by Un'Anima Persa » Friday 10 August 2007 6:09:54am
Bah!
I've made a mistake in my post.
Is it at all possible to change the first few sentences, "The image of the Great Hall was a bittersweet reminder of everything AnaMaria had been through at Hogwarts. Some of her friends lay dead, and yet the man whose name she once feared to speak, the man she detested above all others lay dead. "
To this:
"The image of the Great Hall was a bittersweet reminder of everything AnaMaria had been through at Hogwarts. The seemingly endless fight against evil was over; the man whose name she once feared to speak, the man she detested above all others lay dead. Yet, somehow, she knew that the healing process would be much more painful than the celebration would be rewarding."