My Story.. All ideas are strictly forbidden to be used.

[*Riley*]

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Chapter 1 ; Unknown Whispering.

The sun shone through the glass window of the lighthouse, this was her alarm every single morning , because in the town of Amity Park the days were never cold nor were the nights dark, light was like a burden that consumed the town..

Milly longed for winter , where the snow was white and the forest wood crackles away in the fireplace..

Outside the children of the town were having a water fight by the sea, the water guns splashed against the cottages of Amity Park, and inside the Adults were muttering excitedly about some political rubbish they heard on the news, only one adult joined the kids and that was Mayor Gough, he had the best gun which soaked the kids in one squirt.

Milly was not into that, she liked to read and write stories and read them to her little brother every night, she was a very imaginative girl, and regularly day dreamed of magical woodlands and cackling witches, she didn’t know that she was very close to creating that world herself.

On her desk sat a quill, a pot of ink, and parchment, she itched too write but her mother had laid down strict rules; no writing until she had done her chores.

As the washing dried in the everlasting sun and the dinner simmered on the oven, she crept into her room and started writing.

Goblins, Fairies, Witches and Giants was all she wrote about, in her stories wars among these creatures went on, and these were no ordinary wars, they were filled with magic and unspeakable horrors.

“Who’s there ?” she said nervously, just one second ago she heard whispering and giggling.

There it was again, and again.

“Milly, Milly, Milly” it seemed to be whispering, she looked everywhere but the only place left was her desk, she crept up cautiously, and peered at her paper, she gasped, there was moving pictures on the page.




Chapter 2 ; Read between the lines.

There they were, the Goblins, Fairies, Witches and even one confused giant, she always wrote about.

“Hello Milly Shufflin” A glimmering fairy said breaking the silence,
“How do you know my name?”

“Oh, we know everyone’s name, just yours in particular” it replied politely.
The questioning look on Milly’s face brought tears to the fairies eyes,
“You do not remember us ?” The witch finally spoke.

“Come, we will show you our world, and maybe or rather hopefully, you will remember”

With those last words, it felt as though an invisible hook had gripped her neck, she was spinning through a whirlwind of colours, then her feet hit solid ground, the shock of this sudden departure was too much for her, she felt light headed and dizzy.

The scene around her was spectacular, but remarkable at the same time,
“Remember?” asked the Fairy

“Yes, I do” She replied finally realizing.

This was the world she had made come to life, she wrote every detail in here, from every tree to every piece of dust, it was remarkable to finally see it not word for word, actually alive.

The trees swayed in the breeze, but wait there was no breeze , and the clouds were pictures of every thought she was thinking, they were forming a big question mark.

She smiled to herself, this day did end with dark and it did winter every now and then, it was like a dream that finally was real.
“Hem, Hem” coughed the fairy.

Milly turned around, she was not surprised to see that they were there, but was surprised when the witch and the giant started bickering.
“Well you made us land here, here ! of all places”

“Well you try and transport through a totally different dimension!” snapped back the witch.

“Will you help us Milly ? The one we knew so well and trusted, he has taken your winter away and bottled it, and taken it to a high security vault underground where the Elves guard.”

ANYONE LIKE IT ???? I WANt TO EDIT ALOT OF IT, I HAVN'T FINISHED YET BUT I JUST WANNA KNOW WHAT YOU THInK OF THE START ?

[FawkesthePhoenix]

*creeps forward and seizes manuscript of riley's story* now i can read this wonderful tale whenever i like! as long as you write more *steps menecingly towards riley* you will, won't you?

[*Riley*]

The light shone through the window of the lighthouse, warm rays awoke Millie instantly, she threw back the covers and raced outside to where the children of Amity Park were having water fights down by the sea, she smiled to herself, and walked back inside for she had chores to do.

As the clothes hung out in the sun, and dinner simmered on the oven, Millie sneaked off into her room and started to write stories of fantastic beasts and magical creatures.

Millie wasn’t like any other child, she didn’t exceed at sport nor did she know how to ride a bike, the thing she loved to do was sit in the quite of her room and write till her fingers were numb.

Her stories consisted of, fairies, goblins, elves, witches and a giant named Gaff.

Millie had a secret, no one knew not even her best friend Elisa had been told.

It was that every night her stories would come alive and pictures would dance across the paper, pictures of magic and wonder, colour would whirl around the pages, she thought this was because she was tired and just dreamt it, this same thing happened every night until Millie’s curiosity got the better of her.

This is where my story really begins.

Chapter 2 ; Unknown Voices.

“Millie, your father and I will be back at 7:00 , make sure dinner is ready” screeched her mother from downstairs.

“And don’t forget to hang the clothes out, feed your brother, make the beds, and if I find out you’ve been writing those time wasting stories, I will shred every book in this house up !”

Millie knew that this was a bluff because she didn’t have any books, they thought it was a time consuming activity when she could be outside playing with the other kids, the only time she went to play was when Elisa came down from England to visit.

Elisa had once lived in Amity Park, but she moved when her brother had been offered a scholarship at some fancy pants university.

As she sat down and heard the rumbling of the motor on her dad’s car, she was alone finally, well her brother was outside playing luckily so she found some time to write.

She would write stories no matter what her mother said, but these stories got better and better until finally it was dark.

As she lay in bed waiting for the whirl of rainbow and pictures, it didn’t come, but whispering and giggling followed a series of loud burps.

“Couldn’t you wait!” Snapped a voice she recognized at once as the witch from her stories.

“Sorry” Rumbled Gaff the giant.
“Psst Millie!”

Her heart leapt she had never spoken to them let alone see them in so much detail.

Who Likes This ? Do you like this or the other one better.. I need help !
& Ideas would help to, it's my other one but with MAJOR editing.

[choki]

u got a nice idea for a story
so Milly or Millie created a fairy world through her writing and is currently living within her creation? I like the introduction chapter 1 from the first post, and the chapter 2 from the edited version.

Somehow the original version didn't explain much and suddenly Millie was listening to the woes of the fairies and gonna help them in the rescue.

Do you want to add in more details such as Millie's physical appearance, the papers or book she wrote her story on? It will make your story more rounded.

[*Riley*]

Would anyone actually want another story that isn't anthing to do with the one above ?

My friends really like it, so if anyones interested I'll post it.

[magicboy]

i love it, i want more and i hope it rocks

[Wanderful]

What do you mean ? You hope it rocks??Oh, and this story is good, but I like your other ones more if you don't mind me saying.Milly-Amelia-Molly, you like your M's don't you ?

[salemboy]

I don't have the attention span to read books like yours. I need action from the first sentence, or I suddenly just go "Duhhh." There are very few exceptions, such as Harry Potter.

[*Riley*]

Heehee.
Then you'll like my other one..
Escaping dragons what shall we do!