Need help making one

[Tanuki]

I'm starting up a fanfic based a few years after book 7 with a whole new cast. The main character is a special kind of genetically engineered wizard called an M.D. wizard. He's hated by the wizarding community. He's also more powerful than any wizard, as are his twelve compatriates. You see they were spread all over the place after being born and their creator being sent to azkaban.

They are so powerful they can deflect Aveda KAdaveda with their bare hands.

They are cloned from different wizards here and there. The main character is clones from Sirius Black

They have an almost unbearable instinct to fight each other

I need help coming up with different characters for the series, including a new head of Gryphindor house and names for various characters

Important characters:

Irish Hufflepuff who habitually wears a patterned headband. He's a little hyper, but he's really good at wizards chess. He has a skill at metal charming

Welsh Ravenclaw who seems permanently calm. Quite the opposite of the Irish hufflepuff. He's good with memorizing spells

Slightly egocentric Slytherin. He's a good guy though. He's good with summoning things. He is usually pestered by a rather obnoxious slytherin girl for hanging out with the other three

Our Hero who is a cut above the rest. Very powerful, but he's been living with a relative who lives around Muggle's, so his exposure to teh magical community is limited at best. Lots of people think hes an abomination and want his brothers and him dead. He's in Gryphindor. A strange girl a year ahead of him crawls into his bed the first night and sleeps there every night from then on. It seems no one can stop her.

The girl who crawls into his bed every night is also a gryphindor. She is rather well known and likes, people put up with her oddities because of this.

And these kids are the new Maurauders. A better name would be appreaciated.

There is a professor Bicicle in the Story

Ginny Weasley is the new Defense against the dark arts teacher

McGonagall is the new Headmistress

Other than this, ideas are welcome

[Nightcrawler]

That's a very interesting idea. So you're kinda blending fantasy with sci-fi? And bringing Sirius back as a clone?

Unfortunetly I'm terrible at coming up with names. So what is the origin of these clones? First thing that popped into my head was that perhaps a handful of muggle military scientists were trying to create superweapons. Don't know if that's too cliche though.

[Tanuki]

A halfblood wizard named Faust wanted to break the pureblood mentality by making a wizard that was even more pureblooded than them. He wanted to create an extra special ruling class of sorts. So, he resorted to the forbidden art. He was pretty dangerous as it is. Dementors in Azkaban avoid him and he implanted a wand core into his own arm so he could do magic, even if his wand is confiscated

[Malfoy_VS_Thompson]

Well, this is an interesting read... very imaginitive. It would be good with a few more plot bunnies & a few rounds of spell-checker. A good beta-reader would come in handy.

It sounds good though.

Hmm.. names... that's one thing I'm semi-all-right at! Be careful with Mary-sue-age/Gary-stu-age... or Marty-stu-age... you know. Random 'perfect beings'... ohh.. Sirius Black. Fancy! (PLZ don't have any Serious Sirius jokes... they'll take ur thumbs for that).

If you're wanting names email me with full descriptions of the characters etc. and what era blah blah blah... u know stuff. I'll try to help with it.

[stars_so_bright]

Yes, this certainly is a very imaginative piece. First thing first but, if your going to write fanfiction, make sure you get the fundamental things right. For example the spelling of names ect... Also, you'll want to clearly state that the fic is AU and what not. other than that, it sounds like a really interesting idea - keep going and don't be afarid to ask for help