'The Dragon Master' Series (Pokemon Fanfiction)

[TDM]

okay, first of all, i do not want to actually post all five stories here, because there is already another site that they are complete on. so, here is the site, and it goes right to the list of all the chapters:

http://www.thepokemontower.com/authors/ ... ster.shtml

if i get some good reviews, i'll post the parts of the sixth part of the TDM saga.

[sea-plunder]

the start of your story was good dragonmaster...but when it got to lance and bob battling it became a tiny bit of a "and then" ... "and then this happened" this is just my opinion but up until then i thought it was really good well done. i only read chapter 1 of your story so if it got a lot better sorry for my early comments ..

[TDM]

lol, i didn't notice this post. see how long it's been since i checked it? well, you see, it did start out like that simply because i was inexperienced at the time of writing this. even i will admit that the first one in the series is horrible. however, they get continually better and longer. so, if you keep reading, good. if not, o well.