is EVIL.
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Chapter 2

Postby KuraiYume » Wednesday 12 March 2003 4:06:55am

here is chapter 2 its kinna short
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Cho died during Christmas break. I remember the exact day, December 27th, the day after Boxing Day. The school took awhile to get back on its feet. Everywhere I looked I saw girls and some random guys crying. Even I couldn’t concentrate on my work without thinking about her. I wonder how Granger manages during tough times. Okay Malfoy, hold up why are you thinking about Granger now? She’s just a stupid little mudblood that gets in your way. I know, now shut up. It took 2 weeks for everyone to get back to normal. But some people were having more trouble then others. Such as Professor Flitwick and the whole Ravenclaw House especially the Ravenclaw Quidditch team. I didn’t realize Potter was still grieving until Potions that day. He was in the back of the class and I was in the front as usual. He had his hands in front of his face. And Weasley was talking to him in a low voice.

“Gee, I wonder what they’re talking about?” Pansy Parkinson asked me.

“Wouldn’t you like to know.” I replied coldly.

“Oh Draco, baby. Why do you have to be so cold today? Especially to your precious?” Pansy asked.

“Because I don’t feel like talking to you and about Potter’s and Weasley’s secret business. Now leave.” I told her.

She pouted for a bit, but left when Professor Snape came in.

“Class, we are going to work on a new potion today. I’m going to pair you up into groups.” Professor Snape said.

“How many people is that?” Goyle asked.

I rolled my eyes. Obviously two, pair means two. Obviously, he can be such a moron sometimes. I’m surprised they haven’t held him back a grade yet. If I were the headmaster, I would have made him stay in 1st year. Goyle is so stupid. Crabbe isn’t that much better. But he is only okay at one subject and that’s Divination. Which I’m surprised to hear. But he really likes the future. What a moron.

“That’s two people, Goyle.” Professor Snape said.

“Oh, thank you Professor.” Goyle said.

Well at least he knows his manners unlike some people, such as Weasley. A stupid question was still in my head. Why were death eaters not allowed to love but could have children? I asked my father once that question and he beat me nearly to death with his favorite belt. He said his business was his and that I should stay out of it. Yet he can go into my business whenever he feels like it. Which I think is unfair. But he’s my father so what can I do?

“Okay. It will be inter House pairs. Request from the Headmaster.” Professor Snape said.

The class groaned not including me I have learned not to mess with Professor Snape in his class.

“Shut up and just listen up!” Professor Snape barked at the class.

“Brown and Bulstrode.”

“Zabini and Patil.”

“Parkinson and Potter.”

“Goyle and Weasley”

And the list goes on and on.

“Malfoy and Granger.”

This could be interesting.

“Malfoy, I want no trouble from you.” Granger said with a look that looked exactly like McGonagall’s face when she wanted order.

“Fine, Granger. As long as you don’t bring you’re little friends over. I’m alright.” I said.

Granger narrowed her eyes. “I wasn’t planning to bring them over. Like you I want to pass potions.” She said hotly.

That Granger, she’s truly something. Not like I have feeling for her or anything. She’s truly vivacious. Granger was stirring the potion and adding random things in. And I was just telling her what to add. And at the end of class our potion was the best, of course. I’m a Malfoy what do expect. Potion is my best subject.

“Malfoy! The bell rang. You should go to your next class.” Granger said as she woke me out of my daze.

“Ah Granger, so you now suddenly care if I’m on time to class now don’t you? You couldn’t just leave me there. Could you?” I asked her.

Granger blushed slightly. “I just thought I was doing you a favor.” She said. “But you could stay there next time for all I care.” She said as she walked out.

Stupid Mudblood, she always thinks she can get what she wants. And boss everyone around. Well she sure can’t boss me around. Even though she’s extremely hot. WHAT?

A/N: End of Chapter 2.
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Postby Krum » Wednesday 12 March 2003 6:10:23pm

Good.But now I just want to say something about the 1st chapter:Why a rap? :???: :evil: :cry: .Are you planning on writing a chapter3?
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Postby KuraiYume » Friday 14 March 2003 4:20:34am

What? A rap? I'm confused now. I know I'm pretty sure I didn't put any rap lyrics in the 1st chapter. Maybe you can tell me what it is. I'm working on the 3rd chapter as I write this and as I'm also writing my global project. It should be up by tomorrow.
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Postby han lin » Tuesday 20 May 2003 9:29:14pm

that is a Phat story
really really good
you have a talent
don't waste it you are cool writer
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Postby littlelib » Wednesday 21 May 2003 12:55:27pm

That was so amazing!

You havent posted for ages! Please post the next bit soon! Please
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Postby han lin » Wednesday 21 May 2003 7:36:59pm

PLEASEPLEAEPLEASE!
you are soo good, don't let it end
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Postby KuraiYume » Thursday 22 May 2003 3:11:03am

I'm back...sorry. i haf up to chap 9 typed so it will come!
Here is chapter 3

Okay, what is wrong with me? Granger is not hot. She may be pretty but not hot. Okay its official I’m going insane. Wait, I’m already insane. Ah, Don’t mind me right now. I should be getting to class. I gather my belongings and start walking. What do I have now again? Oh that’s right I have Transfiguration, every Slytherins’ favorite class. I wonder how many points she’ll take off from us today.

“Mr. Malfoy!”

I turned around and saw Professor McGonnagal. “Yes Professor?”

“Could you walk a bit faster, Mr. Malfoy? You’re creating traffic behind you.” She said.

I looked behind me and saw a big crowd. Stupid people, why couldn’t they walk past me? I’m not that big! People these days are so dense in the head. The hall is not that narrow. “Oh Sorry Professor. I’ll walk a bit faster.” I said picking up my pace and arriving to Transfiguration. I looked around to see whom I should sit next to.

‘Mr. Malfoy could you please get to your seat before the class ends.” McGonnagal said.

I rolled my eyes inwardly and looked around. I wonder if McGonnagal and Granger are related? They sure have the same attitude and personality.

“Oh Drakie Baby. I saved you a seat.” Pansy said patting the chair right next to her.

Oh god. I don’t want to sit next to her. I looked around more and a saw Blaise Zabini sitting there reading her transfiguration book quietly.

“Mr. Malfoy any day now.” McGonnagal said impatiently.

I walked over to Blaise and sat in the seat right next to her. Some teachers can be such an itch on your back that you can’t scratch because you can’t reach.

“Thank you.” McGonnagal said. “Now pass up your homework.” She said.

Homework? We had homework? Did I do it? I don’t remember. I checked in my bag to see if I had done it and luckily I had done it. I tapped Morgana Moon on the shoulder and gave her my homework. I looked next to me to see Blaise still reading her transfiguration book. “Anything interesting in there?” I asked her.

She looked at me and smiled. “Transfiguration is my favorite and best class. I’m not as good as Granger but I’m 2nd best.” She said.

2nd best at a Gryffindor class? I think I’m going to faint. And it’s also her favorite class. Now I wonder how her parents would react. “Why do you like Transfiguration?” I asked.

“My mum was in Gryffindor and she was the best in Transfiguration. And my dad was in Ravenclaw and he was also extremely good in Transfiguration.” She said.

Gee, how come I didn’t know that before. If she’s so smart she should be in Ravenclaw. “How come you were put in Slytherin?” I asked.

She shrugged. “Maybe because I don’t care about people and only school.” She said pointing to her prefect badge.

No wonder I don't talk to her much. She likes school. And she doesn’t care about anyone. Okay maybe not the last reason because it’s usually a Slytherin trait not to care about other people. There are exceptions though. I overheard something from one of father’s conversation that Salazar Slytherin fell in love unintentionally with Rowena Ravenclaw. I guess some girls make you fall head over heels with them.

“Mr. Malfoy are you paying attention?” McGonnagal asked me.

I rolled my eyes. “Of course, Professor.” I said.

“Then what is the answer to #45?” she asked.

I looked at the book and spotted #45. “Um.. I think its B, professor.” I said guessing the answer.

“Very good, Mr. Malfoy. 3 points to Slytherin.” She said and continued on with the lesson.

Ha! 3 points that’s probably the most she’ll ever give out to a Slytherin like me. She hates me because I’m a Slytherin and worse because my father is a death eater. You think I can help that. Its my father’s choices not mine. If he wants to be a death eater let him be a death eater. Its not like I’m going to follow his path and become one also. Though it wouldn’t seem like a bad idea. But what if I want to become the Minister of Magic or a Wizard Doctor or a Quidditch Player. I bet McGonnagal thinks my goal in life is to become a death eater. I never said she was wrong. But she isn’t right. I’m my own person and I am not one to follow others lead. The bell finally rang and I copied down the homework and went to the common room and then to my dorm.

“So, I wonder what’s for lunch?” Crabbe asked.

“Gee, I don’t know. Food?” I replied coldly. Of course they didn’t take notice of my comment because all Crabbe and Goyle can think about is food.

“Probably some good stuff. That chicken was really good yesterday.” Goyle said.

I rolled my eyes. “They serve chicken everyday!” I said.

“They do? I didn’t notice that.” Goyle said. “Thanks for telling me.” He said.

Sometimes I wonder why I ever hung out with them. We have nothing in common. They only hang out with me because my father is Lucius Malfoy and because I’m rich. If I wasn’t rich or if my father wasn’t Lucius Malfoy they would probably be all over Pansy Parkinson. Since Goyle does have a crush on her. I wonder what’s so attractive about her?

“Draco Malfoy!”

I turned my head back to see who had called me and it was the one and only Blaise Zabini. “Yes?” I said acknowledging her.

“How did you get those 3 points in Transfiguration! Professor McGonnagal always only gives me 2 points!” she shrieked, she was only on the verge of crying. “I’m her best Slytherin student! Not you! So back off!” she screamed even louder.

I stepped backwards. “I didn’t mean to.” I said stuttering.

“Its all your fault! Never talk to me ever again. You stupid blonde.” She said coldly and walked off.

What’s is her problem. And there is absolutely nothing wrong with blonde hair people. I in fact have platinum blonde hair. It’s a Malfoy thing. I walked out of the common room and walked the halls to the Great Hall. And there I saw Granger walking all alone. She had her hair in two innocent pigtails and she was walking slowly and clutching a book to her chest. I wonder where Potter and Weasley are. Shouldn’t they be protecting Granger like they always do? I passed her and I saw her crying. Should let her deal with her problem by herself or should I help her? Okay Malfoy what kind of muggle drugs did you take today? She’s a Gryffindor mudblood and you’re the all mighty Slytherin pureblood. You’re not going to help her out! Shut up conscience this is my decision.
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Postby han lin » Thursday 22 May 2003 5:31:16pm

wow thats really good, is he going to help her or not?? ahhhh
must find out/
must..... find..... out
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Postby KuraiYume » Sunday 8 June 2003 4:58:39am

Here is chapter 4

Well here goes nothing. “Granger?” I called out to her.

She whipped her head around. And narrowed her eyes at me. “What do you want Malfoy?” she asked coldly.

Girls today, what is up with their mood? I sighed. “Did I mess up your train of thought Granger?” I asked.

She rolled her eyes. “Shut up Malfoy! I don’t want to see your bloody face at this moment!” she said steadily.

I raised my eyebrow. “And you want to see me at other moments?” I asked. “Gee, I never knew you were attractive to me Granger. Why couldn’t you have told me earlier?” I told her sarcastically.

She looked at me and laughed. “Attractive to you? Ha! What are you thinking today? I would never be attractive to someone like you even if you paid me 1000 galleons. Crabbe and Goyle’s lack of intelligence and a brain must have rubbed off on you.” She said smirking.

Granger doesn’t know what she’s talking about. The Malfoys are extremely sexy. Maybe she’s blind. I rolled my eyes at her. I looked around and realized that Potter and Weasley weren’t with her. “So where are Potter and Weasley?” I asked her.

“Don’t ask me. I don’t even want to talk to Ron. And Harry always sides with him anyway. They probably hated me before anyway because I’m not into Quidditch.” She said shrugging. “And why am I telling you this anyway.” She said.

I stared at her dumbfounded. Well, I could sort of understand her not being into Quidditch since she’s a girl. But some girls like Quidditch. “If you were a pureblood you would like Quidditch. But you’re nothing but an unworthy mudblood.” I told her.

If looks could kill I’d probably be dead right now. But thank Merlin they don’t. She looked at me as if she was going to throw a punch at me. “Malfoy, you’re such an egotistic person.” She said. “You think that you’re above everyone. That you’re the superior one, but in reality you’re not. You are just a disgrace to all wizarding families and you don’t have enough knowledge to consider yourself a true pureblood. Or you would probably be at the top of your year. But you’re not. I am so you should shut up.” She said walking away.

“Where do you think you’re going?” I asked. She’s going to die for telling me that I’m unworthy to be a pureblood and that I’m a disgrace. I am the best and no one is going to disagree with that because I won’t allow them to.

She stopped and looked back. “To go eat lunch of course.” She said a little tensely.

Great, she’s scared, my perfect opportunity. “No Potter and Weasley to protect you now from the Great Draco Malfoy.” I said.

“I can take care of myself thank you very much.” She said strongly. “I don’t need them and you’re not great sorry to break it to you. Maybe Pansy Parkinson will believe that one but not I.” She said.

This girl is so tough. If this happened last year or the year before, she would have ran away crying her eyes out to Potter and Weasley and then they would try to beat me up. Ha Ha Ha! “Are you sure?” I asked her smirking.

She glared at me. “Yes I’m sure. Now leave me be.” She said walking into the Great Hall.

I followed her in. She thinks she’s so smart. Yet I know and she knows she has a flaw. She’s socially stupid. She has no friends. Especially now that Potter and Weasley are mad at her. She’s a living joke. And while she sat with her Gryffindor losers, I went to sit with the Slytherins and of course Crabbe and Goyle were eating chicken. “Don’t you ever get full?” I asked.

They both stared at me confused. “What?” Goyle asked.

“Nothing, just shut up and go back to eating.” I said.

“Are you okay, Draco?” Crabbe asked.

“I’m fine, now shut up and stop talking with you’re mouth full.” I said as a put some roast beef on my plate and started to eat it. I hate them they’re not good at anything except beating people up. They fail all their tests, they don’t know when to shut up, they can’t play Quidditch and they have never had a girlfriend and beside themselves I am the only one that talks to them. My god I must have no life. And now that Cho is gone my life is hell. Cho, why did you go? Why did you leave me here? Why did they have to kill you? Didn’t they ever think of me?

“Malfoy?”

I looked up and saw Granger looking at me with the concerned look.

“I couldn’t help noticing your pained expression.” She said.

I bet you couldn’t because I’m such a s*x God. “I see.” I said.

“What’s wrong?” she asked not noticing the death glares she was getting from Potter and Weasley.

“Nothing, a mudblood like you would never understand.” I said simply.

“SMACK!”

Granger had slapped me.

“I’m sorry for being concerned with an egotistic Slytherin pureblood like you.” She said in a cold voice. “Next time I’ll just make you sit there and cry your good for nothing eyes out. Okay?” she said and she walked away.

Damn her. She’s hot when she’s angry. Now where did that come from?

“From your heart.”

I blinked and looked around but no one was looking at my way.

“Its okay Draco, no one can hear me except for you. Its me Cho.” The voice said.

“You are in love with her. Admit it. You love her more than you ever loved me. You loved her since the day she beat you on that potions test.” Cho said.

“No, that’s not true. If I loved her so much wouldn’t I have knew that already.” I asked her.

“No, some things take awhile to know and understand. And your heart loves her. Even if your brain tells you that you are not attractive to her and that you hate her. But you do remember the saying opposites attract. Well it just came true.” Cho said. “Well I have to go now, Good bye Draco.” She said.

“Good bye Cho.” I said.

And the voice disappeared.

I stared at my food and took another bite and then walked out of the Great Hall.

A/N: End of chapter 4.
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Postby littlelib » Monday 9 June 2003 9:56:48pm

This is good :-) cant wait till the next chapter!!!!
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Postby han lin » Tuesday 10 June 2003 7:57:19pm

keep it coming!!
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Postby Meg Boyd » Sunday 20 July 2003 3:48:54am

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Please continue with this story, i am hooked beyond all belief!!!
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