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Postby elliemay » Monday 30 August 2004 10:46:18pm

Disclaimer: Everything but the plot belongs to the talented J.K. Rowling.

I am for the totally improbable Draco/Hermione ship....I hope you like my spin on the story! :D

Chapter 1

Draco Malfoy gazed through an open window of his father’s study, the

wind playing about his pale face. His eyes fell upon his mother, strolling

with attendants in the vast gardens of the manor. She was a beautiful

woman, full of charm and elegance. Narcissa Malfoy was the model wife

of an aristocrat. She never showed her emotions, always agreed with her

husband, and of course, had the beauty most women spend their entire

lives trying attain. But her beauty was tarnished by one small factor, she

never seemed happy. Draco lamented upon this fact for a moment. His

mother was nothing but devoted to the happiness of her only child, and it

showed. Draco enjoyed every luxury growing up. The only bad side to his

childhood was his father.

Lucius Malfoy provided for his family and in return they were

expected to give him an illusion of a perfect family. Draco’s father was a

harsh ruler of the house. Draco disliked his father, though he respected

and honored him. He did as he was told and was sweetly rewarded. If he

did not do as told, well, that happened only once. Draco could not believe

that he could have been worse off growing up, until he decided to visit

Diagon Alley with his best friend Diego, a pureblood wizard of Spain. They

had heard of a bookstore that could help with a potion that they were

trying to concoct, an extremely powerful smoke bomb they wanted to test

on the house elves.

This errand into Diagon Alley would be an exciting and fun

adventure. Diego was sure of it. Draco also needed to pick up a few

school supplies to be ready for Hogwarts.

At 17, Draco would be attending Hogwarts School of Witchcraft

and Wizardry one final year, and he was willing to make it his best. His

good grades had paid off. He would be head boy in the coming school

year. Finally he had beaten Harry Potter. He now had the power to end

the incessant annoyance of the Boy Who Lived.

The two boys received many stares from young witches as

they strolled down Diagon Alley. They were extremely handsome. Draco’s

pale skin and blond hair gave him and ethereal glow that made the girls

crazy. His light blue, almost silver eyes had a reputation for looking

directly into a soul. Diego’s looks were the classic, tall, dark, and

handsome. His dark, curly hair framed his face. With dark eyes of

chocolate, he could melt any heart. Both boys were rather tall, and

though strong, Draco was not as muscular as Diego. The boys entered a

small rare bookstore with dust covering the front window completely. The

store was full of books covering shelves and the floor. A petite witch was

sitting at the front desk, reading a rather large tome. The boys stood

looking at her for a few seconds. She had curly brown hair, pulled into a

loose bun at the nape of her neck. Her brown eyes were rapidly moving

about the pages of her book; her full lips slightly parted. She was wearing

muggle blue jeans and a tank top. The soft light of the candles in the

room made her look angelic. She seemed somewhat familiar to Draco.

Maybe she went to Hogwarts. A Ravenclaw perhaps…The concentration of

the boys was interrupted when a small bell rang and the girl looked up at

them.

“How can I help you?” she asked.

“Umm…we need help finding an instruction manual entitled

Nasty Nuisance: the Art of Potent Pranks,” said Draco.

“Wait. Maybe I should have asked WHY I should help you.”

The girl was extremely irritated.

Diego was extremely confused. ”Have we done anything to

offend ma’am?”

This seemed to aggravate her even more. “ANYTHING TO

OFFEND! Well, this little ferret here has been nothing but a plague upon

my life since I was eleven years old! He is the most cruel and evil man on

earth…with the exceptions of his father and Voldemort!”

She began to cry and Draco grabbed her arm and pulled her

into the back room. He was extremely confused. Not many witches would

utter the unspeakable name of the Dark Lord. “Who are you? How

have I hurt you? I don’t even know you!”

Once her tears slowed, she replied. “I forgot that you wouldn’t

recognize me.”

This of course confused him more. “Are you telling me that I

know you, but you have changed your apperance?”

“Yes.”

“Well then, who are you?”

“I can’t say.”

“Why not?”

“Dumbledore.”

“Oh.”

“When school starts, you will know.”

“All right.”

She dried her eyes and proceeded to direct Draco to his book.

He paid for the book, thanked her for the help, and left the store, not

noticing her crying again.
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Postby pinky p » Tuesday 31 August 2004 2:37:59am

i bet i know who it is! <.<

i love the idea... please give us more! :)
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Postby emus » Tuesday 30 November 2004 1:17:52am

Yes please give us more!!! :medium snail:
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Postby ellenmay » Tuesday 21 June 2005 8:37:18pm

I just joined BaO this week for the first time (I thought) and today I came across this fan fic.

Ok, I had no idea that I had ever joined this site, but apparently I did and I posted this first chapter of my fan fic...leaving anyone who read it hanging for almost a year. I have changed it since then...and I think that it is better now. Let me know if you think I should post the rewritten version of the first chapter along with the rest of the story (which I think is quite interesting :) ).

Sorry for the confusion.
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