This is my Marauder FF and i hope its good and i hope to get helpful Reviews. I have always been a quick writer and have always loved the Job.
Im writing FanFics since im 7 years old and now that im 15(having my Sweet Sixteen on Sat-yes!-) i completed my FF that goes through all the years of the Marauders in the form of Lily Evans' Diary.
Now lets start with the first few days after Lily's 11. Birthday.
Dear Diary,
boy am i excited!
Its my Birthday today and i got like a tun of Presents. You were one of them, from my Aunt Lena! She lives in America with my Cousin, Aisling.
You know, i was thinking i should give you a name. Mhh...well im very fond of Anne Franks Kitty...so maybe we'll try Kitty.
Dear Kitty,
Yes that's much better!
So back to all my Information. My best friends Cathy Black, Alice Mcbreen, Katie Collins, Hazel Jungra and Alex Parker are here for this mega cool and massive Sleepover. It is sooo cool!
Cathy got me this mega Present: A new Schoolbook! For some reason everyone laughed at my amazement. Hazel roared with laughter! Only later i found out that that was supposed to be a Joke! Then she gave me a little Charm Necklace. It was breathtaking.
From Alice i got this ultra cool set of Gel Pens wich im writing with!
Blue, Green, Orange, Purple, Lilac, Emrald and Fire Red!
Katie, Hazel and Alex came up with a great idea, put in all there Money and bought Games, DVDs, Videos, Sweets and Books(some very rude ones) for are Sleepover Season! The Sleepover Season is in the Summer (the SSS *lol*) and evrey night we take turns in having a Sleepover!
Oh, gotta dash!
lots of Love,
Lily
Dearest Kit,
im sorry i had to run!
I feel awful about not telling you about my friends propally!
Ok, Cathy has long, wavy blond hair and Blue eyes. She's really into make-up and Clothes but she is my best friend!
Alice has Shoulder-length Brown hair, brown eyes and likes wearing brown clothes!*lol* Katie is almost identical to Alice, except that Katie is smaller and Cuter. They were best friends.Hazel and Alex are best friends but there not one bit alike! Hazel has very long dark blond, straight Hair and green eyes, while Alex has Ellbow length Blond curles and Blue eyes!
And me, well im just Lily with Hip length dark red hair and green eyes.
Now, are SS (Sleepover for the dull ones who dont know what SS means)
was a blast! We watched 5 Movies and diddent even go to sleep!
We finished 6 hole 1 liter bottles of coke! And 10 big bags of Crisps and then 9 of the Medium Packets EACH! Then we had loads of Choc, and i mean LOADS! Hazel is a Choc aholic and Alice likes anything thats brown! Then Cathy went to get some Birthday Cake, and we ate all that too! It was a tripple Choclate Fudge cake with layers of Choclate Sponge and Sauce. In Pink Icing was written at the Top: Happy Birthday, Lils!
Are Tummys were like bottemless Pits!Then we read a great book together, written by Alex who adores writing. The name of this unpublished book was Clear Blue
lots of Love,
Lily:golden snitch:
So i gave you a taste
